Terrible Things
Summary
Alex is the loud popular boy with the amazing voice, but will the scarring events of the last three weeks of the first semester of senior year drive him crazy?
Warning: Triggers, out of date lyric, song and band placements and random as facts and personalities that are sooo not true.
Characters
Alex Gaskarth
Lead Singer of All Time Low
Carrie (Caroline) Peters
A quiet girl with a love for hair dye. Her mother died giving birth to her and her grandmother died a week later and her cousin committed suicide. (I don't own the picture nor do I know who it is. Go Google)
Emily Thorpe
15, massive fan of all the bands. Ley's younger sister.(The one on the right)
Jack Barakat
Lead Guitarist of All Time Low
Ley (Ashley) Thorpe
17, is big sister to Emily and massive fan of the bands in the fic. (The one on the left)
Mike Fuentes
Drummer for Pierce the Veil. Like a big brother to Carrie.
Rian Dawson
Drummer for All Time Low
Vic Fuentes
Lead Singer of Pierce The Veil. A big brother to Carrie.
Zack Merrick
Bassist for All Time Low
Chapters
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Just Write.
Carrie's POV
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Issues
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Touch
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My name is not Care Bear.
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Sirens
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Bring me closer.
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Fresh Scars
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Final Lyrics.
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Mistakes and knotted ropes.
TRIGGERING. MAJORLY TRIGGERING. BE CAREFUL.
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Fucking Sundays.
TRIGGER
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New Beginnings and Tacos.
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Warped
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Electricity.
SUPER TRIGGERING
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Hot Topic and Hair dye
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Leave.
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I don't believe.
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Again with the Care-Bear.
Alex's POV
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Fight for her.
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Move on.
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Start Again
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I'll Be Waiting.
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Band sluts and murder.
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Chloe's Smile.
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Fuck off, Merrick.
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Torn
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Scream.
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Silence.
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TERRIBLE THINGS PART TWO
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Terrible Things and Raven's Games
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Telling the unwanted.
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Kids?
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Party Scene.
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It's like practice, Alex.
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Trouble.
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Statements
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This time for real.
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Trials
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Unexpected Visitors
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Double up.
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Womanizer.
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BLOCKED
This story is so good! OMG. I just found it and started reading it yesterday, and haven't stopped. I just caught up with all of the updates you have of it and really love it.
It's a very dark fan fic. Specifically with the first half, honestly one of the darkest I've read actually... like with that curse of everything happening on Sundays? Man... and you just kind of kept it up too. It was just very dark, and sad, but... different. And I really like that about this.
The second half seems to be deviating from that a little bit, but I sensed that coming back with the babies thing. I mean, not that I want anything to happen, but I almost feel you had something bad happening planned with the pregnancy. Perhaps not, perhaps that was just to raise some of the tone as opposed to keeping it happy go lucky, who knows. But I found it interesting how you did that.
I'm glad that Alex and Carrie finally got together, with the first part of this I was just screaming GET TOGETHER until they finally did. lol. And I was happy. :)
I found it a bit odd how they just took in those fans though. On a realistic writing level, the oddity of this story was the curse thing. But adding the fans thing in too, it just... it didn't really fit. Especially considering legalities and all of that. I feel like it was a little too easy that they gained guardianship.
But overall, I have enjoyed Alex and Carrie's love story. I'm sad to see it was never finished, so I'm leaving this comment to let you know if you ever do choose to finish it, I will be here to read, for sure. I'd love to see how it all ends for these two. Even if it's just a final chapter wrap up or something; I understand what it's like losing inspiration.
But yeah, sorry if this comment sounded harsh at all, but just wanted to leave my honest thoughts. I think you're a truly great writer, though, and hope you have at least kept up with it in your free time. :)
7/12/16