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Your Favorite Enemy

Summary

Maxine Caldwell is the high strung and incredibly smart niece of Matt Flyzik, joining him and the band for the summer as an apprenticeship for college. She quickly befriends everyone, except for Alex. But why?

Characters

Alex Gaskarth

Alex Gaskarth

Has a hard time getting along with Maxine. Teases her constantly.

Jack Barakat

Jack Barakat

Becomes good friends with Maxine and brotherly figure. Helps her deal with Alex

Matt Flyzik

Matt Flyzik

Maxine's uncle. Brings her on ATL tour as an apprenctice

Maxine Caldwell

Maxine Caldwell

Highstrung and intelligent niece of Matt Flyzik, constantly battles with Alex and develops a love-hate relationship with him

Chapters

Comments

So I just read this story, all in one sitting, and seriously loved it. You're a really great writer. :)
Alex and Max's relationship was so sincere, and even though the end was kind of surprising, I found it perfect in a way. Like one of my favorite endings I've ever read to a fic, actually. Instead of very cliche it more so fit the pieces together, if that makes sense.
I really loved it. If you ever choose to maybe rewrite this story, or perhaps do a sequel to it, I will definitely read. I looked on your profile and unfortunately you don't seem to have anymore Alex/OC centered stories. But if you ever write a new one of those, feel free to let me know as well.
One of the better stories I've read in a while, great job with it. :)

Nanook Nanook
3/6/17

@tradethatheartofgold
We really need to get are collab going xD

fawksee fawksee
3/18/14

@Billie Joe Gaskarth You're lovely. Thank you <3

tradethatheartofgold tradethatheartofgold
3/17/14

No leave it as it is, you may think it can be improved but so can everything, start a new one then you can look back and see how you've developed as a writer :) just personal opinion though ;)

Billie Joe Gaskarth Billie Joe Gaskarth
3/17/14

@fawksee ilysm <3




tradethatheartofgold tradethatheartofgold
3/14/14
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