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No leave it as it is, you may think it can be improved but so can everything, start a new one then you can look back and see how you've developed as a writer :) just personal opinion though ;)
Oh my god. Just... oh my god. I'm practically speechless other than the fact that I could rant on for hours about this story. I'm always timid to read fanfiction these days because not a lot of people are really actually good at writing anymore. But I absolutely loved this, and that's saying a lot cause I'm a bitch critic. x) I wanna make sweet passionate love to your brain in thanks for this wonderful read. <3 AND IF YOU COULD, when you have a moment, message me? :) I have a question or twoo~ please and thank you!
I just finished reading the entire story and it's amazing! Such a sad but smart ending. Good luck with the rest of your fanfictions! C:
Thank you so much for your review! That helps a lot. And don't you worry about Maxine and Alex. It will all work out. :)
Okay, bitch!! Jk. But seriously what the fuck. You get me all like yeah!! Smut, Maxine, Alex!! Then you fucking break them up?! Humph!! You better fix them.
So I just read this story, all in one sitting, and seriously loved it. You're a really great writer. :)
Alex and Max's relationship was so sincere, and even though the end was kind of surprising, I found it perfect in a way. Like one of my favorite endings I've ever read to a fic, actually. Instead of very cliche it more so fit the pieces together, if that makes sense.
I really loved it. If you ever choose to maybe rewrite this story, or perhaps do a sequel to it, I will definitely read. I looked on your profile and unfortunately you don't seem to have anymore Alex/OC centered stories. But if you ever write a new one of those, feel free to let me know as well.
One of the better stories I've read in a while, great job with it. :)
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