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Your Favorite Enemy

Chapter 13: Return the Favor

My eyes flickered open, and I suddenly realized I was face to face with Alex in the closed quarters of a bunk, his warm breath hitting my face. I could feel my cheeks redden and I bit my lip as I remembered the heated make out session he and I had on his bunk the previous night...which may or may not have led to his hand down the front of my pants, causing me to elicit sounds I never knew I could make. I sighed, taking time to enjoy his closeness before I really had to get up.
Soon after, his brown eyes opened and stared contentedly into my blue ones, a smile on his face. “Hey, Max,” he said lowly, his gravelly morning voice sending chills up my spine.
“Hey, good morning,” I replied and bravely placed a peck on his mouth, only for him to pout as I pulled away. I looked at him, slightly confused.
“I need a little more of you to wake me up. C’mere.” He whispered, and launched us into another make out session, his kissing hungry and urgent.
“Okay, kids. Break it up, it’s time for breakfast.” Jack bellowed, kicking the base of the bunk to startle us.
“But I don’t wanna,” Alex said in a fake whine before he grinned at me. “You hungry?” I nodded vigorously and we climbed out, meeting everyone out in the living room. No one seemed to notice we were wearing the clothes from the day before, except much more wrinkled.
“We’re having breakfast in the hotel restaurant, courtesy of the hotel owners.” Matt mentioned excitedly, a wide grin spread across his face.
“That means endless coffee and waffles galore, ladies,” Zack cut in loudly.
Quick as a flash, Jack was out the door at the mention of waffles, shouting and running toward the hotel. I giggled and shook my head, slipping on a pair of flip flops and following Jack to the breakfast buffet. Alex caught up to me as I strolled toward the building, intertwining his fingers with mine.
“Alex, I was thinking,” I commented.
“Dear god! Phone the police! Max is thinking.” he joked, complete with fake horror.
I laughed and lightly punched him in the arm. “No, you dick. I was just thinking about last night and-”
“I went too far, didn’t I? Shit, I knew I should have stopped,” he said, running his free hand through his hair nervously.
“If you’d stop interrupting me, I can tell you that you didn’t,” I replied with a sigh. “We’ll be in the hotel tonight, and I was hoping we could...continue.”
Alex seemed to be shocked. “Are you sure? I mean, it’s your virginity. That’s a big thing.”
“I know, and it’s supposed to feel good. I felt damn spectacular with you last night,” I mentioned with a grin.
“Well that’s all the motivation I need,” he replied with a wink, and we were finally inside the hotel dining area. Jack was already sitting at the long table, dousing his waffles with syrup and munching on bacon.
I got my plate and piled food onto it, realizing for the first time how hungry I really was. I sat across from Jack, Alex next to me, and soon everyone filed into chairs. Matt passed out room keys and explained how we’d have to take our stuff to our rooms after breakfast, but we were free to do whatever the rest of the day.
“So,” Jack said suddenly, a cheeky grin plastered on his face. “How did you guys sleep last night?”
I rolled my eyes playfully. “Honestly, Jack, jealousy doesn’t suit you well.”
A small chorus of “Oh!” erupted amongst the boys and Jack looked at me with an eyebrow raised. “You think I was jealous? Ha! I can make Alex moan harder than you can.”
“OH MY GOD. Guys! We are in public. Please stop talking like that,” Matt cut in, obviously annoyed.
“Okay Dad,” I joked before turning to Jack and sticking my tongue out at him. He grinned in response, and then returned to scarfing down his breakfast.
After eating, we all went out to the bus and dragged our luggage to our hotel rooms. I was just about finished with mine when Alex waltzed into my room. “The boys and I are going to go play football at some park nearby. Are you going to come watch us?”
I smiled. “Sure. I guess I could use a little sun.”
Alex stepped closer, his face inches from mine, and caught my lips with his. Running his tongue along my bottom lip, I granted him entrance. His fingers hooked into my belt loops and drew me closer to him. He pulled away. “Consider that a sneak peak.”
We made our way back downstairs to the lobby where everyone was waiting. Our large group walked to a park not far away, and the boys immediately divided into teams while Matt and I sat in the shade. There was shirts team and a skins, and I was lucky enough for Alex to be put on skins.
He pulled his shirt over his head and shot me a wink before they began playing. I had never been a huge fan of football, but I watched them with interest anyway. I couldn’t help but stare at Alex, my thoughts constantly wandering to what was to come. Of course, him being shirtless didn’t help at all.
We stayed at the park until well after 9, then we all went out to dinner and headed back to the hotel. Alex and I seemed to drag a little behind everyone as they went into their rooms, and once the hallway was clear and we neared his room, he started to get handsy, which I didn’t really mind.
We had barely made it through the door and shut it before he had me firmly pressed against the wall, kissing me hungrily. He paused only to place feverish kisses up and down my neck and along my collarbone, and then continuing with no abandon on my mouth.
"You’re sure you want to do this?" He asked in a low gravelly voice that drove me crazy with lust. I nodded vigorously and he picked me up swiftly, and guided me to the bed, laying me down hurriedly.
"Okay, you’re positive, right? Because if we go much further, I’m not sure I can stop myself." He whispered and stared into my eyes from his position that required his body to blanket mine. It exhilarated me to feel the bulge against my inner thigh, it let me feel, and know that he wanted me right then and there just like I did for him.
I slid my slightly sweaty hands under his shirt, looking away from his face, and I felt around. As I started to pull his shirt over his head, I giggled and he said, "I take that as a yes." He dove back to my lips, pushing so tight against me there almost wasn’t any room to breathe.
I initiated the tongue as he pulled me up to a sitting position, unbuttoning my shirt with his quick fingers and letting it fall off. He shoved me back down to kiss down my stomach and he yanked off my jeans. He kissed back up to my mouth, and he hurriedly unhooked my bra and pulled off my underwear as I simultaneously pulled off his pants and boxer briefs.
He slowly pried my legs apart with his big, warm hand. "Are you ready, baby?" He whispered lustily, endearingly. The breath seemed to catch in my throat as he said this, so I simply nodded, a mischievous grin crossing his features.
He was being far too slow so I wrapped my legs around his waist to pull him closer and jokingly said, "Hurry up." A huge smirk broke across his face and he kissed me deeply as he thrust himself inside of me enthusiastically, causing me to gasp.
And as we continued (twice, might I add), I realized just how amazing it felt to get such feelings, purely by his presence alone. It also occurred to me that that's all wanted for my first time, and in a significant other.
Exhaustion overcame the both of us, and Alex collapsed beside me on the bed. He wrapped his arm around my waist and pulling me closer to him, heat radiating from the both of us. “Good night,” he whispered, and I slowly drifted off to sleep, content with my night alongside Alex.

Notes

Credit is due to my beautiful friend Jenna for staying up until 3 in the morning helping me with this chapter. I couldn't have done it without you! :)

Comments

So I just read this story, all in one sitting, and seriously loved it. You're a really great writer. :)
Alex and Max's relationship was so sincere, and even though the end was kind of surprising, I found it perfect in a way. Like one of my favorite endings I've ever read to a fic, actually. Instead of very cliche it more so fit the pieces together, if that makes sense.
I really loved it. If you ever choose to maybe rewrite this story, or perhaps do a sequel to it, I will definitely read. I looked on your profile and unfortunately you don't seem to have anymore Alex/OC centered stories. But if you ever write a new one of those, feel free to let me know as well.
One of the better stories I've read in a while, great job with it. :)

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3/6/17

@tradethatheartofgold
We really need to get are collab going xD

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3/18/14

@Billie Joe Gaskarth You're lovely. Thank you <3

No leave it as it is, you may think it can be improved but so can everything, start a new one then you can look back and see how you've developed as a writer :) just personal opinion though ;)

@fawksee ilysm <3