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The Fire in my Heart

Summary

Devon Cline doesn't have the easiest life. He takes care of his little brother, and his job doesn't pay all that much. Things couldn't get harder for him, could it?

He's proven wrong when a normal drinking night turns into something that changes his life forever.

Secrets.

Lies.

Love.

What has he gotten himself into?

I do not own All Time Low, but I do own Devon and his little brother, Daren.

Chapters

Comments

@BringMeBarakat
That's very much too. I feel like that's why I've been neglecting my stories with this one that I came up with with the help of my stepsister. There are so many chapters planned out, and I already know what's happening after it. Most of the time, I know what it's leading up too, but I'm not good with fillers. Actually, I started a story last week, and I can't bring myself to finish chapter two . It's really annoying just like with one of my other stories. I have a lot planned for it, but I don't want to rush into it.

QueenDes QueenDes
2/5/14

@QueenDes
I don't think that writing the three chapters to finish it up would be a very good idea, because it would probably make it seem really rushed. I honestly would re-read it if you changed it, and knowing that you know where you want it to go is a huge bonus, because I know how much it sucks to get stuck with a story, that's why I plan mine out before I even start.
You should just do what you want to do with it, not let anyone sway or influence your choices :)

@BringMeBarakat
I think that I'm going to do just that. I had put the "Attention" message on my Mibba as well, but I was told to take it down. (I sent a message complaining about the rules since I'm just like that.) However, I did get a comment on that one telling me to go ahead and change it.
If everyone really wants, I can write two or three more chapters. The only other things that I had left to write was Rian and Zack finding out about Devon, a smut chapter, and Devon's story being revealed.
The rewrite will be as close as possible to this. In fact, Chapter 1 and 2 will be the same with only slight changes. The only difference would be that ATL isn't famous in it and they actually went to college.
Anyway, I'm happy that you gave me your opinion, and I can finish this story up if you really want me to. I don't know when exactly because I have some other stories to be update first. I'm just getting back into the swing of all of my stories.

QueenDes QueenDes
2/4/14

Aw I like this story and it would be strange of you changed it...but if it's bugging you that much then you should change it, it's your story after all ^^

ugh im sorry i havent messaged you yet. each time i tried my phone spazzed out.
ErinElliot ErinElliot
8/17/13