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The Fire in my Heart

Thank God for Alcohol

Devon arrives at his destination and makes his way to the stool that he always sits in only to find that someone else is sitting in it. Devon frowns a little and sits two stools away. Who gave this guy permission to sit in his spot? Hell, his name is actually written on it because he got really drunk one night and wrote it there. The brunette turns his head to look at this person that decided to take his spot.
He’s a lot taller than Devon since Devon is only 5’8”. This guy looks like he could be about 6’1 1/2”. The feature on his face that sticks out like a brick is his huge nose. Devon almost felt bad for him for having such a big ass nose. Almost. The lanky man’s eyes are rather big too. They are dark brown and the ends went at a downward angle. Another thing about his eyes are his long eyelashes. Since when is it normal for a guy’s eyelashes too be that long. There are so many girls out there that want those kind of lashes without having to use mascara. Devon is really almost feeling bad for this guy. Almost. The guy’s hair is really outgoing. It’s a dark brown with a chunk of blond in it and styled in a mohawk like fashion. His clothing consists of black skinny jeans that look like they’re girl jeans, a blink-182 shirt, and a black jacket. Is there anything else about this guy that doesn’t bring attention to him? He sticks out like a sore thumb in a place like this. Devon almost wants to go over there and tell him to get off his stool and that he doesn’t belong here, but Devon doesn’t like attention. He hopes that someone will tell him to get the hell out of here though.
The man with glasses shakes his head and asks the bartender for a beer. As soon as he speaks, he can feel the eyes of the annoying man on him. Did he really have to stare at him? What gives him the right to even look at him? He really wishes someone would slap some sense into this guy. The guy finally stops staring at Devon when he gets his beer from the bartender. Of course the guy is still glances at him as he starts to talk to the bartender, who has started to become a friend over the time that he’s come.
The bartender is a rather cute girl that looks like she should never step foot in a place like this. Her skin is flawless, and her makeup isn’t too much and not too less. Her hair is jet black and is held in a braid that goes all the way past her chest. Since there is no dress code, she’s wearing a black T-shirt and purple skinny jeans. He knows that she’s wearing flats since she always wears them. He also knows that the locket that she wears around her neck was a gift from her sister that died in a car crash shortly afterward.
“How’s Daren doing?” the bartender, Marie, asks.
“He’s doing good,” Devon answers before taking a sip of his drink.
“Isn’t his birthday coming up?”
“Yep, it’s just a couple of weeks away.”
“Do you know what you’re going to get him?”
“I’m not sure because I might get him something before his birthday.”
“What would that be?”
“A girl from his class lent him a CD, and he wants me to get him their CDs.”
“What band?”
“I think they were called All Time Low or something like that.” Devon can feel the other man finally turn his head away from him completely.
“I think I’ve heard of them, but I haven’t listened to them.”
“They’re pretty good.”
“Well, I’m happy that you’re brother has the same taste in music as you.”
“Yeah. It would suck if he was into any of that hip hop crap. I’d have to have headphones in all the time, and we’d never get to hang out.”
She laughed. “You’re such a pessimist.”
“Yeah, but it does make sense with the luck I’ve had.”
“True. True. Anyway, I’m going to leave you to your drinking.”
Drinking is exactly what Devon is doing. He’s downing a lot more shots than normal. Most of the time, he just has a couple of beers and has Marie take him home, since she’s kind of his friend. Actually if it wasn’t for the fact that he’s not one to get close to people, they would be friends, maybe even best friends.
“Hey,” a male voice says.
Devon turns his head to find that the annoying lanky guy is sitting right next to him now. A sober Devon would probably flip him off and walk away, but Devon is nowhere near sober.
“Hey,” he says back.
“You’re pretty good looking.” By the way the other guy is slurring his words, it’s obvious that he has also had one too many drinks.
“I’d say the same thing about you, but your nose is huge.” Devon giggles.
“That’s not the only part of me that’s huge.” The other guy smirks.
“Oh really?”
“Of course. I’m famous for it.”
“I don’t believe you.”
“Well, maybe I should show you.”
“I kind of like that idea. Wanna come to my place?”
“Sure.”
“Devon,” Marie starts as she comes over to them, “you’re way too drunk. I’m going to call you a cab, ok?”
“Fine.” Even drunk Devon knows better than to drive.
The shorter haired man takes the other by the wrist and drags him outside. The taller one leans down and starts nipping at Devon neck as they wait for the cab. His hips thrusting down on him slowly. It doesn’t take long for the cab to arrive. The two get in the back. Devon tells the driver his address before the taller is grabbing his chin and smashing his lips on Devon’s. The two start heavily making out. Tongues are dancing together and hands are palming the other.
When they arrive, Devon throws the money into the front and gets out with the other right behind him. The two stumble their way up the stairs and find their way to Devon’s apartment. It takes a couple of tries to get the keys in because of the fact the taller one is still nipping at his neck and definitely leaving marks.
As soon as the door is open, Devon drags the other man into his room and pushes him onto the bed. He quickly crawls on top of him and starts to assault his neck. Payback time. Moans escape from the lips of the man below him. The delicious sounds are turning Devon on more and more. It’s now completely obvious how he’s feeling just by looking at the bulge in his jeans.
“I’m Jack by the way,” the man tells him.
“Devon.”
Devon crashes his lips on Jack’s, and the two of them are grinding, but there is no way that they are going to get off just by doing that. Devon sits up and takes his shirt off as Jack does the same thing. Devon’s mouth is now making contact with Jack’s left nipple. His teeth bite down on it and suck for a little bit. He starts to trail down the other man with open mouthed kisses.
When he gets to the waistband of his jeans, he looks up at the panting Jack and then undoes the belt. Devon gets Jack’s pants and boxers off and looks at the other’s dick. He wasn’t kidding. He is big, but he’s not so big that it’s weird. Jack’s the size that’s perfect. It almost reminds Devon of Goldilocks. That’s what you get when you’ve had to take care of your younger brother.
Devon quickly sheds his clothes and then licks a stripe up Jack’s length. He tongues the slit before taking him in his mouth. Devon moans. He hasn’t been with a guy in so long that he almost forgot how much of a cumslut he can be. Although he doesn’t want to just end it with a blowjob though. He wants to make this last. It’s not like he’s going to be with another guy in some time.
The shorter man stops sucking in order to change position. He moves his body so the two of them are in his favorite position. 69. He takes Jack back into his mouth as Jack does the same thing to him. Finally, Devon is in pure heaven. He takes Jack lower and lower each time until he can’t go any farther. His hand strokes where his hand won’t reach. The shorter man moans around Jack’s length when he feels Jack licking at his balls. He thrusts into Jack’s mouth further, and surprisingly, he doesn’t gag. He just moans.
Of course, Devon doesn’t want this pleasure to stop, but he also wants more. He takes a finger and circles Jack’s entrance before pushing it in. Jack stops sucking, but he’s not in pain even though it went in dry. Devon is quick to put a second finger in. Jack doesn’t make any sign of pain. The fact that this hot guy is sucking his dick and the alcohol is preventing it from hurting too bad. Devon starts to suck harder for a second before taking his mouth off of Jack and taking his fingers out. What he does next, Jack thinks is really fucking hot and can’t believe he found a guy like this. Devon takes his fingers and puts them in his mouth in order to get them wet because he knows that the third finger is going to have to be wet if he really wants to stretch without hurting him. Jack moans just from the sight. Devon puts all three fingers in and goes back to sucking Jack’s dick.
When he feels like he’s stretch him enough, he gets up and grabs a condom and a bottle of lube from the bedside drawer. Devon puts the condom on and pushes Jack’s legs apart and up. He takes the bottle and puts some in his hand before lubing his dick up. He still has some left on his hand, so he rubs it on Jack’s entrance. Devon positions himself with his hand and then he is pushing into Jack. He doesn’t stop until he is balls deep. Jack yelps and his face shows pain, but it goes away faster than normal. Thank God for alcohol.
As soon as Jack wraps his legs around his waist, Devon starts to pound into the taller man. Jack starts moaning right away. He never thought that bottoming would feel so good, but everything feels like heaven when Devon hits that sweet spot inside of him. He screams out in pleasure.
“Right there! Harder! Fuck!”
Devon continues his assault on Jack’s prostate. It doesn’t take long before both of the men are close. They both wish that it would last longer, but they both had a feeling that it wouldn’t be as long as they hoped because of the blowjobs they gave each other. Jack is the first to let go. Devon didn’t even have to touch him. Jack’s cum covers his and Devon’s chest. Jack’s already tight ass becomes even tighter and too much for Devon. He releases into the condom and continues to thrust until he is done. After this, he pulls out and throws the condom into the trash can next to his bed. Devon looks over at Jack one last time before he falls asleep. Devon may think that his nose is huge and his eyelashes are way too feminine, but Jack is kind of cute.

Notes

I hope you all enjoyed that. That was the best smut scene I've ever written. I'm normally really tired when I have to write them, but I'm wide awake. Damn. This is also a long chapter too compared to my others. So even if you don't like it, I'm proud. I'm also going to be updating this story on Wednesdays or Thursdays after midnight. I always right at night.
I wonder how things are going to go in the morning. Hmmmmm. Well, let's just say that that last line isn't going to matter much until later.

Comments

@BringMeBarakat
That's very much too. I feel like that's why I've been neglecting my stories with this one that I came up with with the help of my stepsister. There are so many chapters planned out, and I already know what's happening after it. Most of the time, I know what it's leading up too, but I'm not good with fillers. Actually, I started a story last week, and I can't bring myself to finish chapter two . It's really annoying just like with one of my other stories. I have a lot planned for it, but I don't want to rush into it.

QueenDes QueenDes
2/5/14

@QueenDes
I don't think that writing the three chapters to finish it up would be a very good idea, because it would probably make it seem really rushed. I honestly would re-read it if you changed it, and knowing that you know where you want it to go is a huge bonus, because I know how much it sucks to get stuck with a story, that's why I plan mine out before I even start.
You should just do what you want to do with it, not let anyone sway or influence your choices :)

@BringMeBarakat
I think that I'm going to do just that. I had put the "Attention" message on my Mibba as well, but I was told to take it down. (I sent a message complaining about the rules since I'm just like that.) However, I did get a comment on that one telling me to go ahead and change it.
If everyone really wants, I can write two or three more chapters. The only other things that I had left to write was Rian and Zack finding out about Devon, a smut chapter, and Devon's story being revealed.
The rewrite will be as close as possible to this. In fact, Chapter 1 and 2 will be the same with only slight changes. The only difference would be that ATL isn't famous in it and they actually went to college.
Anyway, I'm happy that you gave me your opinion, and I can finish this story up if you really want me to. I don't know when exactly because I have some other stories to be update first. I'm just getting back into the swing of all of my stories.

QueenDes QueenDes
2/4/14

Aw I like this story and it would be strange of you changed it...but if it's bugging you that much then you should change it, it's your story after all ^^

ugh im sorry i havent messaged you yet. each time i tried my phone spazzed out.
ErinElliot ErinElliot
8/17/13