To the Moon and Back - Comments, page 4

Yay, there's hope! Perhaps Alex can find her. :D
I was wondering why he didn't go after her as well, until he pointed the facts out. Haha. Those are kind of important, huh? XD But I'm glad Marky came to the rescue, yessss.
Excited to see where the next one picks up.
In response to your comment...
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Yeah, I think they're trying to adapt to what's more radio-play. It's smart, I just hope they don't divert too much with the album. But I like the single. It's very vibe-y.
And yeah, the record label change I think again deals with them wanting to expand the fanbase. Hopefully it'll work out for them. :)

@Nanook
I'm so glad you like the new chapters, yes, sometimes one decision can bring a lot of problems. They would probably already been dating if he would have gone back immediately, but sometimes things just don't work out straight away.
As for the new single. Definitely not what i expected, kind of a different sound, like more EDM than pop punk but very catchy and I find myself humming it under my breath so many times.
Also very surprised they left Hopeless Records and are now with Fuelled by Ramen. Like 21 pilots and Panic at the Disco!, so maybe that's part of the musical change as well.

OMG. So much has happened.
Sorry for the delay in commenting, girl. But great job with the updates!
I'm glad the police officer was nice and told him the general info. And then Jack, yay! I'm glad he knows and was still willing to help Alex out. That's what best friends are for! :D
But I'm so sad Alex wasn't able to get to her in time. :( But he at least saw her, so Sharky knows her was trying at least.
Hoping for a new chapter in Sharky's POV soon. Idk what you have planned, but it's been a minute since we've gotten her thoughts, so I'd like to know what's going through her head and all.
But loved the new chapters, and can't wait to see what happens next! :O Wondering what will happen now that she's in Australia...
Like Newyork_xo said, this is heartbreaking and I just hope it'll get happy again. :'( Because he finally could be with her but now she's being taken away. I can understand his guilt though, and am a bit frustrated that he waited to go see her instead of going straight away. Could have potentially prevented all of this. :(
And as for real-life ATL, YAAASSSS, the new single. <3 What do you think of it?

@Newyork_xo
I promise it might take a while but it's gonna get better !

Aww, this is heartbreaking!

Welll. This is definitely their worst nightmare come true!

@Nanook
Oh boy oh boy, can Alex find her? Let's see.....:)

@Newyork_xo
I hope so too, now that Alex would be free, it could all be perfect!

:O OH NO.
They must have caught her. And since she's an alien... oh boy.
Great job with the update! Very emotional, edge-of-your-seat type stuff. :O
Can't wait to see what's next in store. :)

Oh crap. I hope she's okay!!!

lol, that makes sense. Personally I think some of the scenes would probably better suit the LA type atmosphere, but it's your choice. As long as you rework it it'll make more sense, lol.
Yes! He's free! lol, but mentally after that happened I was screaming "Go to Sharky!" But he didn't. :( I'm surprised he's waiting, lol.
Great job with the update, though. Surprised that Lisa was cheating on him. :O
Can't wait for more! :)

@Nanook
I admit I had planned the story to be located in LA but somehow switched it to Baltimore I don't really remember why, so some things aren't consistent, I might correct that when I rework it. :)

Oooh... this chapter was interesting.
Definitely different than anything I've read before. In fact, I don't think I've ever read anything like this in a story. So kudos to being unique.
It was very intimate.
And as for the beginning, literally swatting away metaphorically at Jack like a fly right now, lol. Maybe Alex should tell him so he stops pestering. Or maybe have Sharky tell him she's not interested in him like that. I wonder how Jack would react if he knew of the things she's put Alex through, lol. Would he even be able to handle it? XD
But great job with the update, overall. :)
Oh, and one thing I wanted to mention... because this whole time, I was thinking they were in California for some reason. The thing that confused me is that they've gone to the beach in this story. Baltimore is a city and doesn't easily have beaches near it without a bit of a drive. I mean, there's the harbor but even an insane person wouldn't swim in it, lol, it's so polluted.
But just trying to think a bit logically for the story. Perhaps it would be better to set it in California. And it would make sense since it seems like Alex and Jack for the most part live there now, lol.

@Nanook
There it is ;)

Oh, gotcha. That makes sense, then.
Aw, I feel bad for Sharky. I don't think she's unjustified for her feelings at all, it is Alex that is causing her to be upset. If only he would figure his feelings out. Man.
Her actions are a bit drastic at times but I think it's because it's the only way she knows how to deal with things. :/
It is sweet how she's waiting for him, though. That was a lot for him to ask and the fact that she already is... aww...
Great job with the update. Can't wait for the next!

@Newyork_xo
Lol :)))

Alex better figure things out with his girlfriend before he influences Charlie's bad behavior further and she jumps off a bridge.

@Nanook
When I wrote the part with the hair I thought of the picture I chose in the intro as well but I felt she should have longer hair, so yeah maybe imagine time has passed and her hair has grown.
Glad you still like it.

Great job with the updates! :D
I liked how they went tagging, Alex finally got a piece of the rush Sharky must go through most of the time.
I think Alex should tell Jack what's going on. Or break up with Lisa. Or both. XD I mean, obviously it's not fair to her how he feels more strongly towards Sharky, and she still has no idea what's going on. And you can tell he would rather be with her, so what's holding him back from doing that? And then he wouldn't upset Sharky.
And then as for the Jack thing, that would actually get him to back off, lol. I mean, maybe.
Hoping Sharky doesn't make any mistakes with Austin just because she's upset. :(
One thing I wanted to point out that was a bit confusing:
Her hair was untangled and flowed around her face in big golden curls.
She has 'big golden curls', yet on the main story page with the character pictures she has short blonde hair. So how does she have curls? Was a bit confused on what I should be envisioning. Or has more time passed and her hair has been expected to grow out? Idk, just trying to make sense of your description and the depiction of her character.
But on another random note, I love how she went to that party with no shoes and no one cared, lol, just dismissed it. XD
'No Diggity' is a jam. :) That moment she was dancing reminded me of 'Lost in Stereo' but I guess that was just ironic since at this point this is more current day ATL, with 'Edge of Tonight' already referenced.
Ooh, and it got a bit steamy at the end there, but yeah, I agree with Sharky. Alex needs to figure out what he wants. I would love for him to just finally realize he needs to break it off with his girlfriend and be with her. Alas...
Can't wait for the next one! :)

@Newyork_xo
Yeah them silly boys want to have it all! That's not okay!