To the Moon and Back - Comments, page 2

That was a risky joke Charlie played on Alex, but maybe it was karma coming back to him for the Rian joke he played on Jack. I can't wait to see how things go with Charlie back in LA and I hope Jack doesn't stay mad at Alex too long.

Interesting update, haha.
Yeah, there seems to be an underlying anger there with Jack still even after telling him about the joke... I would be cautious with that idea though. The reason I say that is, that you don't want this story blending too much into the concept with Dark Affairs. Up until this point, there wasn't really much hint of Jack's feelings there. And it's a bit odd, considering Jack had a thing for Sharky; he can like both, but before this he didn't really express anything with Alex.
You can do whatever you want, and I'll still read, but just a tidbit of advice. It may not even end up being that big of a thing, but just wanted to comment on it and just note that you should proceed with that idea with caution.
But as for Sharky... yay! :D Her and Alex can be reunited again! So happy! :D Mean how she messed with him; I was falling for that too before she revealed it. lol. And Alex about flipped a lid when she joked that she had to sleep with someone. XD OMG.
Great job with the update, though! Can't wait for the next!
Oh, and side-note, every time I read the title of this story in my head... it makes me think of the song "Around the World and Back" by State Champs. lol. Probably because of the "and Back" part it has in common. Idk. XD But it's a cute song like this story is cute. :D So it relates. Haha.

Ugh, I know how that is. :( Main reason I haven't written on this site, actually, lol.
I've thought about it but my writer's block usually always comes into play without fail and it's the worst. And then I never usually end up finishing stories. It gets really bad, ergo why I haven't even tried on here, lol.
But hoping it does get better for you girl. :)

@Nanook
Thanks for asking, yeah I have been busy but also writing has been a struggle lately, nothing turns out the way I want it, hope it gets better soon.

Yay, an update! Great job with the chapter! :D
lol, I love how Alex got jealous of the surfer dude, found that really entertaining. Got all defensive and asking about him right away. XD
I'm glad that Charlie's alright, and hope things go well so that they can be reunited again. Also loved that little prank on Jack at the end, LMAO. He actually thought he was serious.
One thing I spotted:
I get all sentimental and are about to cry as well.
Just watch the tense here, "are" should be "am". Using "are" usually hints to more than one person, and it's just Alex you are talking about here. :) Nothing big.
Hope everything is okay with you, noticed your updates haven't been as frequent. :/ Not sure if it's just personal stuff or maybe you're facing writer's block? Here if you need to talk though. <3
But going back to the story, can't wait to see what's next in store! :)

Ahhh, I hope everything goes well at the embassy. I just want her back in the States with Alex so he stops being so crazy.

I enjoyed Alex's little prank on Jack. Jack's probably jealous of Rian now! :-P

Aww, what a terrible dream! Thank goodness for Rian. Glad he's come around yo be there for Alex right now when he really needs it.

D'awww... Rian cuddles. Poor Alex for having that nightmare. :( He's just worried about Sharky, can't blame him.
Two things I noted (seriously let me know if I'm getting annoying lol):
I rip my feet off the ground and start to run again, my sides are hurting so much but I don't care, I can't stop and risk loosing her.
Ugh, a pet peeve. It should be "losing" instead of "loosing." lol. That might've just been a spelling error, though. Loosing is as if you're un-tightening something, and then losing is just that... losing a loved one. No longer having a grip on something. You probably already know this, but explaining just in case lol.
I start to run towards he screaming her name.
This one's smaller and I'm pretty sure was just a spelling error in this case. It's pretty obvious so I won't point it out any further.
But other than that, didn't spot anything else. Great job with the update! Bit of a filler but it shows us how much Alex is worrying about her which is sweet. :) Can't wait for more!

lol. Hmm... okay then. XD
Loved the new chapter! Glad to see that they were able to work it out. :D Charlie is way too good for him. ;)
And now she's trying to get back at him. XD I fail to see how this is totally getting back at him, though, when she wants to see him too and I think the sooner they're together again, the better (relationship wise). But idk just my thought. I just want them together again. XD :(
Can't wait to see what you have next in store, though. Once again, great job with the chapter! :D

WTF.
You make Alex cheat and with someone with my same name no less. :( Ugh, what a chapter.
But great job with it, even though it aggravated me. LMAO. But seriously, c'mon Alex. Get your shit together. But I guess I gotta give him kudos for stopping.
And lol, Sharky continuing on with her antics. I know it was being taken really seriously but I just laughed and am not surprised. XD
I wonder how she's going to take it. :/ At first I thought when she was hiding something, you were going to do that same thing again, where she was going to say she kissed someone too like Alex did, lol. Guess that was too predictable to do though. :P
Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Oh Alex. You big dummy!

@Nanook
Thank you! I thought it was a bit of a filler chapter but still needed it to get the story to move along.

@Newyork_xo
Yes, Alex is a bit of a drama queen, here!

Aww, yay, the talk with Rian went really well. :D Happy that it did.
Now it's just getting Zack on board, but maybe once he sees that Rian is, that'll help convince him a bit. :)
Great job with the update! Just one thing to note:
But if you continue to be so cute. I will have to cuddle you to death when I'm there."
Here you probably could've just made this all one sentence, instead of two. So it would involve putting a comma instead of a period, lol. So not really that big of a deal, but just want to help you with the lines going smoothly. :)
Alex and Sharky are sooo cute I can't. :(
Excited to see the next one! :)

The tattoo thing is pretty cute but Alex is being slightly over dramatic. I know he's being protective of his lady but doesn't he see that his friends are just being protective of him? Hopefully Sharky and Alex reunite soon and they can all work out their issues.

OMG, they are literally star-crossed lovers. Like how in the world... :OO
That is super meaningful especially since Sharky got one, and she's so opposed to tattoos. OMG. :O PLEASE HAVE THEM REUNITE SOON. Crying for them literally now. :(
This chapter was seriously the most meaningful so far. I mean, the wedding chapter was pretty much there but just the tattoo thing. :') This one just gets to me.
Great job with the update! :) Wonder what Sharky will say to Rian... hmm...

Alex seems to be a bit all over the place with his emotions. I hope the guys all come around to their marriage soon. I'm sure that will take some pressure off.

Aw. :/
I think if Alex just explains to them the full reasoning they may understand. Not only so that they can be together in the U.S., but just also for Sharky's well-being in general. When she's on her own it can get a bit scary. :( Not sure how she lived that way before.
Great job with the update, it just further shows the trials of their relationship, but hopefully in the end it will be worth it. :)
Can't wait for the next!

Great job with the chapter! You're definitely getting better and better with the grammar, didn't spot anything in this one. Yay! :D
Aww... such a sad update though. :( Hope she's able to stay safe and out of trouble, it is a bit worrisome when she is by herself, but maybe now that they're married and have that vow, it'll be reassuring to Sharky. I hope so anyway. :)
Can't wait for more! :)

Aww, I'm sad to see them away from each other already. Hopefully everything works out and she can come back to the states soon. I also hope the guys take the news of them getting married well...