To the Moon and Back - Comments

Nooo, it's over. :-( This was a really sweet story. I loved watching Alex and Sharky's relationship grow. Hopefully you'll consider a sequel so we can see how married life treats them. Well done!

Aww... it's over! :( That kind of threw me off a bit, because in chapter 35, you said there were three chapters left, so I was expecting another after this. Unless there's an epilogue? Maybe you just changed it where it was only two, that's okay as well, lol. Wasn't prepared to say goodbye to it yet though.
A few things to note with this final chapter:
I hear Jack behind me snicker and just then realise that the organ did not intonate 'here comes the bride' but a somewhat churchy adaptation of our song 'Cinderblock Garden'.
I believe instead of the word "intonate" you may have meant "initiate." Looking up the definition for intonate, it deals with the rise and fall of pitch of voice. That doesn't really make sense when you're talking about an organ, lol. Whereas initiate would make sense because it would be saying that it started up the song. Also, realise should be realised; tense was off there.
And I was a bit confused with the date at the end... 2011? Yet Cinderblock Garden wasn't released until their album in 2015. Unless you wanted to change that entirely for the story? But up until this point, I thought it was set at the very least in 2015, if not present. I'm not really sure why you would want to throw off the music dynamic, though.
However, I did think it was cute how their wedding was on May 4th! Too perfect, and I'm very surprised Alex actually didn't try that in real life, lol. :P
But other than those two things, thought you did a great job on this chapter and the story overall! I really enjoyed it, and hope that you continue writing, because you really have a knack for it. Interested in seeing any new ideas that you come up with for new stories. :)
Gonna miss this one. Sharky and Alex are just <333, perfect.

lol, ohh okay. XD Yeah, just the word "letting" as a noun confused me a bit... that makes sense now. I think maybe here we would just say "vacation house" lol. :) Or maybe just rentable house.

@Nanook
Uh, oh, then that must be an Australian term, it's a house that is rented out to tourists. I don't know what the equivalent American term would be. :)

Awww, I love how she asked Rian to walk her down the aisle. That's so sweet, especially given their history. It looks like their wedding is coming together so well, so that only means more disaster is on the way.

You nearly forgot? :O What?! XD
lol, great job with the update though! :D
I had a question with this part:
We ended up renting a huge beach house that was actually a holiday letting on the edge of the city,
What is a "holiday letting"? I got confused when I read that, since I'm not entirely sure what it means, lol.
But yeah, they're getting things set, and rather quickly. And lol, Jack would want to be a flower girl or bridesmaid. XD It's sweet, though, how Rian is going to walk her down the aisle. :) It's unfortunate what happened with her family. :/
I found it a bit odd that Alex would get one of their songs engraved, it doesn't really sound like something he would actually do. XD Maybe another song outside of the band. But it's your story, so, you can do as you please. :P
Can't wait for more! :)

@Newyork_xo
Yeah, funny how this happens with all my stories now! Maybe it's sequel time :)

@Newyork_xo
Yeah, funny how this happens with all my stories now! Maybe it's sequel time :)

@Nanook
Oh you're right, I wanted to portray this kind of feeling but the match with the album is accidental (or maybe not, as I was listening to it a lot) ;)

I'm glad they worked it out. But I'm sad to hear this one is ending. :(

Awww, yay, they made up! :D
This chapter reminds me a lot of ATL's new album. Very nostalgic. Young love. Idk. Especially the end there with the line:
We scream and laugh like teenagers on their first date and it is just great, I feel so alive.
:)
They're getting back to the time/way they fell in love again. :')
And this is ending too, aw. :( But interested in seeing how it does. :) Can't wait for more! :D

@T-what
Oh gotcha. Thanks for clarifying, haha. XD

@Newyork_xo
I think it's because of the fact they haven't known each other for too long, they have to work through a lot of misunderstandings.

@Nanook
Oh no definitely not! Here in Australia some people spend fortunes on their wedding, and being a wedding planner is a pretty lucrative profession! It was just Charlie being overwhelmed with what was presented to her. I believe Alex just wanted to give her the best wedding, not realising it's not what she wants.

Aww. :( How sad.
But quick side note, wait... are we the only country that has wedding planners? XD LMAO.
But yeah, this all just seems really exuberant and not what they should be doing at all. I understand why Sharky's uncomfortable. I'm not too sure why Alex would go along with it if he doesn't have to. She didn't even really express interest in wanting to do this sort of thing. XD Unless he's just feeling pressured from the "normal" way of going about things.
But for the record, reading all of that stuff stressed me out, so I personally don't see an interest in doing that either. Maybe I'll change my mind, idk. Just seems like so much effort for something so simple.
But now they're in a bit of a fight again, sighhhh... hope they're able to work things out. Alex just needs to remember where she came from. Maybe get his head out of the clouds a bit.
Great job with the chapter though. That wedding planner... very typical with the long nails and perky personality, lol.
Can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Oh no, no, no! This makes me sad! :(

Great job with the chapter! :D
All I'm thinking right now is why do they have to have another, bigger celebration? It would be okay if they didn't, if they prefer it. lol. But idk. Expectations I guess.
I'm glad that everything went well with meeting his mom. :) Very sweet with how welcoming she was with Charlie. And Charlie and Luke reunited. :D
Something I noted:
"Oh god, I talk to much, I know, it always happens when I'm nervous."
You'll just want "too" instead of just "to". That may have just been a mistype.
But other than that, it flowed pretty well. Can't wait for more! :D
Also, awesome that you saw ATL! With the crowd thing, I think that's pretty normal. With so many people within a confined space, germs spread pretty easily and when I went to a concert like, late October last year, I got really sick from it and it was horrible and lasted like two weeks for me. It just depends if there's something going around, or you could just catch something pretty easily again just being in contact with people. It sucks. :/ Just be sure to take vitamins and wish for the best is all I can suggest as a remedy, lol.

Soooo cute. :D
Haha, awkward confrontations, but glad to hear the water is clear. Now Charlie needs to duet with them, though. :D
I'm just curious, do you have a person in mind that you envision Charlie looking like? I'm honestly struggling with who I should picture, lol, and with the picture on the main page, it's hard to tell... especially now since her hair is longer. But I'm just wondering, no worries if not. :)
Great job with the update though! Can't wait for more! :)

Yayyy! She's back! Hopefully they can both stay out of trouble now.

YAAASSS Sharkie YAAASSS she is back! :D
Sorry for the delay in commenting girl, I'm here though, promise! And I love this chapter! They reunited and that makes me so happy! :')
So yeah, this chapter was so sweet. Great job with it. :) Can't wait to see Alex and Sharkie's adventures from here... wondering how long it will stay good (it never seems to last long unfortunately :()