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We Are The Rebellious Youth - Comments, page 17
OMG. That's definitely dedication girl, respect.
I think I saw one thing that was worded awkwardly, but I read it another two times and I somehow made sense of it? lol. It was just something I had to think about though, so I'm not sure if it's the same thing or not. I can't remember what part that was though, lol. But I just let it be because after reading it again it made sense, so I thought it was maybe just me lol.
But I'll keep an eye out from now on. It doesn't surprise me that it took that long, though, you've been writing long chapters. :O So it makes sense.
@Nanook
Oh my god, you don't want to know how long it took me to edit this chapter. I'd go in, edit it, and then post it, but it posted without everything I edited (I edit everything just before I post it). So, I thought it was my fault and that I just did something wrong with posting it. It happened five times!!!!! I got so fed up at the end, that I just gave a half-arsed attempt. I'm so surprised that that's the only major one left. There were also a couple of things that sounded very grammatically wrong, so some of those might still be in there... It took two hours of my life!!!
If you want to help point out spelling mistakes on my chapters as well, feel free :) I know there are always a few that sneak by. @Nanook
Haha, oh my gosh, I freaking love Mickey. XD
She just has so much sass and is so unapologetic, I love it. XD
And Alex is still trying, I just can't. Maybe he'll stop now though? Or back up a bit? Maybe not. His determination is admirable, lol.
I honestly don't blame her for being weirded out that Jack came over and thought they were friends, I found that a little weird myself, lol. Especially considering Jack's the one that ran into her, and she called him a jerk on the first day lmao.
This is my new favorite story I'm reading. :D
One thing I spotted, lol, I was trying to debate on whether or not atlfan08 would find this annoying or not, but I think I'll just go with the major things I spot:
I remember you telling me that you didn’t befriend guys you slept if.
'if' should be 'with' lol.
Should I still do this? I'm in such a habit now after reading your other story Lise, lol. XD
But loved the update, Mickey is definitely turning tables. Alex is determined that they be 'friends' (but I mean c'mon just friends? Really?), and lol I love how she just called him out and saying how he wasn't the best and pointing out some flaws. Like OMG. XD I just, I love her confidence. lol.
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@Nanook
It's not my writing without some weird wording in it ;) I should stop writing when I'm very tired... Maybe it will also help if I don't stop writing halfway through a sentence ever single damn time!
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