Breaking the Silence. - Comments, page 2

Yeah, I know that's how they met Raelyne... I'm asking how Raelyne knows sign language though? lol. And why Teagan doesn't. Or are you planning on mentioning that in a future update?
But I'm glad to hear you're doing a bit better. <3 And yay! :D

@Nanook
Raelyne was the waitress at the diner who signed to Sam to enjoy her meal. Haha Chloe is a pregamer!
And it's getting better recently, I've had some really good ups this week too so hopfully. I'm already working on the next chapter!

Great job with the update! Sorry for the delay in commenting again, sigh.
Oooh, so, we see Sam and Alex getting a little closer. <3 Wasn't expecting the shower scene to happen, but it's so sweet that she trusts him that much. And everything he says to her is just aw worthy. :') It's also sweet how he's quick to defend her always. And he's just so accepting of her, the way she is physically with her scars and just supports her choices. <3 I find it interesting how he hasn't said much about her smoking, but I guess he maybe realizes that's one of her coping mechanisms.
One of my favorite parts of the chapter:
“I’m so ready to watch your flaunt your cute ass up on stage tonight.” She said
“Flaunting her cute ass?” Alex asked
“She’s cute and has a nice ass.” Chloe argued.
“Well I can’t argue with that.” Alex smiled.
XD Just found it funny. And OMG, a little shocked that Chloe just wants to party right away, and wanted to miss the first show. XD They have plenty of time for that. And plus, they'll have to wait anyhow unless they start ahead of Sam some night lol. I didn't really understand her train of thought there.
Random question, and this may have already been clarified and I'm just forgetting (which wouldn't be surprising, as my memory is that of a squirrel as of late), but, was it mentioned why Raelyne knows sign language? I did try to look and couldn't find where it said if you did mention it... maybe I'm just missing it. I already forgot though if it was mentioned. XD But I'm just wondering because in this chapter, it was made apparent that Teagan doesn't know it, so I was just wondering why Raelyne knows it and she doesn't? Something must have differed for them both there, maybe she just chose to learn it on her own? Maybe took classes on it? Just wondering the backstory there (if it wasn't explained or if you hadn't thought of mentioning it, maybe you plan to though).
Loved the update, though, overall. Very cute! :D Interested in seeing what all happens on tour.
Also, I feel you on the depression. :/ That's honestly a part of why I haven't been able to get on as much lately. But I really hope writing is helping you. Even if it's just something on your own time/just for you to read, I definitely encourage it, and take your time on this if you need to. <3

This was not garbage.
A short intimate shower is so cute, I love how Alex treats her; like she's his queen. He's not trying to push her into anything which I just love, I'm so worried that somewhere along the lines shit is going to hit the fan. I also love, love the relationship between Sam and Jack how his big brother mode comes and goes with her; it's really endearing. I loved this update so much, her first show translating to a big crowd went so well. <333.
Keep up the good work and take all the time you need, we will be here waiting for your next update just take care of yourself too okay!?

@Nanook
The more I write this story the more I love it.

Yay! :D

@Nanook
<3 I'm going to try and get some writing done so I can update again soon!

<3

@Nanook
I wrapped some Christmas presents and got drunk. My boy brought me some stuff from his family dinner. I also played my trumpet; which makes me feel a little better.

@Nanook

Haha, okay, that's what I was thinking. XD Thank you for clarifying.
<3
And aw, I'm so sorry that you're on your own. :'( You don't even have a friend you could spend the holidays with? I'm sorry. :( Sometimes my family annoys me on the holidays, but I can't imagine being alone on them.

@Nanook
She playfully slapped Chloe. Put the lost boys in there just for you ;) haha.
and trying to find balance, holidays are hard this year; spending them by myself.

Great job with the updates! Ugh, a little over a week... disappointed that I took this long.
But yay! They're together! :D And so cute too. Haha, Alex just went for that first kiss. So cute how he said they're soulmates though, aww. <3
A few things to go over, Chapter 6:
Her phone dinged and he smiled pulling it out of her pocket.
*she smiled
“But Sam uses her hands to talk so imagine what else she can use them for.” Chloe said
I slapped her and started laughing. Anna walked away and Chloe looked at me.
Not necessarily a mistake here, I just wanted to clarify... so Sam slapped Annalise or she playfully slapped Chloe? I was also just a bit thrown off since Annalise just seemed to walk away without saying anything, if it was in fact that Sam slapped her? Was just wondering which happened lol.
“Seven years?”
“Uhh yeah.” He said
“You’re too cute.”
He rolled his eyes.
“Stupid twenty nine year old boys.”
“I’m not twenty nine yet. And can it you’re only two years behind.” He said
“Two years and four months.”
This section, minor and I may be either overanalyzing or not analyzing correctly... the math just seemed off, though. Because seven years... he would've either been 22 or 21... and so she would've been 19 or 20... and she was a senior? Or maybe it's just the extra months thing I'm off with calculating. lol. It might technically add up, idk. But just wanted to note this in case.
But anyway, I love how they have this new group going. :) Ta ta Annalise, glad that Zack gained some sense and dumped her. And so, with the new group, it'll be interesting to see how it goes on tour with all of them.
Haha, and I love how Jack and Rian were afraid of Elvis. Very hilarious to read their reactions to seeing him. XD
Hmm, I believe I touched on all the key points. Loved the updates, and really loved the fluff in this one, keep that coming. Love Alex and Sam time. <3 They're so cute.
Excited to see more! And it seems you are as busy as I am. Sorry to hear you're dealing with that, hope you're finding some balance with it all.
Oh, and ummm, gotta give kudos for choosing The Lost Boys! ;)

I hope work isn't too killing for you this week and you can also message me if you wanna talk about whats going on!

Oh man, Chloe seems awesome I can't wait for her to be in the story more as Jack's girlfriend! And omgggg the fluff is real! It's about time!

Haha, okay, no problem. :) I'll try to read it as soon as I can. :)

@Nanook
I passed out and I've been staying at my boys house, I'm definitely going to try and get it up tonight cause he's already asleep. And it's pretty fluff

Don't worry, it happens, especially if autocorrect is on. XD
Hm... I don't see an update like you said, but that's okay, take your time! :) Not in any rush.

@Nanook
I swear I went and got all Zachs to Zacks when I posted I must have missed one. And thank you! Planning on updating tonight

Great job with the update! Yay, he's awake! :D I can't believe they pulled that joke though, that honestly wasn't funny. Like, it's one thing if they would've said he still wasn't awake, but they told her he was dying. Like wtf who does that. :(
So, yeah, I don't blame her being angry lol.
Sorry for the delay in commenting, by the way. Life's gotten a bit hectic for me the past week. Hoping things calm down a bit, but just so you know, there may be times where I'm delayed if I didn't mention that before. But I will eventually get around to it like I am now, promise. :)
Elvis is so cute. <3 I like how Alex likes him too. :D He's not afraid to kiss him, haha.
But Sam is afraid to kiss Alex. :( Aw. I hope she's able to find the courage soon. It's really sweet how he wrote the song about her. <3
But yeah, I'm just really glad Alex is awake, was worried there for a moment. Excited to see what you have next in store!
A few things I spotted:
“No one is.” Zach sniffled.
Our ATL Zack is spelled with a k, lol. :P
“Stop signing I know you’ve been talking to me. Jack told me, he told me you’ve been speaking out loud to be when no one is in here with you.” He said
"to be" was meant to be "to me" I believe, lol. Maybe also a comma after "Stop signing" but that's getting very technical. XD
But those were the two main things I noticed. Like I said, excited to read more and see what happens next! :)
Also, please don't hate yourself. :(

"You little shit" I love sam in this shes kinda feisty. More breakthroughs with talking, and I like that she interpreted for a girl at her old school. Its sweet. Buttttt the boys are assholes for that stunt. I would have started throwing punches if my bro did that.

I also see you added new characters, I'm excited to meet them