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Breaking the Silence.

Summary

Sam doesnt speak, she can but she doesn't. When her feelings for Alex start to develop grow stronger, her agitation with herself does too. Therapy is supposed to be helping her but it's only making it worse, will another tragedy break her silence?


Characters

Alexander Gaskarth

Alexander Gaskarth

Chloe Zanetti

Chloe Zanetti

Jack Barakat

Jack Barakat

Rian Dawson

Rian Dawson

Samantha (Sam) Barakat

Samantha (Sam) Barakat

The Twins Raelyne and Teagan

The Twins Raelyne and Teagan

Zack Merrick

Zack Merrick

Chapters

Comments

@MyBarakat
Oh gotcha, haha. Well, again, it really meant a lot to see your comment. <3
And awesome, well, if you do ever write/post, let me know and I'll try to check something out. And congrats on your babies! :)

Nanook Nanook
2/11/19

@Mrs. Gaskarth
<33 Aw, that's so awesome that you're writing a book! :D I'm sure it's going to be awesome. :)
And haha, I understand; just a small error, no worries, it happens.
And thank you for the offer, I'll keep that in mind. At the moment, it's not really something I can talk about, or something where talking will really help me. It's hard to describe, but I'm trying to figure it out. But yeah, I've definitely tried talking about it and it just hasn't done much. I guess it's like a different step or feeling if that makes sense. But again, thank you for the offer. <3
And take your time, I'll be here. :)

Nanook Nanook
2/11/19

@Nanook
We have never directly interacted but I read a few other stories you've commented on. But hi there! I've been thinking about writing but I just had two babies so reading is all I can do right now lol.

@Mrs. Gaskarth
Also you're writing a book? That's amazing mind if I ask what its about? Is it also romance?

MyBarakat MyBarakat
2/9/19

@Nanook
Yeah I havent updated in a while but I am working on it, its gonna be a little shorter becuase it's a little emotional, but I'm excited to post it when it's done. And, of course I have faith in you, everyone on here has a life outside of here where things come up and keep us away. I have a book that I'm writing and trying to get published, fanfics give me a get away from that, I love writing them. (Which is my only secret in life that no one knows about lol)

I did mean to put "I said" sometimes my fingers are typing to fast. I also tend to be watching Netflix with my boyfriend while I write so I'm not looking at the screen, sometimes I'll be typing and I'll look down and I had typed whatever had been said around me, my boyfriend was playing dark souls the other day and I typed his rant about dying instead of the conversation in the story.

I'm sorry you're having such a rough if you ever need anyone to talk to about it my inbox is open or texting pen pals lol. Ok be here for you, my phone is always attached to me.

I'll be updating soon, I'll try to get some writing done before work :* I really appreciate you being here

Mrs. Gaskarth Mrs. Gaskarth
2/6/19

OMG it's been a while.
I haven't really gotten on here lately. I have a few different updates to catch up with, but I've just been busy with life and motivation and just, a lot personally has been going on.
But then I got a notification that someone commented to me, and I was like, "what?" because it had been a while, so I wasn't sure who was talking to me, lol. But then I got on here and saw both of you guys' comments, wondering where I was... @MyBarakat, I'm not sure if I've ever directly interacted with you, but it means a lot that you wondered about me. I didn't think anyone really noticed my comments other than the writers of stories, so I was surprised to say the least. I'm definitely still here. Or maybe you're an author I interacted with before, just on a new account? lol, either way, hi there! Your comment really meant a lot, and I appreciate the concern. I'm okay.
And @Mrs.Gaskarth, you're awesome for having faith that I'd come back. <3 Because yep, here I am. XD But I'm really glad that you find my comments helpful. Again, sometimes I lose motivation, so I'm glad my words help you out and I'm not just leaving words in the void.
But yeah, after getting the notification, I did my best to finally find some time to check out the new chapter, and that I did. :) Great job with the latest update! It's been nearly a month since you posted it, I'm sorry again for taking so long. Life has just been... yeah. :/
Some random parts to point out that I liked:
I felt his arms wrap around me and lift me into his arms, I clung to him like a sloth as he walked me off of the bus.
Haha, clung to him like a sloth. <3 I thought that was cute. :D
He was bobbing his head to the beat of one of my favorite songs, before I even knew it my hands were signing to it.
I thought this line was interesting... so instead of singing along, she just started signing along? I just found it kind of cool how it's like, that much of a mechanism for her. That she would start signing as opposed to like, nodding along like Alex or just lip-syncing maybe. It just shows how in tune she is with ASL.
I noticed you pointed out how Raelyne knows sign language, haha, thanks for mentioning that. :D That makes sense now, and lol, I can totally relate to Teagan not knowing French. I minored in that in college and only remember, maybe the basics now, lol. It's so sad. :/ Language is something you just need to keep practicing or you just forget it. Sigh. So it's amazing that Raelyne kept ASL; I guess she just practiced it more?
A tiny error I spotted:
“Do you know what you’re going to do?” He asked
“Not yet, I’m going to brainstorm with Jack.” He said
He nodded.

lol, it just seems like Brendon's talking to himself here. XD NBD. But yeah, just an "I said" with that second line there, I think you meant. XD
Now, for what happened overall in the chapter: aww, that was an awesome surprise from Alex. :D How cool she got to meet Brendon; perks of being close to a band, haha.
And that moment at the end there where she told him she loved him. <3 Man, my brain is scrambled or it just must have been a long time, because I didn't remember them not saying they loved each other before? XD But I don't think they did due to MyBarakat's comment, lol, I must be confusing things. Dang, it's been a while. But either way, it was still cute, and then sweet with the way Sam told him the whole truth.
Really loved the update, and hopefully my next comment won't take that long again. I appreciate you being patient and having faith in me. <3 Just kind of been a rough month for me. I'm really happy that you seem to be doing good personally, though, hopefully it's still as good as you said in your author's note. <3
Excited to see more! :) I'll be here.

Nanook Nanook
2/6/19