Smooth Criminal - Comments, page 6

@Jxck-Bxrxkxt you're so sweet and so amazing. that honestly means so, so much. you don't even know. Alex and Stella's relationship has obviously hit a rough patch, to say the least. but like I said, it's not over yet. their relationship is faaaar from being over.

dude this recent chapter is absolutely fucking AGH! I loved what you did with it, and it's realistic for once. I'm just so worried about Alex and Stella's relationship rn I gotta stop this. But never stop writing man, you're hella great at it.

@Carebear I've personally written a one-shot in which I depicted Lisa to be a horrible person, so I totally understand the whole "fiction" thing. It's more so those who get all offended by the littlest of things that I've been worried about lashing out at me. I'm so glad that you love my story; it honestly means the world to me. And your feedback is truly appreciated. You're the best.<3

I think you did an excellent job with this chapter. When people are hurt they lash out the hardest at the ones they love the most. Words from people you love are always the sharpest knives. This does bring up an interesting question though. If a musician writes a song about a girl and then that girl and he are no more, does he have to take it out of rotation? Maybe they sing the song because its a fan favorite. Hmmmm. People should know by now this is fiction and its just a story. Like the authors who make Lisa evil and mean. We all know ( or hope rather) that she isn't but she is just a literary tool. Anyways. I love this story a really lot and I can't wait for the next chapter. :o)

@katybear18
I can't wait to see what you decide to do with the next chapter

@Jack Bakarat I'm super glad that you get it lol I've been biting my nails all morning, expecting someone to go off on me for bringing it up. But I stand by what I've said. It was all for the purpose of the story and I'm definitely planning on making up for it.

@katybear18
Me personally I feel like every writer uses something really heavy every now and then. I say it's okay to use something that heavy just as long as you aren't out there throwing it around. What you said in the notes was true. When us girls are angry and hurt we'll say and do anything to make the person that hurt us, hurt just as bad. We really just say then regret later

@Jack Bakarat yeah the whole Tom thing was a low blow. And part of me was like "yikes I don't know..." But I've been in that situation before and I've pulled a similar card as such. So I just kinda went with it for dramatic emphasis. Kinda kickin myself in the ass for it but at the same time, I've always been that person to tread heavy waters like that. I don't know. It's just one of those things. And I definitely won't be going there again.

I don't blame Stella for getting beyond pissed at Alex. She obviously loves the guy, and for him to sing about some other chick. That's gotta hurt. Also she did cross the line with Tom. As touchy of a subject as that is in this fandom I feel like if you didn't think you needed it to add to the shit that's going down then you wouldn't have put it in there

@Jxck-Bxrxkxt You'll just have to wait and see, my love. ;)

Holy guacamole I am in love and I just really hope this doesn't take the twist I think it's going to take bc I'm with Zack, I don't wanna see her hurt :'c pls pls Alex don't be a dick D:

@SophieGaskarth Awh thank you so much! I'm glad!<3

Loving this.

D; omg I can't take it! You're an amazing writer.. GAAHH i can't get over it:))

Oh shit! Stells almost got caught

Omg I am obsessed now! chapter 12 has me hooked!! Keep going<3

@MariRoo AHHH! Thank you, thank you, thank you! I love you!!<3

This is AHMAZINGGGG!! :D I love Stella<3

@Jack Bakarat Opperation Stalex is a go.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Stalex