Smooth Criminal - Comments, page 3

I subscribed awhile ago. I thought I'd commented as well but looks like I didn't. I'm enjoying your story and that poem is really powerful, umm if it's based on a real experience, I feel for you or whoever it's about and anyone else in that situation. Sounds horrific. I can't wait for the next chapter whenever that will be. Don't worry about keeping us waiting. Your life comes first. I hope things are a bit better for you. :)

That is quite powerful. I think you should write what helps you or what you are feeling at the time. You have a lot of talent and I would love to see you branch out with it. Regardless of whether or not this is from a personal experience, it will be for some and it is a wonderful piece. It will bring someone peace to read it. Anyways. I thought it was well done. I would be interested in reading more. Stay strong my sweet. Remember that we are proud of you and you are among friends. We may be just names behind a keyboard but those names would have your back in anyway we could should you need us too. :o)

@Newyork_xo I don't know why I'm just now seeing your comment, but thank you so much!! Welcome to the shit show. (;

Aw gotcha. Sending love. <3 I admire your strength and opening up about it.

I just started reading this and I love it. I'm up to chapter 26 and I want to keep reading but it's 2AM and I must go to sleep. I can't wait to start reading again. :)

@Nanook that is all 100% based on personal experience. I've been pretending none of it happened for so long, at this point it's not personal when people ask me questions.

Aw, girl, I'm sorry you've been dealing with a lot of stuff. Hope it gets better. :(
I really loved your piece you put in here. It's very raw with a sad truth. Authentic. You don't have to answer, but is it based off of personal experience? Or were you in the mindset of more of a character? Just wondering how you went about writing it, but again, if it's too personal, I understand.
I'm dealing with college stuff myself right now so I totally understand things being hectic. Just take your time. :) I'll be here. And my comment may still be delayed depending on when you post, haha, just because my free time is very little right now. But somehow I found some time to get on here to see your post, lol. :)

I just saw your last comment; clearly I check my Instagram more than I do this. XD But thank you! :D And like I said with my one post, ATL saw them yesterday and I was just aejdewjgnwrgjbern at their responses. XD A mess.
As for the new update, I was confused because I got two notifications but then I saw the one was just a note, lol. But at first I was like wow she's really cranking them out. I appreciate it only being one though so that way I wasn't too behind. XD
But great job with it! I can TOTALLY relate to Stella and the chicken nuggets craving, are you kidding? I'm not sure if you plan on pulling a twist or not with the story, but I for a fact am not pregnant and experience that craving everyone once in a while. Mentally I was like "I feel ya girl" as a I read that part, lol.
And again I was expecting something to happen as I kept reading just because I'm so anxious for when the downfall happens. Like I'm on the edge as I keep reading. Surprised nothing happened, lol.
And, so, they've been signed! Sort of, kind of? lol. Guess we'll see. ;)
And, I think that's all I wanted to say. lol. But aww, Alex was super adorable in this chapter. :) Great job with the update! Can't wait for more! :D
I don't ever check this site on mobile, which will probably explain my delay with reading at times, just so you know. So if you see me posting on Insta but not here, that's why. XD Thanks for following me by the wayyyy... hope you like my frequent concert posts. lol.

@Nanook oh my lord your thigh pieces are gorgeous!! Wow!

Oh, gotcha. Interested to see what's in store there, then. :)
And oh wow. Mine were $250 each... hmm... I'm not sure if this will link but here's both of mine in a collage. Got the night one in January 2015 and just got the day one back in May. :)

https://www.instagram.com/p/BFICptHh5_P/

Hopefully that link works, it should link to my post on Instagram. :)

@Nanook I was going to make the scene between Rory and Stella a bit more catty and dramatic, but like I said, I was in kind of a downer mood last night and was just focused on getting a chapter cranked out for y'all. There conversation isn't quite over just yet, though ;)
Ah! Thank you, thank you, thank youuu. My thigh piece, so far, has cost me about $450. I'm putting down another $250 when I go in and get her colored in, though. She's an expensive little beaut.

OMG, that picture with Set It Off = goals. I got so distracted by the author's note. lol. Sounds like an awesome time you had! :D How rad that you got to hang out with them like that. :')
lol, and aww, it means a lot that you like my comments. That's my goal with leaving them. :D
As for the new update...
Ooohh... she almost got caught. :O I wonder if her dad is going to be more watchful now, hmmm... this doesn't look too good.
As for her and Rory, I was expecting Rory to talk back to her more; it surprised me when she didn't. XD But I guess it's good that she didn't, that way they sort of had that moment at the end and now they're catching up. I'm interested in seeing Rory's thoughts on Stella dating Alex. Idk if that was planned being brought up as a big deal or not, but since Rory dated his brother... I'm thinking she may have something to say about Stella now dating Alex. Doesn't necessarily mean bad though, just kind of wondering her thoughts.
Great job overall with the update! :D Loved it; happy that you're back and had a rad time. Again, that picture is goals. And out of curiosity, how much did your thigh piece cost? I have two myself and just wanted to see how they compared in prices. Mine are roughly the same size on each thigh. :)

@katybear18
I've been known to help people every now and then

@Alex Gascarth you're a life saver.

@katybear18
Okay. I'm just rereading what you've got so far because it's been a while and then I'll message you any ideas I come up with

@Alex Gascarth
1. Yeah, I figured I should probably start making amends with some characters so that Stella has a few life lines before the inevitable occurs.
2. Arizona was just AGH!! I wanna go baaaack!!!
3. Omg, yes. If you want to help with that, that would be awesome. Message me if you want, and we can go from there.

1. It's good to see Stella and Rory actually being sisters
2. How was Arizona girly?
3. Just curious but I remember you saying that you were having massive writer's block with She's Like Texas and I was wondering if there was anything I could do to help?

@Nanook your comments are what I live for, just so you know. you're amazing. and yeah, I got to hang out with them and some other bands from Warped at the annual bowling tournament. it was amazing. I literally have no words for the experience. I just... ugh.

God, I just keep getting more and more nervous as I continue reading this... just waiting for the bomb... lol. :(
Like, I'm wondering if it's gonna be from Stella, Alex, or Stella's dad. Perhaps a combination. Meh.
I cringe as I read now, just waiting for it. LMAO. But that's a good thing; it means I'm really getting into the story. :) But I'm just anxious because I'm not sure exactly what I should be anticipating.
Hmm... I think that's just kind of my thoughts for now. Great job with the update. Alex and Stella were just being all lovey-dovey... which just fills me with even more regret for what's coming up. lol. Because... awww... don't want the sweet moments to be ruined.
But I realize no relationship is perfect. Sigh. Sighhhhh.... that is definitely evident with other things that have happened so far with this story.
Anyway, I'll stop rambling, lol. Can't wait for more!
And also, you get to hang out with Set It Off for a couple of hours? How?! Like a casual thing? I'm jealous. :O

@katybear18
Yay!!!!!!!