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@settle for me. asdfgjkl thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it!! I should have the next chapter out in a day or two <3
Okay, I might have binge-read this over the last two days.
I love it so much and I can't wait for an update!
Is she pregnant? I'm pretty sure she's pregnant. She has cravings, drastic mood swings, and nausea/vomiting
There was a time where they didn't use a condom
@RHSK143 oh hello! the next chapter should be out soon-ish. I'm having to have a friend help me out with it and she's taking a bit longer than expected which is totally fine. thank you so much for reading and taking the time to give feedback; honestly it means everything to me.
@Carebear hi, you're amazing and I love you. thank you so much for the support. all of my best writing seems to come from the places where I have the most emotion tucked away and then I let it out for a bit and pieces like that are created. it's rough, but apparently it does its job right. and for the record, y'all are more than just names on a keyboard ;) we're all family.
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Hey girl,
Sooo... I am still here, reading. XD Sorry for the delay in leaving feedback. Since it's been so long, I just chose to read the story over again as a huge refresher, because once it's been a minute since I've read something, I remember some details but not all... that's probably how a lot of people are, actually. XD But it's even worse for me because I read so many stories, lol, so forgetting seems to come easier if they're not actively updated.
So anyway, I decided this when I got the first notification that you updated again, so it took me a minute to find some time to catch up, but now, I finally am, and I love that you're back! I'm really looking forward to seeing what you have in store for this! I'm also glad you came back because you've had me wondering how you plan on ending it, since there seems to be a sequel in mind. I admire you finding your dedication to this again. :)
Hmm... I wonder what's wrong with Stella. :/ This was also why I reread it again, because I couldn't remember if anything had happened to hint to why she's losing weight now. At first I thought it was pregnancy, but she wouldn't lose weight with that, right? And then there's a time lapse of like three months (between chapters 29 and 30, and 29 showing signs of when the symptoms start) and she's not showing, so... I'm thinking that's not it. I'm hoping it's maybe just stress, or like depression side effects maybe, if it's not pregnancy. Just hope she's not sick. :(
As for her doubts with Alex, meh. :( This makes me sad. Like, he acts like he loves her a lot, so I'm really hoping it's just her overthinking things... but since we just get her POV, it's hard not to get into her mindset. But if that is the case, that he is actually pulling away or losing interest, that's his loss. Seriously. Stella deserves better than that, if that's the case. She's risked so much for him, getting in trouble with her dad, and gave him a chance even though at the beginning she doubted him... what has he truly done for her? And rereading this again, he hasn't totally explained the Lisa situation either. Why he dedicated that song to her on the mini tour (and while they worked it out and Stella apologized for what all she did afterwards, I noticed that he never officially did), why he still talks to her in general, etc. Like what's up with that? While I'm really hoping that Alex has good intentions, something is still unexplained here and leaving me a bit iffy on the situation. Idk though.
I think those things are my main thoughts right now. I look forward to seeing how you continue with this. Sorry again for the delay in commenting; still loving your writing, you're really great at it. <3
8/22/18