Hiding in those weak and drunken hearts.
Summary
15 Year old Alex, moves to America, from England, after...........
WARNING!
Abuse,
Panic attacks,
Anxiety,
Bullying,
Suicidal thoughts.
Title taken from, People Help the People, by Birdy.
Characters
Alex Gaskarth
Anixety, shy, scared, fears the past will repeat itself. 15 years old
Ashton Irwin
Fast, annoying, smart, doesn't care what happens to anyone. 16 years old
Calum Hood
Evil, strong, ruthless, will hurt anyone who is better than him. 16 years old
Jack Barakat
Funny, annoying, immature, he is the bestest friend Alex could have ever asked for. age 16
Luke Hemmings
Unkind, athletic, musical, doesn't like what Michael does to Alex. 15 years old
Michael Clifford
Mean, athletic, strong, doesn't particually like Alex and his friends. 16 years old
Rian Dawson
Nice, funny, caring, will do anything to protect his friends. 16 years old
Tom Gaskarth
Funny, sweet, caring, Alex's older brother who is always there for him. 21 years old
Zack Merrick
Strong, scary, kind, will not get into a fight unless nessary. 15 years old
Chapters
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Living with the pieces of my memories.
Alex's P.O.V. (Title taken from the song Crown of Thorns, by Black Veil Brides)
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What a Catch
Alex's P.O.V. (Title taken from the song What a catch, Donnie, by Fall out Boy)
I couldn't help but notice the excessive use of commas in your sentences? Not trying to sound rude, but a lot of the time they were kind of unnecessary and made it difficult for me to read.
But besides that, I'm really liking this story so far! Keep it up :)
2/28/16