It's the Eyes
Really Love?
I loaded my bike into the van and strapped in, firm. I then put my suitcase on the floor in-between Alex and I. Then I climbed into my death. I knew he would try to bring up the 'so' conversation. Nothing good ever comes in the so conversation. So what are we? so what are we doing? It's a sucky conversation and it just really fucking sucks. I hate it. It took Alex an hour and half to get to the 'so'.
"Soooooooo" He prolonged it.
I giggled "Nope, we are not having the so conversation. Not here and not now."
"Right ok, Looking forward to seeing your brother? Opie? Mom?"
"Yes, Yes, Yes" I continued texting I didn't even look at him.
"Gonna miss Jordan?" I saw him glance over at me.
"Don't do this Alex. Right now I have no idea. Jordan and I never discussed anything and we will just. You and I never discussed anything. Its the turning here" I pointed. I saw Bobby and some new guy holding open the gate to the club house and garage. I could see everyone waiting for me outside. Terra with the boys, Opie with his new girlfriend. I turned to Alex "thanks for the lift but it's probably best if you don't get out" I heard Bobby pull the back up and wheel my bike out and close it again. There was a bang. I kissed Alex on the cheek. "I will call you when I'm ready to come home" I got out of the truck and he pulled out and drove off. Jax came running up to me and picked up me in a hug.
"BABY SISTER MISSED YOU" He screamed at me. Everyone smiled including me. When he finally put me down, his face had just lit up.
"Missed you too man" The rest of the club came up to me and hugged me and said how much they have missed me. It made me feel more home than back in England or Baltimore.
"Who was the scrawny kid in the car?" Opie, nudged my arm and winked at me.
"Leave it yeah?" I laughed "He is nothing"
"So you looked after the bike then?" Jax asked. Looking over the bike.
"Yeah of course. My baby. Speaking of babies"I spun around to see Terra with Thomas in one arm and Abel holding the other hand. "Look at these beauties." I knelt down and outstretched my arms.
"Auntie clary" Abel came running into them and I picked him up.
"Hey little dude. What's this?" I asked taking the peace of paper out his hand.
"I drew it for yew"
I opened it out and smiled "Aw thank you baby" I kissed his forehead. Put him back down and knelt down again. "you know what I'm gonna do withthis?" I asked him, he shook his head "I'm gonna stick it on the wall next to my bed at home so every morning I see it and think of you" He smiled and nuzzled into Terra's leg. I got up. I looked at Thomas "Hello Hello Hello" Puting on a baby voice. Terra handed him over to me, Then Kissed my cheek in a polite way
"Hello sweetie" She said walking over to Jax.
"Man I'm so happy to be home. Like this is where I wanna be not Baltimore." I gave Thomas over to Terra and we went inside.
"Hey Clary"
"Yes Opie?"
"Still got it?" He asked me
"Yep" I turned around and lifted up my leather cut, to show the handle of a 9mm.
"thats my girl" He came over ruffling up my hair.
After that the day went pretty quickly, not any different from the last I was in town the same shit went down. We then had a massive family meal in the clubhouse. The entire club came down this was such a warm welcome. To think a bunch of motorcycle club guys were this happy to see their dorky little sister was heart warming. It wasn't in till late that night that we finally got privacy. Opie sat on the bed pulling off his boots, undressing for bed. I walked over in just one of his tshirts and a pair of red lace undies. I sat with his legs opened. I wlaked in between them. He wrapped his hands around my waist and pulled me in. Kissing my belly through the shirt.
"God I've missed your smell, I've missed you "
"I've missed you too baby" We climbed into bed and cuddled. With Op n I there was no need for sex all the time, we've been doing this for so long now.
"You know if you stayed out here then we could tell people. I know you're banging other dudes back home , come here and we can finally be an us"
"Yeah I am but so are you. What would your porn pussy think if she could hear or see us right now"
"she would kill us, but I'm serious"
I spun around So I was laying on my front and I could see his face. "Soon I promise when I turn 21, I will be down here like a shot I promise. Then this can be forever" I smiled, he smiled the he kissed me We fell asleep. He left before I was up there was note on the pillow next to me.
Clarrisa
You look to beautiful and peaceful to wake. I'm at
the clubhouse. Come when you're awake.
I love you
Opie x
" I love you too Opie" I whispered to myself
Hmm... this story was a bit more confusing. Perhaps it wouldn't have been as much if I watched SOA? Perhaps that's why I got a little lost with it...
But then you had Crowley and hell and demons (like Crowley from Supernatural?)... so were you combining aspects from different shows?
I think the main issue was, there was a lot going on without much backstory to it all. It kind of just went from one event to the next without any explanation. No backstory is okay initially, but not when looking at so many aspects that aren't being explained. There needs to be an explanation somewhere or other.
But, this all being said... I'll be subscribed in case you decide to rewrite, or maybe finish this to help make sense of all of it? This story has a sharp contrast in writing, though, compared to your others that I've read so far, which kind of confuses me... but maybe you just wrote this one at another time? I'm not sure.
I admire you for trying to combine all of these different aspects into one story, though. Again, I'll be around if you ever choose to continue it or rewrite. :)
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