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Sorry the next chapter took so long! I've just had so much going on and didn't wanna post anything that was shit. Hope yous all enjoy it
@AlexIsMyOnlyOne
god bless your soul
but...your writing about the king of hell sooo....probably not
what i mean to say by that shit up there is that
KEEP GOING!
BETTER TIMES MUST COME
and note here that i said "must" not "are to" because they will
and keep going it's AWESOME
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Hmm... this story was a bit more confusing. Perhaps it wouldn't have been as much if I watched SOA? Perhaps that's why I got a little lost with it...
But then you had Crowley and hell and demons (like Crowley from Supernatural?)... so were you combining aspects from different shows?
I think the main issue was, there was a lot going on without much backstory to it all. It kind of just went from one event to the next without any explanation. No backstory is okay initially, but not when looking at so many aspects that aren't being explained. There needs to be an explanation somewhere or other.
But, this all being said... I'll be subscribed in case you decide to rewrite, or maybe finish this to help make sense of all of it? This story has a sharp contrast in writing, though, compared to your others that I've read so far, which kind of confuses me... but maybe you just wrote this one at another time? I'm not sure.
I admire you for trying to combine all of these different aspects into one story, though. Again, I'll be around if you ever choose to continue it or rewrite. :)
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