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I hope you come back to this and update again. I miss this story!

Please update again soon. I really love and miss this story.

Okay, so... hello again. :D
lol, you're probably wondering why I'm commenting again so soon. So, after commenting the last time just letting you know I was still here, I decided to mark the story and its prequel down to read again, as a bit of a refresher but also because I just knew I loved it so much the first time I read. So, that's what I spent the last few days doing, finally; rereading your two stories.
And... it just makes me sad that you disappeared, lol. Although I'm sure it was for good reason. Perhaps you're a bit busy with life, and I totally get that.
But, I just wanted to comment again to say that this story, from beginning to the latest update, is seriously so amazing. Reading it again, I experienced all the emotions, but there's just something different with reading it straight through as opposed to update to update, you know? That's kind of what I did when it came to the sequel, so that's also another reason why I wanted to reread all of it.
Random thing that I found off that I never pointed out before: in chapter 14, you explained how Will was advancing, with crawling, etc. But then in chapter 25, you sort of backtracked and said he was a bit behind on his transitions, mainly crawling. XD lol. Reading again, I was like, what? But he was fine a few chapters ago. XD Just a random thing; it's really minuscule but just found that funny how it turned into the opposite lol.
Anyway, I'm also reading again, and commenting again, to perhaps offer some ideas, in case the reason you haven't updated is due to writer's block. We've all been there, and while I'm sure that chance is probably slim (since it seemed like you had at least an idea of where this was going from the very beginning), I wanted to offer some thoughts on things I'm still wondering about, or things I guess that could deserve some sort of conclusion.
1) The thing with Eric. Will Alex tear him to pieces? XD Is he going to stalk their family? Like, what's going on with that? I'm still very bummed by the way that he turned into a creeper. XD I mean, he was such a sweet potato, I still love how he comforted Whit when she needed it. :') :P
2) The house/moving ordeal. A thought that occurred to me (and I have no idea if you had anything like this in mind, lol, it'll be great if you did because that means I'm psychic :D), maybe, by some miracle, they do get that dream home? Obviously they didn't initially, but who knows, maybe the people that bought it have to foreclose because they can't afford it anymore, or just ended up using all their life savings to outbid and so now they need to sell it to get the money back. XD LMAO. IT COULD HAPPEN, okay? XD Or hell, maybe they're criminals that robbed a bank for the two million... I mean, you never know. What a plot twist that would be. XD
lol, but on a serious note, if they don't get that dream house after all, maybe have them find another? I just feel like the topic of moving hasn't been approached again, which is weird with how suddenly it dropped, you know? But they were dealing with a lot of other stuff, not to mention they were devastated so it was probably difficult to even approach again... but still, maybe enough time has passed by this point for them to start looking again. :)
3) The ring/Alex proposing. Yes, they just got back together, but if you really are stuck, you could perhaps skip a bit ahead and move to that? Or it could just happen not too long after this; I've seen less convincing stuff in stories, definitely. XD So that wouldn't be too out there, haha. But again, this is just kind of an obvious answer to what to do next; perhaps you just didn't see that happening quite yet.
4) Them possibly visiting Whitney's fam again. I could see a lot happening with that. And, hey, I feel like it's been a while since they've been mentioned, and there was the visit in the first installment, so why not here too? Plus, maybe the engagement idea could mix in with this, who knows. :) But yeah, it would be sweet to see her family's interaction with their new grandson, and I remember her sister looked forward to her son and Whitney's playing together.
I think this is all of the main ideas I thought of as a I read again up to what you've posted. lol, this is gonna be a long comment.
But, I just want to see this story continue/wrap up. You put so much into it, I'd hate to see it go unfinished. And again, sorry if I'm jumping the boat with assuming that you're not planning on updating... perhaps you are, and in which case, take your time. I just haven't heard anything, so, that's what has me constantly coming back to leave comments, I guess. XD lol. But I understand if life is just hectic for you right now; you mentioned it briefly in your last author's note, but I feel like it's been a lot longer than precedented, yes?
Anyway, please let me know if you're still signing on, at least. That way I know my comments are at least being seen, lol. That way I'll stop bothering you as well. ;)
But yeah, so... I really hope to see this continued again. That would be awesome. :) Hope this comment maybe brings some more inspiration, or at the very least, a smile since I'm so insistent, lol.

You disappeared. :O
Just wanted to leave a comment because I was thinking about this story, and definitely miss it. :( Hope everything is okay girl.
Hope maybe to see an update again soon. :) This story is too great to leave incomplete. I know in the last author's note you said things were gonna be hectic for you, so, maybe you're still dealing with stuff, but just hope to see you come back soon. <3

Please update soon!!

Oooh girl you said the romance was coming soon, but wasn't expecting it until at least another chapter or two. But you brought it as soon as you could. XD :P
Great job with the update! Sigh, as hot as this chapter was, XD, can't help but feel nervous that something is brewing under the surface. You said that there's still stuff to come though, so maybe that's why it's in my head... grr. So now I'm just worrying.
LMAO, Jack on the character page, I clicked on the main page for an update, but didn't even realize the picture was there until I read that in the author's note. XD Was worried about getting to the new chapter. What's he doing there? :O Hmm... not sure if you just added that to put some humor or if he'll end up being a huge feature in the story. :O Oh gosh...
Interested in seeing what's next in store! Take your time with updates, though, deary, we'll be here. :D lol, and thankfully it's not really a cliffhanger, so I can be more patient. XD

Well... at least they got to have some alone time fun finally. :)

And he can't be THAT mad still about the Eric thing if he's still thinking about having more babies with Whitney. At least I hope... that part still makes me nervous!

:O
Yessss... excited to see what's all in store then! :D

@Newyork_xo
What about a mixture of the two Eric situation options? Because I can promise he'll get over it, but I CANT promise he'll get over it without Hulking out a little.

Okay, it was equally adorable and incredible inconvenient timing for Will to say his first word when he did. And pshhh, if I was Whitney I'd be pissed "mama" wasn't his first word!

Now, as far as the Eric thing goes, I see it going one of two ways... One, where Alex is incredibly mature about the whole thing and understands why Whitney waited to tell him and gets over it real quick. Orrrrrr two, where he pretends he's okay and let's it eat away at him until he explodes, taking everyone out with him. I vote for option one, but where's the fun in that??

Also, I agree that these two need to have a nice evening together, baby and drama-free, yanno, before Alex goes nuclear on them all.

@Nanook
Haha trust me, Alex is nowhere near over any of this, there's still some shit left to hit the fan. A 'romantic' update WILL be coming for them soon though, so get ready ;) LMAO!

Thank God she told him! When she started to and Will interrupted... I mean, it was adorable, but I was like UGH C'MON. XD lol, so instead of enjoying the cute moment I was just like, get to it, telllllll himmmm... XD
But okay, it happened and I'm happy. Now it's just in Alex's hands, I guess, and what he chooses to do. I think maybe he should know the extent to which Eric went to get their address, if it's not already assumed? Like, get fucking security protecting them, stat. XD Like, she didn't tell him about the file snooping part, but perhaps again, that's just assumed, idk.
Something occurred to me as I was reading this chapter, and the last, and I guess just like the last however many. Maybe this whole sequel really? Or no, following Alex being a doofus and kissing Sophia. Like, Alex is so much more mature in this installment and it's so weird, considering the first installment. XD Or Whitney and his's relationship is more matured? Maybe that's it.
Like I'm just now feeling those vibes for some reason. Does this comment make any sense? It probably doesn't. XD
But I still get so excited, bouncing in my seat when I see there's a new update to this. :D That never changes. I think I'm slightly over the tears of frustration each update now, LMAO.
Interested in seeing what's next in store! :D I think we need a 'romantic' update for these two soon. ;) (That was so awkward for me to type, and still is as I currently type, but you get what I mean, yes? :P It's been a minute, LMAO).
Here I am, back to shipping them. Thinking Eric is a creep. Who would've thought this five or so comments ago? XD

Ahhhh, crap, Whitney! This was the perfect opportunity for you to tell him about Eric's creepy Mother's Day visit! The longer she waits, the harder it will be for Alex to understand and more likely for him to think something more happened when it didn't. Oh maaaan, I just hope he doesn't find out from his mom first. That will suuuuck! But also, i do kind of get why she didn't say anything in that moment. It was the first time things were okay with them in so long, i probably wouldn't want to ruin it either. Now I feel like I'm just rambling. I'm sorry. I'll stop. Just update soon! <3

Great update! Wasn't expecting it so soon, can't wait for more !!!!

YAASSS, Whitney. Slay queen, slayyyyy.
XD
It wasn't as much of assertiveness as I was thinking/hoping would go down, but you definitely brought some and enough to make me happy. Finally, she's standing up for herself, being the independent queen she is! :)
lol. I'm sorry if my comments are too much, I just seriously get into this story.
Which, by the way, you already updated again! Woot woot, wasn't expecting another update so soon, but I'm happy you chose to post again! :D
lol, this should be good when she tells him the rest though. Dammit, just hoping Alex can be more understanding and not be put in a pissy mood against her again. *rolls eyes* XD If anything, he should strongly think about getting them a body guard, or something security-wise going at the house, now that Eric knows where she lives.
Happy that they made up, and that things are getting better. :) I mean even if there is still the one thing, they at least got over one hurdle, right? .... riiiight? XD
I have no idea what you have planned, lol.
But great job with the update! :D Excited to see more. :)

Yay they're happy. At least for now, because Whit still has to tell Alex about Mother's day

I sighed.
Me too, Whitney. Me too girl.
I don't know what factor is still frustrating me about this story. XD My God, maybe it's just the fact that Whitney is taking this so well, all calm while just being slightly sad, whereas if I were her, I would be so pissed off. First of all, the distancing is a bit mixed-signal, so how can she not be frustrated with that (she is a little, but again, not as high-scale as I would've thought). Second, the fact that Alex has a whole group behind him, and Whitney barely has May on her side (or I mean present in this chapter anyway, y'know)... like what.
I don't know. This chapter just made me upset for her. I think I need her to like yell at him, or maybe go back home and see her parents, so she has a good group going on her side. XD The yelling may work though, since it seems like they're gonna talk about things, lol. But, like, it's not balanced and it's not fair. :( And I'm also annoyed with the fact that all of the band is taking Alex's side on it, yet he caused it? Like I can't with that thought, if they're truly, fully on his side knowing that.
lol, I think I'm just used to issues being worked through quickly in stories. You're definitely drawing it out more than I've seen typical writers do for fan fics; maybe it's just that I'm not used to. It's not a bad thing though, probably more realistic actually... but just, frustrating. XD
I do hope they work things out, though; I'm just hoping we see more confident Whit come through with this confrontation. Right now, she's taking things in stride, but we need that big moment from her, where we're all like "YESSSS QUEEN" when she tells it like it is. You know? XD Maybe that'll happen if she reveals the Eric thing... make us think it'll get her into more trouble, but she turns it around and owns it. >:)
lol. Great job overall with the update! :) My frustration is present but still enjoying the story. Interested in seeing what happens next.
P.S. -- I'm adding a thought. Maybe it's the fact that Alex is distancing himself, but yet Whitney isn't? ...THAT'S IT!! I think that's what I'm finding frustrating. So maybe if Whitney brings that up and how it's not entirely fair, I'll be happy. XD Because they were even, and then Alex pulled the even greater distance thing with going on tour, and threw things off. :( Or like maybe she distances herself again, but idk how that would work out. XD
But alas, you probably have it figured out with where you want to go. Just needing to vent, basically, with my feedback, LMAO.
Okay, I'm done now. :P

Omg it's killing me I need to know what they need to talk about this is getting too good the anticipation is killing me!!!

What's strange about you updating today is the fact that earlier I was thinking about this story

I hope that this means the coldness is over. Hopefully, Alex will be understanding that Eric visited and believe her that she sent him away, and not freak out. They need to be back together properly.