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@Nanook
People just suck in general, except Alex in this case ;)
I've been working on the next update for ages now, so I don't think my idea of banging a few out really worked xD
My break ends next week (I go back the 14th, but am leaving home the 12th). We'll see how things go next term.
Hey girlll hey. :D Would you look at that, I didn't take as long as last time. XD I don't think? lol maybe I did.
But great job with the update! I love that Alex was understanding and actually wasn't mad at her right away. Sure, it made him sad, but that kind of comes with what happened. It's awesome to see that he trusted her and actually didn't get snippy with her right away. He was just, there for her, and it's cute how he knows her well-enough to read her body language and know what she's feeling.
But yeah, I still can't with Olivia, or even other girls that act like that. Like, they should realize how crummy the guys are, and it's not Mickey's fault that he was more into her than he was Olivia. Like that was all on him. :/ Although there are definitely exceptions to this I guess. But it's like, all the blame is always put on the girl, never the guy. It's really lame.
I'm hoping to get to your other update soon here too. I may have to read that one tomorrow, not sure I'll have time to get to it at the moment, but I see it so I'm getting to it! XD
Excited to see more of this one though as well. :) Hope your Christmas went well, and hope you're enjoying break (not sure how long it lasts for you; we actually had until the end of January until our new semester started after Christmas when I was in university).
@Nanook
HEEEYYYY!
Mickey doesn't really seem to have luck with friends. One gets murdered, another turns on her, and one fucking falls in love with her (or at least, that's what everybody keeps saying).
I feel like I may have many accidental capital 'I's in my work from now on. I got a new laptop and whenever I type a single lowercase i it turns into an uppercase I automatically. So, I might accidentally put the space in the wrong place when typing quickly and it will autocorrect to 'I t'. You know, like phones do.
As for all the other mistakes... I'm guessing its just me being sloppy xD
OMG you're back! And so am I, apparently. XD Man, I've just had a lot going on mental health wise, and like, dealing with job struggles... it hasn't been fun, but that's why it took me so long to comment.
I mention this, though, because I'm glad you have been having fun at university. :) That's the good kind of busy. Or, well, save for assignments and tests, but amen if you like those. XD
Great job with the new update! OMG, the fact that Olivia turned on her so quickly... I mean, I guess you can't blame her for Mickey's past, but, like, give the girl a chance to explain. I was on Mickey's side with wanting to tell her before she suffered heartbreak, but whatever, she definitely deserves it now after what all she said. Like man.
Hmm... I'm hoping Mickey is truthful with Alex and explains everything that happened... and that he doesn't get too angry and just lets her explain, unlike Olivia. Sigh.
Some things I spotted (I am back in the mode! lol):
But then again, I could tell him that because it would cause him to ask Mason to set him up with another girl and ignore Olivia.
She could tell him that? I think that was meant to be couldn't, lol.
One one hand, I couldn’t take it because Olivia was pining over him.
One one. Two two. Three three. XD
To get her into it, It started out normal, but
I just did the first part of this sentence, lol. Was confused on why the "it" before started was capitalized?
I just had to find a way to tell Olivia with her getting too hurt.
Similar to that one other mistake, I think you wanted "without" here. lol. Like, she didn't initially want her to get hurt, right?
Here I was, hoping to get my old childhood friend back, and she turned on my so quickly.
Should be "me" instead of "my."
“What wrong?”
Alex saying this at the end. *What's
I think some of these dealt with that doc program you work with... I think you told me before that it got rid of n't, 's, like anything with an apostrophe. XD If I'm remembering correctly.
Great job with the update! Interesting turn of events I think. Interested in seeing what you have next in store! Hopefully it won't take me as long to comment next time. Hopefully.
I am so legitimately angry?¿
Like who the FUCK does Olivia think she is
Who the fuck does Mason think HE is
And just fuck Brian cuz he seems like a pig
@Mrs. Gaskarth
So glad you like it. I'm finally starting to work on my stories again, so there will be more coming
@Nanook
I know the exact interview. I just can't find it.
This happens way too often when I want to check things. I can literally still imagine how they were sitting.
XD LMAO you remember Jack's hair? XD How. lol, you're already closer to recalling the exact interview.
But yeah I think I've watched close to if not all. XD
Haha, yeah, I feel ya, I feel like it's something I'd miss too.
@Nanook
I know exactly which interview it is. I remember how they sat and I do believe they were on their bus. They also talked about a drinking game with cards and they kept contradicting each other. Jack had long hair and no blonde in it, so either 2009 or 2011. I'm pretty sure I've watched all of their interviews as well... if you can't tell xD
I do make mistakes like that a lot. It's quite annoying because I can't see them. I know what my writing is supposed to say, so I easily look over one missing letter.
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What the HELL happened to Mickey omg
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