Sparks Fly - Comments, page 14

Sami is awesome! More Sami in the future, please!!!

I loved the bit in the car. It was funny. Aww, Sami is sweet for making sure Alex wouldn't hurt Brook. I surely hope he doesn't.

@RHSK143
@Tabbyjb

i guess we'll just have to see what happens...

I agree with tabbyjb, your Jack seems really nice so far. I liked his advice. :)

i love Jack. i swear to god i do. the real jack, the fanfiction version of jack. your jack is super sweet and wise, i like it haha

@tabbyjb
@RHSK143

He's a silly boy.

Oh alex....

Haha yes a definite "oh Alex" moment there.

@RHSK143
It's coming! :)

I can't wait for an update. I'm waiting on all the drama to come haha. Can't wait for you to bring in the other two members. :)

@tabbyjb
There will be tons of drama to come, don't worry!

@RHSK143
Staaaay tuned... :-)

Ok i forgive him for now. But if he hurts brooke, im gonna be really upset.
no but honestly, i love these two and the way you write them. I just hope alex is gonna be honest with he about everything. I know it makes a good story ('cause drama...) when theres secrets and lies and heartbreak and i usually love it, but for some reason i dont want to see these two get hurt, especially brooke!
Gaahhh, im already too emotionally invested in this story, lol

I really love the personality you've given to Alex in this. I knew that the beginning lovey fluffy stuff between her and Alex was going to be interrupted in some way. I wonder what will happen with Lina now that Alex and Brook are a bit more serious. Can't wait for more updates. :)

@tabbyjb
Aww, no! Don't be mad at him. It's not his fault. Feelings are hard! :-P

@RHSK143
Thanks for reading! Stay tuned. More should be up soon! :)

oh no im so mad at alex right now lol

Hey! I've just created an account here but I've been reading your story since posting it. I'm really enjoying your story. I wonder what's going to happen next! :)

@Carebear
Thanks for the feedback! It's nice to know at least one person is actually reading this, haha. I should have the next update posted shortly. :)

I am so sorry, I have been reading this story but I have been super busy and I just haven't had time to construct a comment. I really love this story though. I think your characters are great! The pacing is wonderful. I look forward to reading more.