Sparks Fly - Comments, page 13

@Newyork_xo
Can't blame ya. It's a really good movie. One of my favorites. Piper Perabo gives me life

@Alex Gascarth
Ha! That might be where the inspiration for that part came from. ;-)

@RHSK143
@tabbyjb
An adorable idiot. That's exactly how I was hoping to portray Alex. haha.

Oh Alex...not again... He is adorable though. :) I'm with Jack, he needs to tell Brook about Lina before she finds out on her own...

Oh my god *facepalm* he's such an idiot. It's adorable haha

The end of the first chapter reminds me of the movie Coyote Ugly

@RHSK143
@tabbyjb

Thank you guys for all the love on this story. I love that you guys are discussing what you think is going to happen.

@tabbyjb
Yes I had a feeling Jason may do that as well. Alex might have been right to be jealous of him. I hope not. First Lina, and now maybe Jason, getting in the way of Alex and Brooke...I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

@RHSK143
Yeah he sure is a nice guy. But he's gonna make Alex jealous and unsure. And i bet he's gonna make a move on Brooke at some point because he's lonely and stuff. I dont likeeee it hahha i sure it's all gonna be fine for brooke and alex. I mean, i love me some slow burn but i hate obstacles and heartbreak and drama lol

@tabbyjb

I don't know he seems nice enough...but then nice can end up in disaster...the only problem is that he's got a long distance girlfriend, so not sure how that will go...yes Jason needs to go it's Alex and Brooke all the way haha.

Ughh this jason guy needs to go lol

Oh fuck im crying!!!

also... I dont like Lina being in Europe while alex is in europe! Nooope lol

Oh I Really hope it will end nicely for them both...

@swana99
Aww, thank you so much for such a sweet comment! :-)

As for the "Lina" thing... I have no idea what you're talking about. ;-)

@tabbyjb
It won't be too horribe... Or will it?

Also... "Lina"... hmm.... I wonder who this character could possibly be based off of ;)

Hi! I made an account just so I could tell you how much I love this story (and I'm pretty lazy, so trust me, that means a lot). I think you're fantastic at giving each character very distinct, real, believable personalities. I absolutely love this version of Alex. You've fleshed him out enough that I understand and sympathize with some of his dickier decisions (such as sleeping with Lina). I find that in many fanfictions when the main character does something like that I'm just thinking "wow you absolute DICK" but you make your Alex human enough that instead I'm thinking "ooh, Alex, that wasn't a good choice, but I completely understand why you're so confused- I would be too." Long story short... good job! Keep doing what you're doing please; each update makes my day. :)

Ughhhhhh! He needs to tell her about Lina! But im sure it's not gonna happen, right? You're gonna make Brooke find out in some horrible way, aren't u? Hahha
great chapter! Loved it.

@tabbyjb She'll be back; don't worry!

@RHSK143
He's going to try his best... :-)