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@Nanook
Its easier for me because it means I can write where ever I want. Also its because I can write something down but when I re write it in word I can make it better if needs be.
Oh nice, I didn't realize people still did that. Write it out on paper I mean. XD I used to do that when I first started, but then it got a bit too tedious for me, so I just type it in a word doc. lol.
@Nanook
things are going to get interesting.
it was the first time i have ever written anything detailed smut wise.
and i should have the next chapter up soon. i write it on paper first and then write it up in word. im just finishing up the next chapter on paper. so hopefully it will be up monday or tuesday.
glad you like the story xxx :)
Oooh... getting a bit risque in this chapter.
Great job with the update though. I guess? I feel awkward saying that. lol.
But hmm... I wonder if this Elliott character will play a big role in this story, or is he simply a one-time life saver? And why the urgent text from Jack at the end? :O
Hope Carlie's gonna be okay. :(
Can't wait to read more! :)
I like this story. I just read all that you have of it so far and now I'm just wondering what's going to happen next. :O
It's a bit rushed with some parts, but overall I like the story line and I think Alex and Carlie's relationship is so sweet. :')
You're a good writer! Keep it up! I will be here to read. :)
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OH NOESSSS! Carlie Gaskarth. Thats cute. I like this couple together. Thank you Elliott for saving her. He better not be sniffing around Alex's girlfriend. :o( That is a no no. Your smut went well. :o) Good job.
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