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Aw. :( I know how that feels. I just generally want to be able to travel. :)
We're the same age! :D I turned 21 back in January though lol.
@Nanook
lol. im from england so anywhere in the US is brilliant to me i hate england would love to live in the US. im 21 in 2 and a half months and living in the states is my dream.
:( Eh, it's not as great as it seems, lol. But I will admit that once I started getting into the band, it made me happier to live where I do, because it's kind of close to their hometown, lol. Because like nothing good is around here, but then I found out that they were, so I was like, yes, this part of the US doesn't completely suck. XD
Oh gotcha.
And that's understandable, lol. Hmm... other places besides McDonald's that can be east coast are Burger King, Shake Shack (which is probably the east coast equivalent of In-N-Out), Hardee's, just to name a few. If you ever need help figuring out different places let me know. :) I'm literally a hour and a half away from where ATL grew up, lol.
But I thought it was good, yeah, I think what made it a bit longer was the text convos kind of making everything extend. But I didn't mind it. :)
@Nanook
Thanks!
she hasnt quite fully forgiven them.
and thanks for telling me about in n out i didnt know lol i just didnt want to put maccies lol.
chapter should have been longer but i thought it was a tad too long.
Aw, yay, they're back together. :D Think she forgave them a little too easily though tbh. Ehhh... idk. Just with what she's been through and all. She should have Alex make it up to her more, lol.
But great job with the update! Wonder how long this facade will work... hmm...
Something to note: if this is in fact set in Baltimore, there wouldn't be In-N-Out. Just so you know, the restaurant is more of a west coast thing, lol.
But anyway, anticipating reading more! :D
Why is Elliott sticking out so bad to us? I think its because fanfic readers never trust the sweet and innocent. I am glad you are posting again. I really hope her friends tell her whats up soon. I think she needs to know. It will be better that way. This is such a good story. :o)
I finally caught up!! I feel so bad for Carlie and I don't trust Elliot for some reason, he seems suspicious. I hope all her friends ignoring her helps her in the long run because she really needs them. Also I completely love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter but don't stress yourself about it; take your time! I hope you feel better soon!!
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Oh, gotcha. I guess that's why it feels like something's missing then. It'll probably make more sense once it's put in.
And ohh.... hmm, interested in seeing what happens with that then. I wasn't thinking he should be a total problem with them anyway; just like a temporary one where Alex gets jealous of him briefly or something. But then he would find out later. But yeah, it's whatever you want to do. :)
And okay, that makes sense now. :)
And haha, yes, Rita's is actually an Italian Ice place. They don't really have ice cream, but it kind of is like an ice cream parlor so that's why I didn't say anything... they just sell Italian Ice instead of ice cream, lol. Italian Ice is kind of more slushie-like, except thicker and more flavorful. They don't have milkshakes either. They do have custard though which is kind of like ice cream but tastes slightly different and is different in texture/consistency, but it still is served in a cone like ice cream. You don't have to correct it but just wanted to note that. :)
@Nanook
I really appreciate the comment it did make me giggle.
i am so glad that you are enjoying this story.
i did actually point a flashback in as to why they are not talking to her but i thought id leave it with a tiny bit of mystery you will find out soon enough why.
Elliott i can say though wont be a problem between Alex and Carlie but he will be a problem towards another couple.
i will be updated soon dont worry.
the reason you got two notifications was i wrote an authors note as to why i wasmt writing a few days ago and then when i updated i deleted it.
i try my hardest with research ive watched so many interviews with the guys and they mention Rita's in a few so I googled it.
:)
I'm a bit confused because I got two notification updates for this but there's just one? What? XD Maybe you fixed something with this chapter or another? Hmm...
But anyway, great job with the chapter! I am just as confused as Carlie though. lol. Like why are they avoiding her?! Did Jessie threaten them? That's the only thing I can figure and they're not letting Carlie know about it, but c'mon, they could at least tell her so she knows that's why.
This is bull, though. Alex loves her sooo much but he's avoiding her like that? COME ON. She needs them. I don't think they realize things could be much worse if they AREN'T there for her, not just with Jessie, but just, worried about the girl for her own self-doubts, really. :(
So you know what? I'm currently shipping her and Elliott more than Alex at the moment because c'mon, at least the dude's there for her. Alex and friends have me aggravated at the moment. >:( Carlie, the poor girl. They should have the guilt eating them alive, let it!
lol. I'm just so riled up about this. Apologies. It's just like, why. It just bothers me so much that they're not even giving her an explanation. Although I guess we have to take into consideration that they may not be able to. Sigh.
But let Alex see Carlie and Elliott getting close together! Make that happen! Because you know what, he deserves it at the moment. XD Seriously. While overall for this story I'm hoping for Carlie and Alex, a chapter or two with her and Elliott does not hurt a thing given the circumstances. lol. And I'm sure Elliott could beat Jessie up, I have faith since he saved her the first time.
Great job with the update though, I'm not criticizing at all just sort of aggravated with the gang's actions is all... like just that they're ALL agreeing to it. Not one of them is trying to at least give Carlie a hint. Meh.
I really hope you update soon because I'm really looking forward for what you next have in store. You're a great writer, and I'm sorry to hear you've been feeling down. I hope this comment cheers you up, perhaps entertains you a bit with my aggravation, lol, I know there's a certain deviousness in that that writer's get when readers get that into a story. :P
Can't wait for more! :)
Oh, and on a final random note, Rita's, yes! You have done your ATL research and I like that. ;)
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Aw, it's okay, take your time girl to recover. <3 Hope college is going okay, I know what it's like; currently trying to wrap up my senior year of it. But I'll still be here to read when you can write again. :)
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