Perfect Boyfriend - Comments, page 3

@brittbrattcatt
So... does that mean you want me to go through it more and point out things or are you not worried about it? Haha.
lol, true, and I'm not saying it's not a lot, but more so just considering his advanced-ness. Like considering he pretty much passes for a human, I was thinking like millions of dollars. XD Because, seeing as that has yet to exist in the real world, it would probably be more expensive if it ever did, unfortunately. You can keep it as is but I was just relating my own thoughts on it. lol.
And yeah... I got excited, lol, so I tend to type a lot when I really enjoy something. :D

@Nanook
I actually suck with grammar and most of time I don't spot it until its to late. Usually I try to keep it right, but today things got crazy while writing it and didn't pay attention. Okay but 300,000 is a lot for a college student lol. but damn girl! i'm surprised by how long your comment is!

Holy shit this is seriously the cutest story I have ever read. OMG askakseoawrej robot Alex is so freaking adorable. XD *blushing face emoji*
You're very on it with updates. Keep it up! This is the only story I'm reading being updated at the moment, lol.
Oh my gosh there were so many great moments between these two chapters... I'm like laughing that they thought the point of her getting him was for them to do it. LMAO. And then Rian treats it like a product "Why we would he take something back that's been used?" I'm dying with laughter.
$300,000 actually isn't too bad considering how advanced he seems. Unless that was just the first initial payment? Idk.
And Alex got so happy when she gave him a name. So cute. Like seriously this story is like the cutest thing ever. I went aww so many times. Like this story just has my heart already. XD
But yay she gets to keep him longer! Maybe? What would happen if she doesn't pay? Or how is she going to be able to? :O
Maybe Alex should rob a bank with his robot abilities. XD
And PLOT TWIST, which, I'm not sure if you already have this in mind or not... will Alex perhaps start feeling so much he turns into a human? Is this even possible?! Anything is possible with this story it seems. This is just a prediction. ;) That would be seriously amazing though. Not to... influence your writing or anything... XD
Gosh I am just loving this so much I'm rambling sorry but I really do. XD
Great job with the update! Can't wait to see what's next in store!
Oh, and I noticed with this last update, there were quite a few spelling errors (not to too harshly critique or anything), but, I just point this out because would you like me to point out things I spot? I do this usually with stories when people ask for critiquing or specifically ask to point out anything off so I don't want to do it with yours and you find it annoying. Because, I understand it can be annoying. I'm not too sure if you're worried that much or not. But I can do that if you want me to. If not, that's okay too. :) And it's just simple stuff that would just take another read through. :)

@Nanook
your comment just made my morning xD oh trust me, its longer than 2 days, and you'll see why lol

Awwww this is so cute! I love how she had to kiss him to activate him and how he protected her. So sweet. "Why did you send me a dead body?" I laughed at that. XD
Sorry for the delay in commenting I got a bit side tracked with life mehhh...
lol, every time Alex talks and moves I'm just like picturing an actual robot even though I assume he's passable as a human? Seeing as no one's questioning it.
I loved the window part lmao. Technicalities, technicalities.
And I love how you're bringing the rest of the members of ATL into this. Zack, and Rian, lol. Rian's definitely... a character. Not creepy at all.
And Nyssa thinks it's too long but I'm sitting here thinking two days?! That's it?! XD I feel like that isn't long at all what kind of company is this. XD Like shouldn't it be a little longer so she can get used to him being there and like maybe being able to prove a point with all the people the bully her? But I'm not sure what you have in mind with this so idk, that might change the limiting factor.
I'm excited to see what you have in store for this! I thought the mood ring thing was kind of cool but kind of creepy too... lol. Can't wait for more though.
Alex is such a sweet robot. :) Darling... darling. Haha. I would die.

This is adorable. I can totally relate to this. It will be interesting to see where you go with this. :o)

Oh, okay, thanks. :)
Great job with this new update! :) Poor Nyssa, though. People are so rude, seriously. I can relate to her. :/
Hoping that she gets her spirits brought up soon. :)

@Nanook

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=drroGpqCxSk google didn't give me the best pictures of the girl, but here's the show I found her in

Hmm... sounds like an interesting concept. :)
I'm wondering; who's the girl you're having play Nyssa? I just want to look up more pictures, lol, with the picture you chose it's kind of hard to see what she looks like, with the side angle.
But I'm excited to see what you have in store for this. I saw your comment and it made me happy to see you're writing an ATL fic again. Yay! :D
I shall be subscribed. :)