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Girl, where'd you gooooo...
Just wanted to leave a comment showing I haven't forgotten about this story. Hope everything's good. <3

Hello, I'm new here but I've been reading your story without an account. I really like it. I love that Alex is a robot, it's something different. I can't wait for an update when it arrives. :)

Aw. Well then...
lol. Kind of messed up with saying the head of the company is the owner in the last comment. You know what I meant though. I just kind of found it odd that she's just involved in general. XD
I'm waiting for some sort of plot twist on the actual owner though. XD Idk if there was anything planned with that or not, but just a thought that crossed my mind.
I think Jack took it kind of well... considering. XD Found it noble that Nyssa wanted her mind erased if Jack's was, I think it's time he knew the truth too, just so he wasn't in the dark anymore.
And I think Alex has definitely progressed into being more human. Sex isn't the only goal on his mind anymore, so that's good. lol. XD
Can't wait to see what happens next! :D

Holy crap, plot fucking twist to the max!
I was not expecting that to be the explanation, lol. But as I was reading 38 I started thinking maybe that was the case, what with Jungkook the robot constantly saying "You will be mine." lol. That sounded very much like the robot goal, turns out it fit.
This company sure is a winner. XD God, so worried about that damn info, like who cares?! You can't rush love, dammit! XD
lol, I enjoyed these two updates though, very intense and action filled. By the way, I love how they were able to find her after the robot said he was taking her somewhere where no one would be able to find them, or like he said how he'd be able to keep her to himself. Clearly not. XD Not a very intelligent robot, clearly.
I love how the head of the company is gorgeous, by the way. Like you would think that the owner would be just as geeky looking or something for some reason, like ergo why the company would have been made, but it's the opposite and I find that interesting.
I love how Alex keeps calling Nyssa his girl. *blushy face emoji* Sooooo cute awwww. :D And also, so sweet how he saved her. I love him. lol.
Great job with the updates! Can't wait for more! Very delayed with commenting again, sorry about that. I'm done for the summer now though, or well, other than my internships, but I'll have a lot more free time to read. :)
Oh, and I also saw ATL at Preakness/InfieldFest on Saturday, so I was out of town for that stuff. XD They were awesome. :D

@Nanook
oh gosh girl lol, my last day was wednesday so i was like "i'm gonna write!!"

Wait a minute, WHAT.
WHO WAS THAT LADY. What. XD
I'm like laughing at the randomness though. Kind of. Is that bad? XD
Just like that lady showing up I mean. Not the rest of it. Like is she with Jungkook? Did he send her to distract Alex?
I'm a little worried though Nyssa's in that room and I was just waiting for that woman to pop out and do something. Like she just left Alex there? I'm doubting that...
And sorry if my last comment seemed really critical. I'm taking creative writing this semester, and I was getting a bit fed up with it so I was letting my critiquing go into that last comment. lol. But yeah, I was still confused. Sorry if it sounded kind of harsh, though. This semester is getting to me, thank God it's finals week.
Nyssa has seriously been through so much. All these guys just need to lay off. This is what, the third that tried something? Fourth? Although I'm not trying to count Alex into that equation, because that situation was a bit different I think.
So much drama in this chapter, I'm still laughing at the random woman, oh my... I don't think this is normal. XD
But great job with the update! Can't wait for more! Oh, and I got your message! I think you pretty much reiterated what you said in the comment back, so I'll save the double response, haha. But I understand, I guess, I'll just wait and see what happens.
And lol. Six hours of sleep actually sounds awesome. That sounds like a good night for me actually. Lately I've been lucky if I've gotten four hours a night during the week. XD :/

@Nanook
yeah when i was writing this, i was finishing another fic where the O/C is named Claire. here's what you need to keep in mind: there's a reason as to why I threw Jungkook in. it's not random, there's a reason behind it. and as one who doesn't like giving spoilers, you're just going have to wait and see what happens. i can promise you that her final decision will come down between Alex and Jack, but just be willing to wait to see what happens. also, how the fuck am i up at 7 am when i went to bed after 1 am lol.

Two updates for me to catch up on. Great job with both! :D
Going back into chapter 34, I saw you put "Okay! Give it up again for Claire and Alex!" lol. When it was Nyssa and Alex. :P I can't believe I missed that before. Honest mistake though.
Some advice with this story: I would stick with two possible love interests. Throwing a third into the mix is just making it a tad chaotic, but maybe that's just me. Plus I feel like we haven't seen as much from Jack now, so it's almost like Jungkook's replacing him without Jack's disappearance being fully explained.
Although I am liking the cuteness between Alex and Nyssa. It's really sweet that she's staying loyal to him. :) Another reason why Jungkook's annoying in the story, lol, I realize he had a crush on her, and he promised to keep his distance, but what, he lied? Because he seems like he's going back on that.
Idk. Unless there is a bigger reason for having him a part of this story other than drama with another love interest, I don't see why he is completely needed. If it's the ideas you're lacking on, maybe it's just time to wrap it up? Although I do enjoy the story, don't get me wrong, so I would be sad if it ends. I'll probably be sad no matter when it ends. lol.
But yeah, just offering some thought. Do with it what you will, it's your story.
Can't wait for more. :)

Great job with the update! Sorry for the commenting delay. :/
Aww... it was cute, Alex was being sweet to her, but then Jack sang her a song so you kind of switched it on us again on who could possibly be better for her... haha. Not to mention, the guy she ran into from her past thought her and Jack would end up together. Oh my... so much back and forth with this story, I'm starting to see now. XD
But I can't wait to see what happens next! Weird how Jack just disappeared like that. :o

@Nanook
now you know why jack is so protective of her

Ohhh, okay, this makes more sense now.
Aww. Poor Nyssa. :( I'm glad Jack was able to intervene.
Great job with the update! Sorry that this comment isn't too long, I'm just not really feeling well. But I really did enjoy the chapter. :)
Can't wait for more!

@Nanook
HE DIDN'T RAPE HER I SWEAR

WAIT A MINUTE WHAT. HE DIDN'T RAPE HER, DID HE?!
Because it cut off and I'm thinking... hopefully it just cut off to show that time had passed until everything calmed down a bit, and not because... he went through with it... I don't think he did since he stopped before it cut to the new scene...
This went from cute to scary real quick. :/ I'm glad Alex turned back into a sweet potato though. :) At first I thought the shift was just jealousy... I mean I guess that was part of it, but with his robot programming, it went to a new level. More so possessive I guess. :O
Hmmm.... was Nyssa raped before though? Or maybe it was just someone forcing themselves on her... not exactly rape but like they tried and were stopped maybe...
But great job with the update! Real intense. Can't wait to see what happens next!
And don't worry about updating, figured it would slow down if you're dealing with school. I'm in the same boat. :/ I mean not with the updating part but just school's been a lot to deal with.

@Nanook
really sorry about not updating, i've been more busy with school for the past 2 weeks. even though i was on spring break last week, i still had to study for an important test in my major. and this past thursday i took that test. it's still nerve racking because i'm waiting on my final scores T_T

Ooohh Alex is jealous. :P
I'm just wanting to know how this resolves, lol. Alex or Jack?
It was kind of weird how worried about them Rian and Alex were. Like it seemed a lot more than simply that caring aspect. "We're going to be in a lot of trouble if something happens to her." Why will they get in trouble? :O Very government or forceful sounding. Or maybe I'm reading too much into it. XD
But can't wait for more! :D

LMAO, I am laughing at the fact that Alex kidnapped Jack just to prove something, and then it ended up being a stupid decision because now it's keeping Nyssa and Alex apart. XD Like really. You would think a robot would be smarter than that. :P
He just like straight up knocked him out badass-style and that amused me. XD Kudos for this idea of bringing Jack along, I had not suspected that to happen.
lol. Alex left his 'mark.' That was pretty amusing too. XD Especially when she freaked out a bit about it lol.
I'm glad Nyssa is standing up for herself. I'm glad she finally told Jack off a bit, too, because I think that's what has been annoying me: like he considers his emotions first but not hers. But at the same time he doesn't want her hurt... but honestly, his jealousy overpowers his consideration for her feelings. So I'm glad she was taking a step back from him.
But oh no! Nyssa is lost now. :O Wonder what's going to happen now...
Can't wait for more! :)

@Nanook
i was gonna update more before the weekend, but you know, school

Hmm... for some reason I didn't get the email notification for this new chapter... I got a notification for another story, which is why I logged in and managed to see this one, but not a notification sent for this one. Weird since it's worked pretty seamlessly before.... but I guess that's part of the reason I'm just now commenting, unless you just recently posted it? Idk.
But I also had a busy week, so, also why I'm just now here. lol.
But great job with the update. Ooooohhh... Alex be working them skillz. XD
And an island getaway, haha, this should be interesting.
Can't wait to see what happens next! :D

OMG their first real kiss! :DD YAAASSS, get it girl, get it! XD
And I'm glad Claire was able to find someone. I am... because now hopefully she can move on from starting drama. lol.
Great job! :D Can't wait for more!

Holy moly she nearly died. :O
Holy crap, well, I'm glad that whatever happened with Alex's system did. I take it that since his ring changed that drastically, that that's what did it, since death is a pretty serious thing.
I feel like in normal stories that's what happens to fix things, though, so I kind of like how it went with that concept. Like, if a couple is fighting, something drastic usually happens (usually a life-threatening type of situation) and everything after that is righted again. Or, well, in a lot of fan fics I read anyway. Haha.
But yeah, I'm glad she's okay. :) Woo! Excited to see what's next in store. She just needs to fully kiss him already, so we can get seductive Alex with her as opposed to Claire. ;) Muhaha. XD
Great job with the update! :D