Perfect Boyfriend - Comments, page 2

Ugh, Deadpool, I'm so jealous! I want to see that so bad! :(
lol. I was thinking that but I couldn't really tell if that was maybe karma for me saying that or not. I tend to overthink things. XD
These two chapters just made me sad again. lol. :( God, just the way he disregards her. It makes me sad.
But great job regardless! I wonder if she will win this bet. Claire just being a bitch again. Surprise surprise. But it does surprise me that she picked something sort of challenging for her; like, Claire seems to be getting annoyed with him, so you would think she would try to get rid of him more easily. XD
But, I can't wait to see what happens. Maybe I should stop making predictions, by the way, since you have everything planned out anyway. XD lol.

@Nanook
I leave to go see Deadpool right after I post this, and then I'm sorry but I laughed when I saw your comment. You had no influence on this chapter, because keep I mind I had written short summaries for ALL of the chapters ahead of time. AND YES YOU FINALLY CAUGHT ON. That's how I want you to feel! For Nyssa to just have happiness!!

OKAY. WHAT. THE. FUCK.
WHAT. IN THE. HELL. JUST. HAPPENED.
I am like crying right now. I seriously am.
Dammit, I really hope that what I said about Claire didn't influence this, and you already had this planned. XD Because now I feel like I put this against myself with even mentioning her in the last comment.
But you have to be kidding. Right? Is this real?! *wanders aimlessly* XD
God, if I didn't hate her before, I REALLY hate that girl now. Jesus. Why.
REFUND. REFUND. Get Rian up in this mofo. lol. What is this? Seriously.
For once I was glad Jack was there. Le sigh... my only hope at this point is that Alex will eventually realize that something is off now that he's with Claire. Or maybe Claire will get tired of him now that he's giving her the attention and not Nyssa.
This is such bull. I hate this. I am aggravated. >:(
Dammit, and now that I'm pissed at Alex, I'm starting to side with Jack now. XD Let him be with Nyssa. That girl just needs happiness.
So I think basically I'm just wanting Nyssa's happiness now. lol.
Maybe this is the flaw with their robot building system. Such bullshit. Sorry, I'm just like ranting now because this seriously pissed me off so much. Like, I had a feeling it was going to happen, him kissing another girl. But then he JUST LEAVES WITH HER. WTF.
Clearly I need to cool off. lol. Do not take any offense to this comment, just getting some emotions out...
But I can't wait to see what happens next! This should be interesting.
My heart is breaking for Nyssa. Seriously. :(
But to cool off some, in response to your last comment: yeah, this site did that to me when I first started using it. Somehow it stopped *knocks on wood* with loading slowly. But they need to work on that, though; I think my laptop just got used to it. LMAO.

@Nanook
what happens is that the site loads so fucking slow and you're waiting for a while, it's still loading, if you click anywhere it gives me a pop up that the page isn't responding.

Oh okay; that's really weird how this site doesn't let you go back and edit. That's a very sucky feature considering it's a writing site. Mibba lets you go back. What is the point of not having that?
But anyway, I guess I was a little sad with those updates, but they were greatly written. As for what's going on now...
Wow, so Claire dropped out? I'm glad Nyssa finally found out about her though, thank goodness. She deserves to know.
And then with Alex disappearing, I thought FOR SURE that he was up to something with Claire, because like she had been gone a week and then he had been acting weird for a week... a little too coincidental. So when the club thing came about, before it introduced that Alex was actually working there, I thought it was maybe like a strip club, and like that's where Claire had went and Alex was going there because he was like the 'pimp' or whatever you call it. LMAO. But this, lol, I guess this is kind of close, except Alex is being the host as opposed to like, the runner of the joint. XD
God Jack is just annoying me in this story. XD Just me? Okay. XD Like I just can't with him. Like it REALLY annoyed me how he followed her, although I suppose it shouldn't since Nyssa pretty much did the same with Alex... like each just kind of went after the one they 'love' (putting this in quotes because if you asked either of them their feelings in this story at the moment, they would completely deny them XD).
And I just feel like something's going to happen, I mean, other than the Jack drama that's about to ensue with him more than likely calling Alex out. XD Because these girls Alex is seeing just can't be trusted, I mean c'mon, they're going to a host club for a reason.
Rian is really looking like the antagonist in this story now. XD At the beginning he was looking the opposite but now he's like directing Alex to these other women. But maybe that's all a part of his plan... *evil smirk* Because at the end of chapter 17, he expressed some concern, so maybe he's doing this in an effort to get Alex and Nyssa's relationship to move along. Hmm...
I am waiting for the jealousy to be confronted. I am waiting. Idk if you're ever planning on doing it but I am just waiting because it's bound to be a bit humorous. And even though it might be a little odd, I would like to see Alex get a little jealous too. Idk how you would work that, though. Maybe if he turns into a human like I theorized a while ago...
But anyway, great job with the updates! I try to make these comments long seeing as I tend to miss a few chapters, so it makes up for me not commenting every chapter? Hopefully? :)
Can't wait for more! :D

@Jagk
thank you! :)

Just wanted to let you know that this story is amazing :)

@Nanook
so this site literally won't let me go back to chapters and edit them, unless I copy everything and then delete the chapter. Which I'm not going to do. Just letting you know for future reference

@Nanook
oh gosh i really did that!? GAH! GOTTA FIX THAT! part of me wondered how you would have felt with the last 2 updates, just because i know it's sad. but i had to include a chapter where Nyssa saw the difference between Alex and humans.

Hm, okay, in response to your comment:
I'm glad to hear about the summaries thing. That's an awesome idea, and that's great that it's motivating you to update more. :)
lol. Maybe you can use the jealousy thing in another instance coming up. ;) I'll find that entertaining, because Alex will more than likely use that to his advantage. Haha.
And gotcha, and I see how you explained why she hates her a bit more in this one new update. That was good with clarifying. :)
One thing I want to note that confused me: at the beginning of chapter 16, you put Claire's POV, when it was really Nyssa's. lol. I was picturing Claire but then it got into describing Nyssa and I was like, wait a minute. lol. Just a simple thing to fix there.
And Claire totally got what she deserved. Whatever. That was karma coming to bite her in the ass for hiding Nyssa's glasses. And also for the backstabbing she's done. If Nyssa deserved to be punished at all for what she did (which for the record, even after hearing the story, she clearly didn't when she wasn't even aware of the situation and Claire was just being the homewrecker in the first place), I think she's more than owned up to it by now, with Claire causing all of the misfortune with guys. I mean, it's not Nyssa's fault that, well, to put it bluntly, that Claire's a whore. XD
And she almost returned him, OMG. I was like crying. :( I'm glad she changed her mind though. From her POV I can see why she did that, though. And it was a bit concerning that he didn't even care that he pushed Claire to the side. But again, that was her karma coming to her regardless of Alex and Nyssa being aware of it. And I was like, kind of laughing up until the point Claire was trying to use that against them. Like no. Get out.
This is turning into another long comment. lol. Lots to say about this story.
But great job with the updates! Can't wait for more! :D

@Nanook
earlier this week i wrote down summaries for all of the future chapters and that's how i was able to update so much. keeping myself organized and not losing track. i basically wrote 35 summaries, which means a lot more chapters with this one. and you saying the jealousy thing, gah! why didn't i think of that!? to late now! for Claire, i had to find a motive for her to hate Nyssa, and that kind of was the only thing i could think of at the moment.

Whoa, so... a lot has happened. :O
What the fuck. That's all I have to say to the Claire situation. Wow. What a great friend. And how the hell did Nyssa prevent her from getting in the sorority? Wouldn't that be her own fault? Or was it just because she was hanging out with her? But Claire made that choice, regardless. To put that blame on Nyssa is just stupid.
I hope Alex is starting to compute things, or... whatever. lol. Like with Jack just telling him all of that. But I guess it's good that he sensed what Claire was doing was wrong. Somehow he didn't get that that Sara girl was doing the same thing though which I found a bit odd...
I thought for sure at one point that his mood ring was going to signify that Nyssa was jealous, like when he was spending that bit of time with Sara. Was kind of disappointed when it didn't. XD
And sigh... now this looks like it's learning toward a Jack story, and I mean, not that I don't love Jack, I do, but just, the whole concept that he didn't realize what he could've had until someone else, or I guess a robot XD, had it, it's just, very petty to me. I'm sorry, is this insincere? XD But this is just how I generally feel with something like this happening, story or even just in general with real life. It's like, c'mon now really? Especially with situations where the person seems happy with the new relationship. I mean it's kind of debatable with this one I guess, but I think she's really starting to like Alex. It's not his fault that he's still learning the ropes of women. lol.
But great job with the updates, seriously. And kudos for updating so much; I really feel bad that I take so long to comment, sorry. :/ I am just like sincerely limited to weekends now and it sucks. Bleh.
But I really can't wait for more! :)
And from chapter 12:
"We have our ways." That's just great to hear.
This was just my favorite part for some reason. XD Such sarcasm. So funny. XD

@Nanook
hope you enjoy the new update, i know its kind of a "oh shit" one. and that sucks that you got sick, i was sick for a few days and it caused me to skip class and leave another class early. i'm working on this story and another on a different site, so keeping up with them both might get crazy but i'm gonna try my best.

Great job with the update! Sorry for the delay in commenting; I had a hectic week and then Friday night I started feeling sick... still not feeling that great tbh but I had to check this out. :)
I'm still team Alex even though he's just a robot. But still... so sweet. Jack only seems to want her now that someone else has her; I mean why wouldn't he have made a move before now? But idk.
Can't wait to see what you have next in store. :) Sorry again for the commenting delay. :/

@Nanook
lol i just wanted to write a cute/funny chapter since the 2 before it were you know, the complete opposite and revealed more about Nyssa

Haha, OMG. This story just keeps getting better and better. XD
Great job with the update! I'm laughing; he just stripped in front of her. And the whole underwear thing... wow. XD
But I like that Alex at least stays dedicated to Nyssa. She doesn't have to worry about him leaving with other girls. He seemed unfazed by those girls at the mall. XD
This story is just so sweet. :) Can't wait for more! :D

Hey-o!
So I had off again Tuesday, which is why I was able to read this. :D
I was celebrating my birthday, too, yay! Another day off and you updated this... twice since I last read, so I had something to read. :)
Great job with the updates! :D
No, Jack, go away. I am so team robot Alex or just... Alex idk but NO JACK WILL NOT MESS THIS UP I DON'T CARE. XD
Alex is still so sweet. So sweet. And even though he kind of scared Nyssa I still love him because he was so concerned for her then, aww... :)
Hmm... this should be interesting now that she knows she has to do it with him, lol. But I mean... is it really that bad? ;) LMAO.
Can't wait for more. No cancelation tomorrow so I'll probably be going on weekends starting after this comment... :/
And yeah, I feel ya. Just post when you can though, no worries. :)

@Nanook
i started college back on the 11th, and i know i'm about to get busier really soon. so basically i'm gonna try my hardest to update this, and other things i'm working on

OMG. :D
LMAO. Alex just wants to have sex with her, classic guy right? ;) But at least he's being gentleman-y. :) But oooh la la he called her sexy. XD
And then when he said "I'm her perfect boyfriend." He seemed so proud can we just take a moment... :DD
And yay! Maybe she can pay for him now. But as for the no-aging thing... I'm still in thought about him possibly turning more human... just me? Okay. XD But if that happens maybe he can actually age with her. :D
And he is still so protective of her and wants to help her and is just so sweet... Be still my heart.
Can't wait for more! :)
And just something to note: I start college back up Tuesday (it was actually supposed to be today but due to snow it was cancelled), so if my comments start lagging, apologies for that. But I will eventually comment. It just may start being limited to weekends. Or just when I find the time to read. Just wanted to let you know. :) I will still be here, don't worry.

@Nanook
no you don't have to go through it i'm not really worried about it