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Yay, an update! Great job with the chapter! That was sweet how Alex came to visit her, but ooohh... then it got a bit awkward with their almost kiss. :O Aw, poor Alex, being rejected.
Something I wanted to point out, in the first chapter, you put:
Age didn’t seem bothersome most of the time but since I was 17 it was a big problem to outsiders.
But then in this chapter you say she turned 18 last summer. So this is something you'll want to clarify; is she 17 or 18? That also makes a difference on whether it's appropriate that she starts a relationship with Alex. So I think I would stick to 18 in that case, but just something to keep in mind that you had different in the first chapter.
“You know, am basically a free ride to concert tickets. People love me. And I have connections.” Alex told me and I laughed.
Then this part, from chapter 4, you're missing an 'I' before 'am.' But other than that, I didn't see anything. :)
Loved it though, and can't wait for more! :)

@Nanook
Thank you so much :) and I love it when people point out the mistakes because it honestly helps me so much. My computer doesn't have autocorrect so a lot of mistakes pass through. I try my best but it's really hard for me since I get distracted so easily.

Anyways thank you again :))

I usually wait to comment on stories until they're a good way through, but I couldn't resist. Plus I wanted to leave some more feedback since only one other person has so far.
I really like what you have of this so far, it seems cute. :) I'm interested in seeing where you take it. I'm also curious to find out what the number in the title means... hmm...
Can't wait for more! If you start updating frequently, I'll try and comment when I can. And if you're a writer who appreciates any mistakes being pointed out, to go back and fix, let me know, because I often do that as well. Although I refrain from doing it right away since I know some writers find it annoying or don't really care to fix things, which is fine, but just let me know if you're interested in me doing so. :)

For a first chapter, this is awesome!
I can't wait to see where you take this. :)