It's the Eyes
Never said It was exclusive?
That weekend was the best weekend of the year. I mean who wouldn't love to have great rough dominate sex with the hottest male in the entire STATE. But such is the modern world I started work that following Monday so my days of continuous sex in my cousins house without him knowing are sadly over for now. Rian didn't get home intill late Sunday night so I already sleep. But up early the next day gave him the opportunity to find out I was a working girl now.
*banging on the bathroom door*
" OI SHITHEAD GET OUT OF THE BATHROOM, SOME OF US HAVE WORK TO GET TOO AND CAN'T STAY UP LATE DRINKING" Rian shouted from outside the bathroom
I opened the door looking fresh and clean "Well some so us have work to" I winked at him and walked to my room. I got ready, and left for work. I took my car since it was raining. During work I got phone call from a local music bar. They agreed just on night shifts since I was already working in the day. I was super pumped life seemed good at the moment. I spent the night chilling with Jordan at his, just doing some acoustic songs. I ended up staying the night, It actually felt really night to spend the night next to someone without having sex with the. I only ever know waking up next to a one night stand or Alex. Neither felt that right. But this, this felt amazing like the feeling you get when finish a project that you've spent a long time on. I spent after work at his again. Then I started shaking and Jordan knew why.
"How long has it been?" He asked, He nodded to my leg.
"Urm well Since I arrived so what a week?" I looked up at him. He went in his sock draw and threw me a sheet of cellophane with small sheets of paper on it. I took one and the shaking stopped. " I never knew you were the same"
"You've not visited in a while, there might be a lot you don't know" He winked at me and threw me a pair of his boxers and t shirt. I caught them and got up to leave the room to change. "Hey what you doing?"
"Going to change" Sounded a bit confused.
Moving closer to me, hands around my waist, inbetween kissing down my neck "After last night do you really think that's there parts of you I have seen yet"
I thought about it for a while and just changed right there. We climbed in to bed and cuddled. We put on Grown ups. I fell asleep in his arms and it felt really right.
The next day I had off work and we back to Rian's since I hadn't been there for a while. While Jordan made us lunch I went for a shower.
"So you have to on the go" Crawley whispered in my ear
Making me jump "Jesus christ Crawley. Are you trying to kill me?" Hand over my heart.
"Well you're already dead so no. We've been busy haven't we?" Kissing my neck
"Crawley" He stopped "Alex and I were never exclusive, he knows that its fine. We were just a bit of fun" I looked up at him. Crawley moved his hand and fog appeared and in the centre Alex and Jack talking. "I think I've found someone who could be the one. I can't tell you who just yet but she is amazing and I know you all will love her as much as I do"
"Yeah just harmless fun, Be careful. Have you looked at the list?"
"Yeah, I'll start tonight" Crawley disappeared. I climbed into the shower trying to wash any sense that the King of Hell just kissed me. I got out and went to my room dressed, Looked in the showered. Changed my eyes to red, grabbed my washing and went downstairs. Walked into the kitchen to see and a lovely meal on the table, with a cider next to it. I walked over to the washing machine and out Jordan's clothes in.
"Aw babe, you remember my favourite drink" I smiled and kissed him then Alex walked in.
"Oh sorry, I thought you were at work"
My arms still around his neck. I slowly removing them "Urm Alex, this is Jordan. I'm sure theres enough food for him right?" I looked at Jordan
"Yeah sure" Jordan moved to plate up another meal
"Naa its fine, I was just coming to drop off Rian's laptop"
Alex left and Jordan went to toilet. I was left standing feel like shit. The day passed in blur probably because of the acid tab. But later that night we all went out as a group; Me, Alex, Jordan, Kayti, Rian, Jack, Zack. Alex came up to speak to me when I was having a fag.
"What the hell?"
"What?"
"Urm the Jordan thing?"
"Urm nothing? We are were not exclusive and neither are Jordan and I"
"Excuse me?"
"We were never fucking exclusive" I put my fag out and went back inside.
We were never exclusive.
Hmm... this story was a bit more confusing. Perhaps it wouldn't have been as much if I watched SOA? Perhaps that's why I got a little lost with it...
But then you had Crowley and hell and demons (like Crowley from Supernatural?)... so were you combining aspects from different shows?
I think the main issue was, there was a lot going on without much backstory to it all. It kind of just went from one event to the next without any explanation. No backstory is okay initially, but not when looking at so many aspects that aren't being explained. There needs to be an explanation somewhere or other.
But, this all being said... I'll be subscribed in case you decide to rewrite, or maybe finish this to help make sense of all of it? This story has a sharp contrast in writing, though, compared to your others that I've read so far, which kind of confuses me... but maybe you just wrote this one at another time? I'm not sure.
I admire you for trying to combine all of these different aspects into one story, though. Again, I'll be around if you ever choose to continue it or rewrite. :)
2/6/18