It's the Eyes
The final drink.
As we walked into the party Chibs came over and hugged me tight told me he loved me and that Layla knew so she was like extra pissed. Also he loved me more than opie . But I feel that was in a jokey way. There was a mysterious stranger talking to Tig. So in my curious nature I walked over and introduced myself. He was tall probably like 6"5, Head to toe tattoos. Stretchers and a few piercings. Cute. Very cute indeed.
Pushing infront of Tigs literally.. "Hi I'm Clary" I stuck my hand out, he shook it. I could feel Tigs move away from the situation.
"Hey I'm Travis" He winked at me. I gave him the smirk which he knew what was coming to him at the end of the night and took a sip from my drink making sure I kept eye contact with him at all times. The conversation went on in a similar nature. When Heard crowleys voice in my ear, I excused myself and went outside to where. Yes I was right Crowley and Two hell hounds were waiting for me.
"Dude what to do you want?"
"Another name Clarissa" He walked over and handed me a piece of paper. I unfolded it and it beautiful calligrapher Was Layla.
"Ops Layla?" He nodded
"Vampire"
"What did she do?"
"she owed a soul and kill my demon and two hounds"
I shot him a smirk and walked back into the party I would enjoy this very much. We went back to my moms. She was staying at the club house. Travis threw me down on the bed and slowly unbuttoned my jeans and slowly pulled them. Then he moved to pantie hight, then started to use his tongue. After round 3 he was fast asleep I snuck out and went Laylas. She was in the bathroom so I walked up behind her, gagged her, tied her legs together, tied her hands together and dragged her out the house. I tied her up and with no doubt about I took one clean cut to her throat and chopped her head off. I arranged the body so people could see. I positioned her hands so it looked Niners retaliation. Within seconds I was back home and in bed with Travis.
I woke up to Travis taking me from behind it was perfect. I switched to me on top.Then as we both about to finish in walks in Alex and Chibs and of course Im full naked and facing the doors. But from spectator sport. I continued anyway and might have faked the ending a little bit too much but you know they loved it. My bag was already packed. I literally got dressed and left My number was written on a napkin for him. Thats just common curtsey he probably wont use it. We loaded my bike up and said my goodbyes. It was off time.
Hmm... this story was a bit more confusing. Perhaps it wouldn't have been as much if I watched SOA? Perhaps that's why I got a little lost with it...
But then you had Crowley and hell and demons (like Crowley from Supernatural?)... so were you combining aspects from different shows?
I think the main issue was, there was a lot going on without much backstory to it all. It kind of just went from one event to the next without any explanation. No backstory is okay initially, but not when looking at so many aspects that aren't being explained. There needs to be an explanation somewhere or other.
But, this all being said... I'll be subscribed in case you decide to rewrite, or maybe finish this to help make sense of all of it? This story has a sharp contrast in writing, though, compared to your others that I've read so far, which kind of confuses me... but maybe you just wrote this one at another time? I'm not sure.
I admire you for trying to combine all of these different aspects into one story, though. Again, I'll be around if you ever choose to continue it or rewrite. :)
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