Playing a Game of Hearts
Summary
Alex looked at the brunette before him, her large green eyes welled with tears. How had it come to this, this mess had progressed so much. Marissa had been innocent of this, he'd managed to drag her in. It was time to end the game.
"You're done. You fulfilled the promise. You can go home." Alex said, the thought weighed down his frazzled mind.
"But-"
"Go!" He shouted. It echoed through the empty house.
So I just stumbled across this, and I really like what you have of it. This story definitely has a different approach to it, it's been a while since I've read Alex being so harsh of a character in a story. But he has his sweet moments.
If you ever choose to continue this, I will be here to read. I'm interested in seeing how the plot line would develop. The summary has me sad, but I'm wondering just how far the relationship progresses to get to that point.
So hoping maybe this comment will inspire you to continue.
1/30/17