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Stumbling (Jack POV)


Jack POV

I stumbled out of the restaurant. I started walking, not caring about where I was going. I heard someone shouting behind me but I began running. My chest was radiating an incredible pain, breathing was hard and I felt dizzy. Alex thought I was annoying. I tried to focus on where I was going but I couldn’t. Tears were messing with my sight and I gave up and stopped caring.

I crossed streets, ignoring the horns of the cars being honked at me. I made them all stop, not caring whether I would die.

I ran until I couldn’t anymore. The pain was still not better. I slowed down, and walked for a long time until I was at a big square with some greenery. I didn’t know where in the city I was.

It started to snow, little, delicate snowflakes falling down. It was late, I was alone and it was so silent. I could only hear my breath and my heartbeat. I stood still, looking at the small white crystals flying down from the sky. The pain had stopped now, leaving me numb.

Everything felt surreal. I wasn’t able to feel anything anymore, not even my heartbeat. I was floating, detached from everything.

I fell, but I didn’t care. I didn’t feel how my head hit the ground.

Notes

Poor Jack :c

Sorry for the chapter being so short but I think you get what I wanna say. Also please don't kill me, I might post another chapter today :)

Thank you guys to much for more than 150 subscribers and 32,000 views! To say I'm stoked would be an understatement! c:

-Laura


Comments

@JacksWife678
I'm happy about every single comment, no matter when it comes c:
Thank you so much!!

laura laura
7/18/14

Yesss this is such a cute story, it really touched my heart omg <3 Haha I'm like the last person to read this probably, so sorry for this super late comment x)

JacksWife678 JacksWife678
7/18/14

@Mae Lissa
I'll see, if I at some point have no idea what to write I will look into getting that done and I'll post it on here (if I ever do it). :)
Thank you!!

laura laura
6/11/14

@laura
That's would be nice , do whatever you like though I enjoyed this story soooo much.

Mae Lissa Mae Lissa
6/11/14

@Mae Lissa
Mhm to be honest, I haven't been thinking about a sequel too much because for me, this story is finished and over. I could maybe do one single chapter about their future (like an epilogue to the epilogue haha) if people would want me to.

laura laura
6/10/14