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25 Signs

You Left When I Needed You The Most... Pt 1

(Heather's POV)

"Heather can I ask you som-" Alex began before my phone rudely interrupted.

I was at Alex's because his mom had to work late and so did mine.Every time that happens I just stay the night at Alex's and get picked up by my mom when she drops his mom off.It's easier for both our moms and it gives Alex and I more time to ourselves.

I gave him an apologetic look before answering my cell phone.It was Alex's mom's cell phone.

"It's your mom." I said giving Alex a confused expression and answering it.

"Hey Ms. Gaskarth." I greeted her over the phone.

My heart dropped when I heard tears in her voice.

"h-hello Heather th-there h-h-has bee-n a terrible accident." She cried.

A tear fell down my cheek.I didn't have to guess very hard on who got hurt.Alex wiped the tear from my face gently.Isobel told me what happened shakily since she was still crying and I didn't waste any time throwing my shoes on and throwing my cell phone down.

"Heather wait!" I heard Alex shout.

I ran towards the hospital with Alex behind me.

-

I rushed through the front door to the ER and spotted Isobel sitting in the waiting room bawling.I ran up to her and embraced her in a hug.Just as I did the doctor came out.By this time Alex was here and holding his mother as she sobbed.

"Are you Heather Adams?" He asked me and I nodded.

I was not prepared for what he said next...

"Ms. Adams, your mother has been killed in a fatal car accident."

Notes

part 2 up in a second :)

Comments

@SixFeetUnderThamesStreet
Yeah, I wrote on Mibba before but it's been a minute since I have. Also, being busy with college has put a damper on my inspiration.
But yeah, I know how the feedback thing feels, that's why I always try to leave it on stories I read. :) And thanks, I will let you know if I do! :)

Nanook Nanook
2/25/17

@Nanook
I completely understand where you're coming from when you say you're nervous to put your writing out there. I was the same way when I first started :P My writing is so special to me I feel like when it doesn't get the feedback I want, I get very upset lol. If you ever do decide to post your writing, I'm happy to give it a read and feedback if you'd like. Just shoot me a message and link it to me when/if you do!

@SixFeetUnderThamesStreet

Hi there. I'm so happy you saw my comment. :) I'm sorry to hear that you're not really into the story anymore.
I wouldn't really know who to suggest to write for it. I don't feel it would personally be right if I tried writing for it either; while I did really enjoy it, it was your idea. I'm still trying to convince myself to try and start a story, a bit timid when it comes to sharing my writing lately.
But it means a lot that you offered that. But yeah, again, I don't really know who to suggest. But this story was awesome for what you had of it.
Thanks for getting in touch and giving me an update. So many authors I never hear from, so I never know if they see my comment and just don't respond, just don't get on anymore, or what. So it was sweet of you to let me know. And glad to hear you've improved as a writer, that's awesome.
If you ever do see yourself writing ATL fics again, I would be happy to read them. Just let me know. :)

Nanook Nanook
2/23/17

@Nanook

Hello, I apologize for the lack of both updating and replying to your comment. (This is my new account I lost the login info for PLJ)

I would just like to say I think it's absolutely amazing that people are still viewing and commenting on writing I did when I was thirteen years old and it blows my mind to see how much I've improved as a writer in the short three years that it has been since I've posted my work on this site. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for finding this story and leaving your uplifting feedback. Unfortunately, I don't believe there will ever be an ending to this story. I haven't written all time low related fanfiction in over three years and I just don't write like I used to. I can't complete this fic without being in that creative headspace and I've seem to have just lost my desire to write ATL fanfiction.

HOWEVER...

If you (or anyone you know) who enjoys writing and would like to, I am willing to hand this story over to someone who can finish it and give it the glorious ending it deserves. Whoever takes it will be free to change anything they want and completely make it their own without and repercussions from me. I would however ask that I am credited for the idea and given a link to read it when it's finished. If you or any of your writer friends are interested please let me know! :)

So I stumbled across this... and just wanted to leave some feedback since I see it was never completed. I think you did a great job with what you have of it. I'm sad to see it was never finished, though.
If you ever choose to pick it up again someday, I will be here to read the rest of it. I think it has a very sweet plot line, and think it deserves an ending, if you can find the inspiration to write more to it. :)


Nanook Nanook
9/19/16