7 Years Later
Bon Fire part 2
I turned around to see Alex and Jack, Rian and Zack. I felt tears well up in my eyes and I started to back up, I totally forgot that I was talking to Tay and Jordan and I bumped into them, "Oh god, I'm so sorry" then I turned and tried to run. But Alex grabbed my arm and I screamed at the top of my lungs "LET GO OF ME!!!!" Adescia, Janine, and Brina came to my rescue, "Let go of her!!!" Brina's voice was low but it was like venom. He let go of my arm, "I just want to talk to her" Tears were falling down my cheeks as Janine, Brina, and Adescia put me behind them, and stood in front of me. "What's going on here?!" I turned around and saw Vic, Tony, Jaime & Mike, and then I snapped and ran for my life, away and away.
two hours later, I was still walking around. My phone was buzzing from all the texts and calls I was getting. Alan was calling me, So I decided to answer, "Hello??" Alan frantically answered, "Talia, where are you?? Everyone's been going crazy!!!" I sighed, "I'm fine, I'll be back in a few hours" I heard him groan, "Everyone doesn't have a few hours, everyone wants you here now, especially Vic" I gasped, "Why??" I whispered, "I don't know, all he's saying is, It's all my fault "Oh, well can you come pick me up?" I whispered, "Of course, where are you?" I laughed nervously, "I don't actually know.." "Are you serious" "You know what? I'll find my way back, if I'm not back by my performance tomorrow, get Janine to sing." "Ta-" I hung up on him, and turned around, walking the same way I came before.
It was 4 in the morning, when I got everyone was asleep, thank fuck!!! I snuck onto my bus and saw ATL, PTV & OM&M, sleeping in the lounge, and in the bunks, I was so angry that Alex, Jack, Rian and Zack were here, and I ran out side, forgetting that it was early, I slammed the door. I mentally slapped myself, and heard my name being called, But I didn't stick around, i just ran. I was running and running, and I didn't realize I went into a complete circle, I then, turned the corner and smashed into two people, I looked up and saw Alex and Vic, and I tried to turn, but Vic held onto me, and Alex yelled out "Yo, we found her, she's right here!" "Fuck you Alex" I growled, "Look Talia, we'r-" "NO, SHUT THE FUCK UP!! YOU DON'T GET TO TALK, YOU DON'T GET TO USE MY NICKNAME!! ONLY MY FRIENDS CAN USE THAT" Then I pointed to Vic, :"AND YOU ARE NOT MY FRIEND ANYMORE!!!!" I turned back to Alex, "YOU RUINED MY LIFE!! WHY DO YOU THINK I'LL LET YOU GIVE ME AN EXPLANATION!!!!" By this time, everyone in the entire tour, were awake, and were crowding around, and I was crying, Vic tried to hug me, "DON'T TOUCH ME! YOU WERE SUPPOSE TO BE MY BEST FRIEND BUT YOU LEFT ME!!! WHY?? WHY DID YOU DO THAT? AND WHY? WHY DID YOU BULLY ME??!! YOU TURNED ALL MY FRIENDS ONTO ME, I WAS SO ALONE!!!! AND THEN I BECOME BEST FRIENDS WITH HIM, AND NOW YOU GUYS ARE 'BEST BUDS?'" my voice turned into a whisper, "you betrayed me, and I don't ever want to become your friends," tears were pouring down my face and Vic hugged me tight. But I kept on trying to push him away "Get away from me" I looked around and saw everyone, they all looked heartbroken, I sighed, and yanked myself away from Vic and Alex, "I'm going to bed" I walked away tears falling down my face, but I felt good, I felt to stick up for my self...
I walked onto the bus, and 10 mins later my band mates and my tour manager came on and we had this huge group hug. I pulled away, "I want to dye my hair this weekend, get some tattoos and alot of piercings" They all looked at me like I was crazy, "But Talia,-" "No, this is what I want, I want to be reckless, and brave, I clean slate, A new me!!" I said with a smile, they all smiled back, "Of course and we support you 100%" "Thank you!!!"
Can't wait!!
two hours later, I was still walking around. My phone was buzzing from all the texts and calls I was getting. Alan was calling me, So I decided to answer, "Hello??" Alan frantically answered, "Talia, where are you?? Everyone's been going crazy!!!" I sighed, "I'm fine, I'll be back in a few hours" I heard him groan, "Everyone doesn't have a few hours, everyone wants you here now, especially Vic" I gasped, "Why??" I whispered, "I don't know, all he's saying is, It's all my fault "Oh, well can you come pick me up?" I whispered, "Of course, where are you?" I laughed nervously, "I don't actually know.." "Are you serious" "You know what? I'll find my way back, if I'm not back by my performance tomorrow, get Janine to sing." "Ta-" I hung up on him, and turned around, walking the same way I came before.
It was 4 in the morning, when I got everyone was asleep, thank fuck!!! I snuck onto my bus and saw ATL, PTV & OM&M, sleeping in the lounge, and in the bunks, I was so angry that Alex, Jack, Rian and Zack were here, and I ran out side, forgetting that it was early, I slammed the door. I mentally slapped myself, and heard my name being called, But I didn't stick around, i just ran. I was running and running, and I didn't realize I went into a complete circle, I then, turned the corner and smashed into two people, I looked up and saw Alex and Vic, and I tried to turn, but Vic held onto me, and Alex yelled out "Yo, we found her, she's right here!" "Fuck you Alex" I growled, "Look Talia, we'r-" "NO, SHUT THE FUCK UP!! YOU DON'T GET TO TALK, YOU DON'T GET TO USE MY NICKNAME!! ONLY MY FRIENDS CAN USE THAT" Then I pointed to Vic, :"AND YOU ARE NOT MY FRIEND ANYMORE!!!!" I turned back to Alex, "YOU RUINED MY LIFE!! WHY DO YOU THINK I'LL LET YOU GIVE ME AN EXPLANATION!!!!" By this time, everyone in the entire tour, were awake, and were crowding around, and I was crying, Vic tried to hug me, "DON'T TOUCH ME! YOU WERE SUPPOSE TO BE MY BEST FRIEND BUT YOU LEFT ME!!! WHY?? WHY DID YOU DO THAT? AND WHY? WHY DID YOU BULLY ME??!! YOU TURNED ALL MY FRIENDS ONTO ME, I WAS SO ALONE!!!! AND THEN I BECOME BEST FRIENDS WITH HIM, AND NOW YOU GUYS ARE 'BEST BUDS?'" my voice turned into a whisper, "you betrayed me, and I don't ever want to become your friends," tears were pouring down my face and Vic hugged me tight. But I kept on trying to push him away "Get away from me" I looked around and saw everyone, they all looked heartbroken, I sighed, and yanked myself away from Vic and Alex, "I'm going to bed" I walked away tears falling down my face, but I felt good, I felt to stick up for my self...
I walked onto the bus, and 10 mins later my band mates and my tour manager came on and we had this huge group hug. I pulled away, "I want to dye my hair this weekend, get some tattoos and alot of piercings" They all looked at me like I was crazy, "But Talia,-" "No, this is what I want, I want to be reckless, and brave, I clean slate, A new me!!" I said with a smile, they all smiled back, "Of course and we support you 100%" "Thank you!!!"
Can't wait!!
Notes
Ohhh, sorry if it sucks, but I wonder what Talia will look like :DIf you want to know what the others look like just ask me.... xoxo
I really like what you have of this, I'm really bummed to see it was never continued. :(
If you do choose to pick up with it again, I will be here to read. I would like to see what happens with Talia, and what decisions she chooses to make. Has she actually fully forgiven them? Which character will end up being the love interest? That last question I'm really dying to know.
It was really looking like you were planning to continue this, but just didn't. :/ I hope maybe you find some inspiration to continue it someday, to at least give us answers to what you never got to...
But yeah, I really enjoyed what you have of this, regardless, and I'll cross my fingers that you'll continue. If you do, I'll be here to leave active feedback, or I should be anyway. :) You're a great writer and I just wanted to leave a comment letting you know that.
4/15/17