I really like what you have of this, I'm really bummed to see it was never continued. :( If you do choose to pick up with it again, I will be here to read. I would like to see what happens with Talia, and what decisions she chooses to make. Has she actually fully forgiven them? Which character will end up being the love interest? That last question I'm really dying to know. It was really looking like you were planning to continue this, but just didn't. :/ I hope maybe you find some inspiration to continue it someday, to at least give us answers to what you never got to... But yeah, I really enjoyed what you have of this, regardless, and I'll cross my fingers that you'll continue. If you do, I'll be here to leave active feedback, or I should be anyway. :) You're a great writer and I just wanted to leave a comment letting you know that.
I really like what you have of this, I'm really bummed to see it was never continued. :(
If you do choose to pick up with it again, I will be here to read. I would like to see what happens with Talia, and what decisions she chooses to make. Has she actually fully forgiven them? Which character will end up being the love interest? That last question I'm really dying to know.
It was really looking like you were planning to continue this, but just didn't. :/ I hope maybe you find some inspiration to continue it someday, to at least give us answers to what you never got to...
But yeah, I really enjoyed what you have of this, regardless, and I'll cross my fingers that you'll continue. If you do, I'll be here to leave active feedback, or I should be anyway. :) You're a great writer and I just wanted to leave a comment letting you know that.
4/15/17