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7 Years Later

Bon Fire part 1

I looked to the side stage and saw Vic, with sadness and happiness in his eyes, probably because he sees me, but I never told him... I carried on singing All The Small Things by Blink 182. I was jumping around the stage and singing with all my might, and I was having the time of my life, Janine was playing guitar with passion, Brina, was plucking the bass string, and Adescia was pounding the drums, I looked at Vic again, he was on his phone, texting, probably Mike, Jaime, and Tony. I looked at Janine and she knew what was happening....


About 5 minutes later, I went off stage and ran to the bus, and I heard my name being called out, but I ignored it. I went on our bus, and had a quick shower, literally, it was like 30 seconds long... and got dressed. And went out into the lounge where I found my band mates. "Oh my gosh, Talia, are you okay??" Adescia asked running up to me... "Um yeah, I just saw Vic, and it got to me..." I said with a tear... "Aww Talia, it's going to be alright. Hey I know something that will cheer you up..." I looked at her, with amazement "What's that?" She smiled, "There's a bonfire tonight... We should go, but don't worry, there will be lots of bands, so what are the chances of you seeing All Time Low and Pierce The Veil?" She said with a smile, I smiled back, "You're right, Let's go have some fun," I said with a laugh.


A few hours later, I was ready, and we left arm in arm. We walked to the bonfire, which was a huge field with a giant fire in the middle, a stage with a DJ a few tables with alcohol and everyone was mingling. "Hey guys, It's me Adam Elmakias. I see the new band is here, Meaningless Apologies, come up here guys and say hello!!" all 4 of us ran up on the stage. Adam gave me the mic, "Hey guys, I'm Talia Davis, and I'm lead singer, and I play guitar" I passed it to Adescia, "Hey I'm Adescia, and I play drums" she passed it to Brina, "Hey I'm Brina and I play bass," then she passed it to Janine, who said "And last but not least JANINE, And I play lead guitar and back up vocals." everyone laughed, I looked around the bonfire and saw Vic, Mike, Tony & Jaime looking at me, with pain in there eyes... "Hey Talia, can you sing us a song??" Adam asked, I smiled at him, "I'd love to, What song should I sing??" I heard people from the crown yelling songs at me, then my fave song, "Never Be What You Want" I smirked, "I'm gonna sing, Never Be What You Want!!!"


I remember the nights we spent under city lights
This feelings got the best of me
We were floating along to the sounds of a dead end town
but now that's just a memory

I can't figure you out, you've got more fight in you
than anybody else
And here's the part where I start to make my own damn decisions
and make a name for my self

I'll never be what you want
I wouldn't change any part of me
Just to make you stay
You had a piece of my heart
But not enough to just run away
'Cause I know what's best for me

Take all your big plans and throw them away
I've got something in mind before we go separate ways
We ask the questions baby,
Who provides the answers?

I'm scared to death and it shows
The flame burned out, but it glows
And the look in your eyes says things I don't wanna know
It's time to go!
Come closer!
And I can't say anything, everything comes out the wrong way

I'll never be what you want
I wouldn't change any part of me
Just to make you stay
You had a piece of my heart
But not enough to just run away
'Cause i know what's best for me

Just try, just try a little harder
I'll do my best explaining all the things I'm going through
Just try, just try a little harder
This is why I can't adjust for you

You can't say
The look in your eyes says things I don't wanna know
No you, You can't stay

I wanna be with you, and no one else
I need you to feel the way that you felt that summer night
when you found that puzzle piece missing for eight straight weeks
You're not the perfect fit

I'll never be what you want
I wouldn't change any part of me
Just to make you stay
You had a piece of my heart
But not enough to just run away
'Cause I know what's best for me.


When I finished singing everyone was cheering, and I laughed, "Thank you" we walked off stage and started talking to everyone. I was talking to Tay and Jordan from WATIC, telling me that they loved the performance, then I felt a tap on my shoulder and I turned around and saw...


CRAP

Notes

Talia's Out fit for the bonfire-http://www.polyvore.com/first_day_after_performance/set?id=96875683

Ohhhh, who did tapped on her shoulder?? :o

I hope you liked it!!! :D If you want to know what Adescia, Janine, Brina and Liam look like, just ask...

Comments

I really like what you have of this, I'm really bummed to see it was never continued. :(
If you do choose to pick up with it again, I will be here to read. I would like to see what happens with Talia, and what decisions she chooses to make. Has she actually fully forgiven them? Which character will end up being the love interest? That last question I'm really dying to know.
It was really looking like you were planning to continue this, but just didn't. :/ I hope maybe you find some inspiration to continue it someday, to at least give us answers to what you never got to...
But yeah, I really enjoyed what you have of this, regardless, and I'll cross my fingers that you'll continue. If you do, I'll be here to leave active feedback, or I should be anyway. :) You're a great writer and I just wanted to leave a comment letting you know that.

Nanook Nanook
4/15/17
@Billie Joe Gaskarth
Thank you, I'm writing another chapter now :)
Shadow_Angel Shadow_Angel
9/10/13
I like it :)
@Iktsohs
Thank you, I'll try and put up another chapter soon :)
Shadow_Angel Shadow_Angel
9/8/13
I like it so far :)
Iktsohs Iktsohs
9/8/13