Find a Place for Me Again
Nineteen
"Hey Kenzie how's everything with the baby," Alex asked as he called me on facetime.
"Pretty good," I replied, "My morning sickness is gone."
"Can I see it," he asked.
"I'm barely showing, Alex," I complained.
"Please," he begged.
"Fine," I sighed and moved back from my macbook so Alex could see me in my cami that showed my small bump.
"I want a side view, babe," Alex whined.
"Alright you sound like a baby," I turned sideways and he could see my bump sticking out from my normally slender frame.
"I'm so excited right now, Kenzie. We're going to be parents in about six months," Alex gushed, "I miss you, Kenz."
"I miss you too. I'm excited for your hometown show, Alex. I'll be a bit bigger and maybe the baby will kick when you hold me in your arms," I smiled as I rubbed my bump slowly, "I've been craving something."
"And what would that be," Alex asked.
"You," I replied, "This baby has made my longing for you so much more intense. I am really turned on right now."
"I'll be in town soon and I can satisfy your craving when I'm home," Alex smirk.
"There's my pregnant future daughter-in-law," Alex's mom greeted as she walked into mine and Alex's house.
"Hi Isobel," I greeted her, "I'm glad you're here and helping me out with getting the house ready for the baby. Being 15 and a half weeks makes doing certain things really hard."
"Oh I know what that's like, I had Alex and Tom," she chuckled as I guided her where she was going to stay for the weekend.
"Alright, we'll get to work on building everything for the nursery after you've settled in okay. I'm going to call Alex and talk to him for a bit," I told her.
"Sounds good to me," she replied.
I went upstairs to mine and Alex's room, getting right on my phone. I talked to Alex for a while to let him know his mom arrived. Alex talked about how he'd make sure our baby learned to play guitar and sing like him. I seconded that vote, but the baby also has to have a love for photography. We both agreed the baby was going to love music and listen to good music and not the top 40 and rap on the airwaves. The baby will be raised on Blink and Green Day along with New Found Glory and of course All Time Low.
"Pretty good," I replied, "My morning sickness is gone."
"Can I see it," he asked.
"I'm barely showing, Alex," I complained.
"Please," he begged.
"Fine," I sighed and moved back from my macbook so Alex could see me in my cami that showed my small bump.
"I want a side view, babe," Alex whined.
"Alright you sound like a baby," I turned sideways and he could see my bump sticking out from my normally slender frame.
"I'm so excited right now, Kenzie. We're going to be parents in about six months," Alex gushed, "I miss you, Kenz."
"I miss you too. I'm excited for your hometown show, Alex. I'll be a bit bigger and maybe the baby will kick when you hold me in your arms," I smiled as I rubbed my bump slowly, "I've been craving something."
"And what would that be," Alex asked.
"You," I replied, "This baby has made my longing for you so much more intense. I am really turned on right now."
"I'll be in town soon and I can satisfy your craving when I'm home," Alex smirk.
"There's my pregnant future daughter-in-law," Alex's mom greeted as she walked into mine and Alex's house.
"Hi Isobel," I greeted her, "I'm glad you're here and helping me out with getting the house ready for the baby. Being 15 and a half weeks makes doing certain things really hard."
"Oh I know what that's like, I had Alex and Tom," she chuckled as I guided her where she was going to stay for the weekend.
"Alright, we'll get to work on building everything for the nursery after you've settled in okay. I'm going to call Alex and talk to him for a bit," I told her.
"Sounds good to me," she replied.
I went upstairs to mine and Alex's room, getting right on my phone. I talked to Alex for a while to let him know his mom arrived. Alex talked about how he'd make sure our baby learned to play guitar and sing like him. I seconded that vote, but the baby also has to have a love for photography. We both agreed the baby was going to love music and listen to good music and not the top 40 and rap on the airwaves. The baby will be raised on Blink and Green Day along with New Found Glory and of course All Time Low.
So I just read what you have of this, and I'm sad to see it was never finished. :(
It's a bit rushed at some parts, but I really like the concept of it. It surprised me that you had him gain his memory back kind of quickly; I thought for sure the twist was going to be he was going to lose it again or something. I found it a bit odd how that was kind of the plot for the first half, and then this second part kind of diverted from it. But I really like what you have of it, it's really sweet. :)
If you ever choose to finish it, I will be here to read. Although I think a final chapter wrap-up would totally work for this, if you're struggling for inspiration. Just a final update to conclude it.
You're a great writer, and so, I just wanted to leave a comment letting you know that, and to show that people are still stumbling across this and reading it. :)
7/11/16