Just Two Kids Stupid And Fearless
I just want you to know who I am
"Okey, I think that's enough for today.", Sienna said, and took the biology book out of my hands. I smiled for myself. I stood up from the chair in the small kitchen, and walked to the couch where Alex and Jack sat. It was such a Jalex moment. They sat with their arms around each others shoulders, just giggling. For a moment, I thought they just wanted a cozy time, but then I saw the laptop they were looking down at.
"What are you doing?", I crossed me arms, leaning on the wall. They both of their sights went up to me. Alex smiled big.
"Study girl! We're having a Ustream.", he said, and pointed to the free couch seat next to him. "Join us.", I smiled at them, while making my way to the seat. I appeared in the corner of the screen, and under the webcam there was thousands of comments from different users. My name was repeating right when my face was shown on the screen. "Hello Wends.", Alex said while kissing the corner of my mouth. He grinned a little, and then kissed my cheek over and over again.
"God, stop!", I laughed, and so he did. The comments went crazy.
"So, this is Wendy,", Alex talked to the camera. "she's awesome. There's nothing more you need to know.", some questions popped up in the comments, and I read some of them high.
"'How did you meet?'", I quoted some girl.
"'Wendy what's your bra size?'", Jack yelled out, totally ignoring me.
"I bet that was your question.", I looked at him.
"Nope. Tell us now Wends.", he smirked at me.
"It's a secret, because only I know.", I stack out my tongue at the camera.
"Me too.", Alex grinned.
"No you don't.", I grinned back. His face came closer, and I heard him whisper my size in my ear. Surprisingly he was right. I looked back at the screen, "Yes, he does.".
We kept talking, and joking for about 15 minutes more until we had to go to the city. Seriously, I had no idea where we were, but I guess it was somewhere in Wisconsin. Probably Milwaukee.
It was kind of a big mall, and full of stores. Alex and I walked alone, and the first thing he dragged me to was a fast food place. I sighed, I wasn't hungry at all.
"Alex, no, I'm not hungry. I really mean it.", I pulled his hand to make him walk away with me.
"Baby, you didn't eat any breakfast, and I want you to get better.", he said, and put his free hand on my waist. "You've done a great job so far, you can't stop now."
"I'm not trying to lose weight, I'm just not hungry."
"Promise me to tell when you are, okay?", he looked me in the eyes.
"Of course.", I said, and forced out a smile. He grabbed my hand, and we walked out of the place. Some girls in my age came running to us, giggling with paparazzis behind. My boyfriend pulled down his sunglasses, and a smile lit up his face when the girls asked for pictures.
"Can you please take one for us?", a brown-haired girl asked me while handing me her phone.
"Of course.", I smiled at her. All three posed up next to Alex and smiled so adorably cute. I shot around five for them. The giggled even more hysteric when I gave back the phone, looking at the pictures. "I hope at least one of them was good!"
"Thank you so, so, so much! It was really nice to meet you.", a blonde girl said to us both.
"You too.", Alex smiled, and we continued. We went to a small little shop full with tees with funny messages on. He let go of my hand as we looked on our own. We didn't really find anything, and the text wasn't as hilarious as I thought they looked.
"Here!", Alex said, and dragged me in to Victorias Secret. I rolled my eyes.
"Mature.", I stack out my tongue for him.
"Just because I know your bra size, I'm allowed to pick out some things for ya babe.", he gave me a quick kiss on my cheek, then he disappeared. I shook my head, and went to the body mists. I loved these, and I had no clue why I didn't own one of them. I smelled some of them, and decided to buy Love Spell and the body lotion. When I turned around I saw Alex, with a bag, where I assumed the lingerie he bought for me were.
"What did you buy?", I asked curious, and tried to look in it. He pushed me away.
"Surprise", he teased me. "you'll see when we get back.", I made a face, and then went to pay for the things I had found. Right when I was about to put in my card, Alex pressed in his quickly.
"You don't have to.", I said, but he only smiled;
"I want to."
We all were in the mall for about 2 hours, and we all had found something for ourselves. Alex and I had the nicest lunch ever, at Panera. I actually could eat a whole sandwich, even if I wasn't that hungry, but Alex looked proud when I did it, so I couldn't resist. Well, I had the meal in my throat maybe one hour afterwards, and all I wanted was to throw up. I faked a smile for the rest of the trip in the mall, just to make him sure I was okay.
"I'm tired.", I groaned when we got back on the bus, as I laid down in Alex's bunk.
"Too bad you have math right now.", Sienna said, and I forced my body up; "Fuck."
Alex's POV:
I giggled quiet at Wendy when she sat down at the table with Sienna. She was absolutely not in a mood for this. I really wanted to cuddle down in the bed with ice cream and just chill with her right now. But nope, I had a show in three hours.
"Okey boys, pick your outfits, and move into the loge. NOW!", Flyzik yelled to us, and I went to my suitcase. I dug some until I found a t-shirt with the US flag, a checkered grey shirt, and of course, to pairs of skinny jeans. I got my hygiene things in a bag too.
"DONE!", I yelled back to Mickey. I was exhausted, but this was gonna be an awesome night.
"What are you doing?", I crossed me arms, leaning on the wall. They both of their sights went up to me. Alex smiled big.
"Study girl! We're having a Ustream.", he said, and pointed to the free couch seat next to him. "Join us.", I smiled at them, while making my way to the seat. I appeared in the corner of the screen, and under the webcam there was thousands of comments from different users. My name was repeating right when my face was shown on the screen. "Hello Wends.", Alex said while kissing the corner of my mouth. He grinned a little, and then kissed my cheek over and over again.
"God, stop!", I laughed, and so he did. The comments went crazy.
"So, this is Wendy,", Alex talked to the camera. "she's awesome. There's nothing more you need to know.", some questions popped up in the comments, and I read some of them high.
"'How did you meet?'", I quoted some girl.
"'Wendy what's your bra size?'", Jack yelled out, totally ignoring me.
"I bet that was your question.", I looked at him.
"Nope. Tell us now Wends.", he smirked at me.
"It's a secret, because only I know.", I stack out my tongue at the camera.
"Me too.", Alex grinned.
"No you don't.", I grinned back. His face came closer, and I heard him whisper my size in my ear. Surprisingly he was right. I looked back at the screen, "Yes, he does.".
We kept talking, and joking for about 15 minutes more until we had to go to the city. Seriously, I had no idea where we were, but I guess it was somewhere in Wisconsin. Probably Milwaukee.
It was kind of a big mall, and full of stores. Alex and I walked alone, and the first thing he dragged me to was a fast food place. I sighed, I wasn't hungry at all.
"Alex, no, I'm not hungry. I really mean it.", I pulled his hand to make him walk away with me.
"Baby, you didn't eat any breakfast, and I want you to get better.", he said, and put his free hand on my waist. "You've done a great job so far, you can't stop now."
"I'm not trying to lose weight, I'm just not hungry."
"Promise me to tell when you are, okay?", he looked me in the eyes.
"Of course.", I said, and forced out a smile. He grabbed my hand, and we walked out of the place. Some girls in my age came running to us, giggling with paparazzis behind. My boyfriend pulled down his sunglasses, and a smile lit up his face when the girls asked for pictures.
"Can you please take one for us?", a brown-haired girl asked me while handing me her phone.
"Of course.", I smiled at her. All three posed up next to Alex and smiled so adorably cute. I shot around five for them. The giggled even more hysteric when I gave back the phone, looking at the pictures. "I hope at least one of them was good!"
"Thank you so, so, so much! It was really nice to meet you.", a blonde girl said to us both.
"You too.", Alex smiled, and we continued. We went to a small little shop full with tees with funny messages on. He let go of my hand as we looked on our own. We didn't really find anything, and the text wasn't as hilarious as I thought they looked.
"Here!", Alex said, and dragged me in to Victorias Secret. I rolled my eyes.
"Mature.", I stack out my tongue for him.
"Just because I know your bra size, I'm allowed to pick out some things for ya babe.", he gave me a quick kiss on my cheek, then he disappeared. I shook my head, and went to the body mists. I loved these, and I had no clue why I didn't own one of them. I smelled some of them, and decided to buy Love Spell and the body lotion. When I turned around I saw Alex, with a bag, where I assumed the lingerie he bought for me were.
"What did you buy?", I asked curious, and tried to look in it. He pushed me away.
"Surprise", he teased me. "you'll see when we get back.", I made a face, and then went to pay for the things I had found. Right when I was about to put in my card, Alex pressed in his quickly.
"You don't have to.", I said, but he only smiled;
"I want to."
We all were in the mall for about 2 hours, and we all had found something for ourselves. Alex and I had the nicest lunch ever, at Panera. I actually could eat a whole sandwich, even if I wasn't that hungry, but Alex looked proud when I did it, so I couldn't resist. Well, I had the meal in my throat maybe one hour afterwards, and all I wanted was to throw up. I faked a smile for the rest of the trip in the mall, just to make him sure I was okay.
"I'm tired.", I groaned when we got back on the bus, as I laid down in Alex's bunk.
"Too bad you have math right now.", Sienna said, and I forced my body up; "Fuck."
Alex's POV:
I giggled quiet at Wendy when she sat down at the table with Sienna. She was absolutely not in a mood for this. I really wanted to cuddle down in the bed with ice cream and just chill with her right now. But nope, I had a show in three hours.
"Okey boys, pick your outfits, and move into the loge. NOW!", Flyzik yelled to us, and I went to my suitcase. I dug some until I found a t-shirt with the US flag, a checkered grey shirt, and of course, to pairs of skinny jeans. I got my hygiene things in a bag too.
"DONE!", I yelled back to Mickey. I was exhausted, but this was gonna be an awesome night.
Notes
This took a long time.. Well, I still feel off, but things are getting better. I've actually met someone... Well, we're not together, but there's some chances.I just want you to know that I haven't returned 100% yet, so this is not how my updates will look.
Thank you for everything, love ya.
So, I just read what you have of this story and its prequel, and I really like what you have of both. At first, it was a little rough getting into it; it seemed kind of rushed at first, especially with all of the drama of how they got together and then broke up in like a day when they first met, but I have to say, after the time passed and they got back together again, this story just really started getting good. Some of the grammar is a bit off, but as you continued the story I noticed your improvement and that's awesome; that means you have definitely progressed as you have continued writing this.
I'm sad it was never finished, though. One thing I found a bit odd was that you continued with this installment after giving the first one an epilogue, due to the fact that means we already know the ending for Wendy and Alex, but... I kind of like how you did that. I don't believe I've seen an author do that before, kind of go back and fill in the time in-between in the sequel.
And this story is seriously so cute. Alex and Wendy's love is seriously so genuine; again, while it was a bit rushed at first, as I got into the second half of the first installment and this sequel it was just, wow, I just love their relationship. It's been a while since I've seen such a connection between the two characters and I seriously enjoyed it.
And I also liked the fact that as I got to the end of what you have so far, that you made it realistic. Alex understands she's not ready for a baby and is ready to sacrifice that. This is actually the first time I've seen this in a story, where it's being both considered and followed through with, along with the fact that both characters are for the most part peaceful with the decision. Hell I'm even peaceful with the decision, which really surprises me, because every other story where this has happened, I haven't been. And that's really weird for me, so kudos for pulling that off and making it convincing, and not making it so heartbreaking. I mean it is still a heartbreaking thing, but it's more understood that it's the best decision. Although the two characters being fine with it probably is what makes me as a reader somewhat okay with it. I'm happy you took that route as opposed to creating severe conflict, which is what I typically see with this idea. It was a nice change.
And, wow, this is a long comment. To sum up, I think you're a great writer and I really hope you're still writing on your own time, at least. I'm sad this wasn't finished, but I wanted to leave a comment letting you know my thoughts and just how much I've genuinely liked what I've read so far. Seriously, great job. If you ever choose to continue someday, I will be here to read. This story is too good to let go. I think these two characters should have more of a conclusion in this installment. But I guess overall I should be happy, considering with the last installment, we know that they end up together. So at least that's been told.
But still, if you continue, I'm willing to read. :)
7/5/16