Just Two Kids Stupid And Fearless - Comments

So, I just read what you have of this story and its prequel, and I really like what you have of both. At first, it was a little rough getting into it; it seemed kind of rushed at first, especially with all of the drama of how they got together and then broke up in like a day when they first met, but I have to say, after the time passed and they got back together again, this story just really started getting good. Some of the grammar is a bit off, but as you continued the story I noticed your improvement and that's awesome; that means you have definitely progressed as you have continued writing this.
I'm sad it was never finished, though. One thing I found a bit odd was that you continued with this installment after giving the first one an epilogue, due to the fact that means we already know the ending for Wendy and Alex, but... I kind of like how you did that. I don't believe I've seen an author do that before, kind of go back and fill in the time in-between in the sequel.
And this story is seriously so cute. Alex and Wendy's love is seriously so genuine; again, while it was a bit rushed at first, as I got into the second half of the first installment and this sequel it was just, wow, I just love their relationship. It's been a while since I've seen such a connection between the two characters and I seriously enjoyed it.
And I also liked the fact that as I got to the end of what you have so far, that you made it realistic. Alex understands she's not ready for a baby and is ready to sacrifice that. This is actually the first time I've seen this in a story, where it's being both considered and followed through with, along with the fact that both characters are for the most part peaceful with the decision. Hell I'm even peaceful with the decision, which really surprises me, because every other story where this has happened, I haven't been. And that's really weird for me, so kudos for pulling that off and making it convincing, and not making it so heartbreaking. I mean it is still a heartbreaking thing, but it's more understood that it's the best decision. Although the two characters being fine with it probably is what makes me as a reader somewhat okay with it. I'm happy you took that route as opposed to creating severe conflict, which is what I typically see with this idea. It was a nice change.
And, wow, this is a long comment. To sum up, I think you're a great writer and I really hope you're still writing on your own time, at least. I'm sad this wasn't finished, but I wanted to leave a comment letting you know my thoughts and just how much I've genuinely liked what I've read so far. Seriously, great job. If you ever choose to continue someday, I will be here to read. This story is too good to let go. I think these two characters should have more of a conclusion in this installment. But I guess overall I should be happy, considering with the last installment, we know that they end up together. So at least that's been told.
But still, if you continue, I'm willing to read. :)

Im so happy your back ^^

@Creep
Aww sweety, I love you too<33

@Elzzo
Don't be sorry, do what's best for you <3 But please don't do anything you will regret later... I LOVE YOU !!!!!

@Elzzo
Don't be sorry, do what's best for you <3 But please don't do anything you will regret later... I LOVE YOU !!!!!

@Creep
Hi, yeah I'm okey. My parents found out about everything so I'm getting help now. I'm also having a
writers block so I really don't know what to write. I also have a really rough time with a "friend/bf" of mine I need to deal with and a lot anxiety comes with that. So I don't know when I'm returning again. Sorry.

Hey, you havent updated in wile and I just wanted to ask if your okay...

Hey, don't doubt yourself, you're an awesome writer :)

@Billie Joe Gaskarth
<3 *hugging back*

Hope everything sorts itself out, *hugs*

:)

@jessicatonimason
Thank you :)

Hope you feel better soon and get things sorted :)

Omg that cliffhanger!!

CLIFFHANGER :(

@Elzzo
Ur Welcome sweaty <3

@Creep
Aww that's so sweet! Thank you honey <3

@Elzzo
Im shure u would be great at both !!
And i would listen to ur music and read ur books !!!!!!!!!!
:)

@Creep
Thank you, I'm dreaming about being a singer and songwriter actually, but I'd love to be a writer too.

@Elzzo
I listen to all the bands you have mentioned but my fave ones are ATL and PTV !! :)
You should think about becoming a writer!!