Just Two Kids Stupid And Fearless
I admit, I should've made some changes
The rain poured down on m and Alex outside my house. I felt how my makeup streamed down on my face, because none of us had an umbrella. We smiled, and giggled a little at each other, even though we said goodbye again. He laid his hand on my neck, and kissed me, softly. I grabbed his waist, and tried to pull him closer to me. I tugged his jacket, so he grabbed my head and kissed me harder.
Somehow, this was cozy. Just standing in the rain, and kiss the one you love the most. My hair was curly, it was a waste of time straighten it in the morning. It was sad that he would leave again, but I knew it wouldn't take long until I would come to him. The life on the road.
Alex bit my lip, and I let him inside. He tasted chicken and rise from our late lunch together. He had made sure that I would eat every third hour I was awake, and hopefully I would gain some pounds when I arrive to them.
He moved his hands, to my back and ass. He pushed my body harder to his and I twisted my arms around his neck. We stood like that for 2 minutes, until Alex broke the kiss and just leaned his forehead to mine.
"I like this. It feels like The Notebook.", he smiled. I giggled.
"I like this too, even though I'm cold as hell.", I said and licked my lips.
"I'm gonna miss you so much. But I'll see you in two weeks, and stay strong and keep eating like now, okey?", he mumbled, and his nose tip touched mine.
"Yeah, I'm gonna miss you too. You should go now, so you don't get late.", I smiled, and he pulled me into a hug. He wrapped his arms around my waist.
"Bye.", I said when he let go.
"Bye, babe. I'll call you every night as usual.", he kissed my forehead, and then drove away in his car. I smiled for myself, and the walked into the house.
"Hello?", I yelled.
"Hey sweetheart. Take off your wet clothes, and then come to the kitchen.", mom said. My t-shirt was fine, but hoodie and jeans wasn't. I walked up to my room and took off my jeans, and hoodie, and took on pajamas pants. I walked down with my bandaid visible, and I saw a strange woman sitting with mom and dad.
"Wendy, this is Sienna. She's a therapist, and a teacher, pretty much what we need. She is, or maybe I should let her introduce herself.", dad said, and I took a seat between mom and dad around the table.
"As Danny here said, I'm Sienna, and I'm 34 years old. I live here in Baltimore alone, I have no family, or boyfriend, so I have a lot of time over. I've been in collage twice, once for therapist, and one for teacher in those subject you're reading. They've told me your story, and it's totally understandable if you want homeschooling. I'd love to be your teacher, therapist, and of course friend, because if you want me, then we're gonna spend some time together. It's all up to you.", the woman with the dark brown hair, golden brown skin, and black eyes who said her name was Sienna. She looked honest, and serious. I don't know why, but I got a really good first impression by her, I thought that we would be great along. I looked her over, and she had a nice style. Well, it wasn't like mine, but it reminded me of my old. Her hair was beach wavy, and she wore dark brown eyeshadow, eyeliner and mascara, with some lipgloss.
"Sure,", I said. "I'd like to have you as that.", she looked happy, and smiled big. She was really pretty when she smiled with her eyes. It was really hard to believe she was 34, she looked like she was under 25.
"I'm really glad you do. When do you wanna start?"
"Maybe you could go shopping, and having dinner together now, so you get to know each other a little before?", my mom came up with the idea. "You can get some money from me Wendy.", she pulled up her wallet and started digging after money.
"Mom, you don't need to. I have my own.", I said, but she ignored me and handed my two 100$ bills. "Wow, you absolutely didn't need to, but thanks."
Alex POV:
P"It's so good to be back again!", Jack smiled at me when we settled on the plane. "Arizona next baby!", I smiled down at my legs.
"I wish we could stay longer. I'd really like to meet my parents too.", I said.
"Yeah, you spent all your time with Wendy.", he raised his eyebrows and looked away. I found it really rude, and it sounded like he didn't like her.
"What the fuck do you mean with that?", I glared at him.
"Sorry, but it feels like you, I don't know how to say it, you don't give other people you love your time too. I think you should've visited your parents while you had the time. She can be fine for some couple hours, either if you believe it or not. I don't know her opinion, but you've changed since you met her, has she said anything about anyone?", he wondered and I crossed my arms. He had already forgot how we found her two days ago?
"I don't know if you remember, but we found her almost dead two days ago. She's been bullied, having eating disorders and self harm problems. Why do you think I wanna spend time on her? I've been looking after her eating schedule, and that she's happy every single second. You're right, I should've spent some time on my parents, and I regret I didn't. But, do you really wanna know what changed me? I fell in love with her, and I'm crazy about her. You know, she hasn't said a thing about you, the band, the crew or my family, I know she loves them, and she wouldn't mind if I saw them for an hour, or two. I didn't do it, she's not a part of this at all.", I hissed at him. How damn stupid could he be? Well, Jack had said a lot of stupid things his entire life, but nothing like this.
"I didn't mean it was her fault. Gosh, I take it back, sorry.", he said, and looked out the window. I glared at him even more, and felt how the plane started rolling on the ground. I couldn't believe that he said that, he knew what she meant to me. He could've had some understanding for what she went, and still going through. Me and Jack had been fighting before, so why did this piss me off more than before? He loved Wendy, I knew that, but when someone pull in anyone like that when something it's my fault, then I just wanna slap them.
Just because he was my best friend, it didn't mean that he could say whatever he wanted about my girlfriend, or anyone close to me. Just like I couldn't do that to him, or Rian, Zack, my crew, and Wendy.
Somehow, this was cozy. Just standing in the rain, and kiss the one you love the most. My hair was curly, it was a waste of time straighten it in the morning. It was sad that he would leave again, but I knew it wouldn't take long until I would come to him. The life on the road.
Alex bit my lip, and I let him inside. He tasted chicken and rise from our late lunch together. He had made sure that I would eat every third hour I was awake, and hopefully I would gain some pounds when I arrive to them.
He moved his hands, to my back and ass. He pushed my body harder to his and I twisted my arms around his neck. We stood like that for 2 minutes, until Alex broke the kiss and just leaned his forehead to mine.
"I like this. It feels like The Notebook.", he smiled. I giggled.
"I like this too, even though I'm cold as hell.", I said and licked my lips.
"I'm gonna miss you so much. But I'll see you in two weeks, and stay strong and keep eating like now, okey?", he mumbled, and his nose tip touched mine.
"Yeah, I'm gonna miss you too. You should go now, so you don't get late.", I smiled, and he pulled me into a hug. He wrapped his arms around my waist.
"Bye.", I said when he let go.
"Bye, babe. I'll call you every night as usual.", he kissed my forehead, and then drove away in his car. I smiled for myself, and the walked into the house.
"Hello?", I yelled.
"Hey sweetheart. Take off your wet clothes, and then come to the kitchen.", mom said. My t-shirt was fine, but hoodie and jeans wasn't. I walked up to my room and took off my jeans, and hoodie, and took on pajamas pants. I walked down with my bandaid visible, and I saw a strange woman sitting with mom and dad.
"Wendy, this is Sienna. She's a therapist, and a teacher, pretty much what we need. She is, or maybe I should let her introduce herself.", dad said, and I took a seat between mom and dad around the table.
"As Danny here said, I'm Sienna, and I'm 34 years old. I live here in Baltimore alone, I have no family, or boyfriend, so I have a lot of time over. I've been in collage twice, once for therapist, and one for teacher in those subject you're reading. They've told me your story, and it's totally understandable if you want homeschooling. I'd love to be your teacher, therapist, and of course friend, because if you want me, then we're gonna spend some time together. It's all up to you.", the woman with the dark brown hair, golden brown skin, and black eyes who said her name was Sienna. She looked honest, and serious. I don't know why, but I got a really good first impression by her, I thought that we would be great along. I looked her over, and she had a nice style. Well, it wasn't like mine, but it reminded me of my old. Her hair was beach wavy, and she wore dark brown eyeshadow, eyeliner and mascara, with some lipgloss.
"Sure,", I said. "I'd like to have you as that.", she looked happy, and smiled big. She was really pretty when she smiled with her eyes. It was really hard to believe she was 34, she looked like she was under 25.
"I'm really glad you do. When do you wanna start?"
"Maybe you could go shopping, and having dinner together now, so you get to know each other a little before?", my mom came up with the idea. "You can get some money from me Wendy.", she pulled up her wallet and started digging after money.
"Mom, you don't need to. I have my own.", I said, but she ignored me and handed my two 100$ bills. "Wow, you absolutely didn't need to, but thanks."
Alex POV:
P"It's so good to be back again!", Jack smiled at me when we settled on the plane. "Arizona next baby!", I smiled down at my legs.
"I wish we could stay longer. I'd really like to meet my parents too.", I said.
"Yeah, you spent all your time with Wendy.", he raised his eyebrows and looked away. I found it really rude, and it sounded like he didn't like her.
"What the fuck do you mean with that?", I glared at him.
"Sorry, but it feels like you, I don't know how to say it, you don't give other people you love your time too. I think you should've visited your parents while you had the time. She can be fine for some couple hours, either if you believe it or not. I don't know her opinion, but you've changed since you met her, has she said anything about anyone?", he wondered and I crossed my arms. He had already forgot how we found her two days ago?
"I don't know if you remember, but we found her almost dead two days ago. She's been bullied, having eating disorders and self harm problems. Why do you think I wanna spend time on her? I've been looking after her eating schedule, and that she's happy every single second. You're right, I should've spent some time on my parents, and I regret I didn't. But, do you really wanna know what changed me? I fell in love with her, and I'm crazy about her. You know, she hasn't said a thing about you, the band, the crew or my family, I know she loves them, and she wouldn't mind if I saw them for an hour, or two. I didn't do it, she's not a part of this at all.", I hissed at him. How damn stupid could he be? Well, Jack had said a lot of stupid things his entire life, but nothing like this.
"I didn't mean it was her fault. Gosh, I take it back, sorry.", he said, and looked out the window. I glared at him even more, and felt how the plane started rolling on the ground. I couldn't believe that he said that, he knew what she meant to me. He could've had some understanding for what she went, and still going through. Me and Jack had been fighting before, so why did this piss me off more than before? He loved Wendy, I knew that, but when someone pull in anyone like that when something it's my fault, then I just wanna slap them.
Just because he was my best friend, it didn't mean that he could say whatever he wanted about my girlfriend, or anyone close to me. Just like I couldn't do that to him, or Rian, Zack, my crew, and Wendy.
Notes
Poor Jack though. He just tried to make his best friend see more people than Wendy...I was at a free concert today, with my friends and met a bunch of new people. Idk if you know him, it's a Swedish singer, but he's famous in Japan so. His name is Yohio, and is a visual-kei singer. It's not my usual taste in music, I just went for meeating friends I haven't met in ages, but this was really good. We were there since 12pm, and it started 07:45pm, but it was totally worth it. I screamed so much, and almost cried when he looked at me haha.
So, I just read what you have of this story and its prequel, and I really like what you have of both. At first, it was a little rough getting into it; it seemed kind of rushed at first, especially with all of the drama of how they got together and then broke up in like a day when they first met, but I have to say, after the time passed and they got back together again, this story just really started getting good. Some of the grammar is a bit off, but as you continued the story I noticed your improvement and that's awesome; that means you have definitely progressed as you have continued writing this.
I'm sad it was never finished, though. One thing I found a bit odd was that you continued with this installment after giving the first one an epilogue, due to the fact that means we already know the ending for Wendy and Alex, but... I kind of like how you did that. I don't believe I've seen an author do that before, kind of go back and fill in the time in-between in the sequel.
And this story is seriously so cute. Alex and Wendy's love is seriously so genuine; again, while it was a bit rushed at first, as I got into the second half of the first installment and this sequel it was just, wow, I just love their relationship. It's been a while since I've seen such a connection between the two characters and I seriously enjoyed it.
And I also liked the fact that as I got to the end of what you have so far, that you made it realistic. Alex understands she's not ready for a baby and is ready to sacrifice that. This is actually the first time I've seen this in a story, where it's being both considered and followed through with, along with the fact that both characters are for the most part peaceful with the decision. Hell I'm even peaceful with the decision, which really surprises me, because every other story where this has happened, I haven't been. And that's really weird for me, so kudos for pulling that off and making it convincing, and not making it so heartbreaking. I mean it is still a heartbreaking thing, but it's more understood that it's the best decision. Although the two characters being fine with it probably is what makes me as a reader somewhat okay with it. I'm happy you took that route as opposed to creating severe conflict, which is what I typically see with this idea. It was a nice change.
And, wow, this is a long comment. To sum up, I think you're a great writer and I really hope you're still writing on your own time, at least. I'm sad this wasn't finished, but I wanted to leave a comment letting you know my thoughts and just how much I've genuinely liked what I've read so far. Seriously, great job. If you ever choose to continue someday, I will be here to read. This story is too good to let go. I think these two characters should have more of a conclusion in this installment. But I guess overall I should be happy, considering with the last installment, we know that they end up together. So at least that's been told.
But still, if you continue, I'm willing to read. :)
7/5/16