Dirty Laundry - Comments, page 3

@Newyork_xo
I need more cute stuff like that.

And I don't like the idea of not 'completely awful'. I swear to god, if you fuck with my emotions... I don't know what I'll do, but I'll do it.

@aweirdkindofyellow



@Kurrsteee; I’m glad you both liked that part. I’m trying to throw little subtle things in here and there that show the relationship they have.

I won’t give too much away about Brian and Riley’s chat, but it doesn’t go completely awful...

@Kurrsteee;
I agree with the five dollar thing, so instead of acting like it's a super original idea I'mma reply to you. Also hoping this talk won't cause too much drama.

I was going to say my favourite part of this was finding ou5 Alex pays Summer when he swears, but now I'm too nervous for Riley's talk with Brian.

Loved this! I’m open to anything but I’d like to see how his relationship with summer has evolved.

@Newyork_xo
I'm excited to read it all.

@aweirdkindofyellow
All good ideas. I actually have some plans similar to your suggestions. I think one is included in these flashbacks that involve Alex and Summer really bonding for the first time.

@Newyork_xo
Oh, yeah, of course, you're doing a series of flashbacks XD It wouldn't be right to fit something so important in.
Hmm... Maybe somebody reacting to Riley being in a committed relationship. I'm not sure if all her family members or friends know about it (if she's still in contact with them, I forgot).
Maybe something after Alex already met Summer. Maybe Summer gets ill, then Riley gets it as well (or she's super busy at the gallery) and Alex helps out? Some bonding time for Summer and Alex cause I'm assuming they won't be super close straight away.
How about Alex's friends reacting to Riley having a daughter or them meeting Summer for the first time. Maybe both?
I have so many ideas xD Maybe you have something along these lines planned for another chapter, though, I don't know. I just know how much I love getting suggestions from people but rarely do.

@aweirdkindofyellow
That’s still to come but won’t be for a little while.
Anything else you want to see?

I was expecting to read about Alex finally meeting Summer, but got this instead. I'm not mad, not mad at all. s'cute!

@aweirdkindofyellow
Hahaha, I’m not sure it’s worth all 10s yet.

@Newyork_xo
On a completely unrelated note, I don't get why this only has a rating of 9.8. WHY DO PEOPLE NOT GIVE THIS A 10!!!

@Kurrsteee;
Yay! I just hope the motivation continues. :-)

@aweirdkindofyellow
Yeah... I’ve definitely never seen that. Don’t feel bad though. I’m terrible with keeping up with these meme things, lol

@Newyork_xo
It's not really a popular meme or anything, but it's from this

"What should I wear?" JFC, Alex. :')
I loved it!!
I'm also super enjoying that the motivation seems to be real. <3

@hopeless1313
Awww... Well, Riley did mess up so he needed to make her sweat just a little bit, right?

@aweirdkindofyellow
Noooo, you don't sound stupid...I'm out of the loop on a lot of things these days.
What is it from?

"What shoud I wear" I LOVE that lol. Adorable. I mean we already knew he was going to come around obviously, but damn not gonna lie was holding my breath while reading parts of that convo lol

@Newyork_xo
Well, then... Now I just sound stupid xD