A Story to Tell Your Friends - Comments, page 7

@Carebear

Thank you! I'm always unsure when I put quite random stuff in my chapters, but I just really thought that helped build a sense of who Clara was! Besides, Mark Hamill and Jack Nicholson just do not get enough love now.
PS. Thank you for your feedback on my Alex story too, it's always much appreciated. <3

I am so very proud of your Batman discussion in this chapter. The fact that you listed Mark Hamill just makes my heart go pitter pat. Now I super love this story.

I'm obsessed now

OOOOOH! They are about to do something bad. Oh well. They will be happier for it. :o) This story is so cute.

Man, poor Jack and Clara. Their friends are making a big deal out of their little relationship. Just let them live!

Yayayayay! They kissed!!

@Newyork_xo
It's based on the film Alien and it's got a very 80s vibe to it. But basically the Alien jumps out at you from pretty much anywhere and you have to avoid it in the vents and stuff, but it's procedurally generated so every time you have to replay the level, the Alien does something different and it can actually hear you if you move too quickly and stuff. I've been too scared to play it again since that day haha.

Also, thank you for your feedback on this so far. It's really lovely. <3

I know almost nothing about video games like that, so I will have to take your word for it, lol.

As for Jack and Clara, they are too cute and should just give it up and kiss already!

Oh my gosh! They're so cute.

This is so cute. I'm loving the progression of Jack and Clara's relationship.

Aww, Jack...

This is cute so far. I look forward to reading more. :)