The Lost Boys - Comments, page 2

@Jagk Skellington
@thetrekkie

it will all come clearer in the next chapters, I promise! I don't know if you like it though :o
anyways I am so glad you guys keep at this, I have the feeling nobody even reads this :(
still I will keep on updating and love you so much ;)

@Jagk Skellington
She's switching in and out of worlds yo, and she isn't getting any sleep because I guess when she knocks out, she transitions x)

UGH WHAT I AM SO EFFING CONFUSED YOU FRUSTERATING PERSON

@Jagk Skellington
:)

Why do I get the feeling Austin Carlile is the king?

@thetrekkie
@Jagk Skellington

Being confused is good! The plot is about finding out what is going on, we only know as much as Mel finds out and it will not be the last we see from the lost boy(s). Thanks for reading and commenting, you know that is what keeps me going.

I am so utterly confused right now but I hope it goes back to foresty weird alex situation thing I liked that

Did she time travel or something o.O

@Jagk Skellington
Oh thanks so much, yeah I was going for something other than the usual Teen Jalex. Although I love to read them as well ;)) I hope I can keep you interested in the story :)) xo

@thetrekkie
What a cute bear she will meet ;)

@Twat
Will it be the bear? :o I kinda hope it's the bear, I'd like to know what her reaction would be like if she came face to face with a bear :D

This actually seems pretty good, caught my interest. It's unique. It's well-written. I'm excited to see more! c:

@thetrekkie
Aaaaaawwww, thank you. There might be an unexpected twist soon ;)

ooooooooooooooooooo I like it! Lookin forward to reading more