The Lost Boys - Comments

Awww, I'm glad to hear that. That was my point with leaving it. <3
And I totally understand. I admire you for finishing it, really, and having the will to do so and just considering how the readers might feel if it wasn't. I'm glad you did wrap it up; like I said, while there were some things I wondered about, it was still a good ending by letting us know essentially what was going on and letting us know what ended up happening to Mel.
So no worries. :)

@Nanook
You have no idea how happy your comment made me. I fully understand your reasoning and I had planned this story to be longer and more detailed but as time went on I felt there was not a lot of interest from the readers and somehow that made me loose my confidence. So I brought the story to an end pretty quickly just so I wouldn't let you guys hanging with an unfinished plot. (Cause that drives me crazy when it happens to me). Anyway thank you so much for your review it made my day ☺️

Hello.
So I just stumbled across this story. Don't ask how I found it cause I honestly don't know. XD
But oh my god. This story... I can't believe it didn't get more recognition. It was seriously... amazing.
Not only was there a unique plot line, but you kept it going, leaving us on edge with what was going on with the main character, and just... wow, it was seriously so awesomely written. You're a really great writer, and a creative person for working with this concept.
I had a feeling from the beginning that it probably dealt with death (just from the whole Peter Pan in general conspiracy theory, which may have inspired you, maybe not... where Neverland is seen as a heaven type of thing, and that's why they never grow older). But, wow, you definitely changed it up a bit by making her still be alive in the process, like not making her already dead and in a type of heaven. And that made it unique with switching back and forth between the realities.
The only thing that I'm left wondering about, is what was Mel's past? Why was she no longer with Alex? How did her relationships build with each of the people? Although I guess some of it can be assumed, I would have liked to have read more into that, just to show how connected she was with them, and why it was even more significant in her other reality. But that's really it. And I mean, I guess with the way the story works, with us reading alongside her not knowing, it kind of made sense that it went this way. But idk, may be something to consider to write about someday. Although, don't get me wrong, it's amazing as is and I understand if you don't want to mess that up.
But yeah, I just wanted to leave a comment letting you know that I really enjoyed this, even two years after you posted it. Great job with it. This is the first story in a long time that's made me cry. A sad ending, but happy at the same time since she was finally at peace.
I again can't believe this story didn't get more recognition, you deserve more and if I had read it while you were updating, I definitely would have commented frequently and gave feedback. Unfortunately, that didn't happen, so I'm hoping my long comment now makes up for that, lol.
I will definitely have to check out some more of your stuff. <3

@thetrekkie
Awwwww, thank you. Well I had a couple of filler chapters in my mind and I know there are a few loose ends in the story that I should have resolved but honestly, it was the best I could do at the moment. So yeah. Bye and love you. X

WHAT THE HELL D: I didn't expect that at ALL! Kinda sad that it's over but I'm really happy that I was able to read this :)

@Jagk Skellington
I'm glad you loved it. Yeah it was quite a short story but I really was struggling with it and as I promised myself to never abandon a story I had to get it over with. So, no I don't think there will be a sequel soon or ever but I'm already on a new plot, so see you soon. Luv ya. Thanks for reading and sticking round.

@ApathyforSympathy
Oh, sorry, I was referring to the fact that when Austin Carlile had his heart surgery he practically was dead for a couple of minutes before they brought him back. Maybe should have explained that a bit more :0

WHAT IT'S OVER BUT HAT AND WHAT WHAT WHAT WAHT NOT COOL MAN I LOVED THIS STORY. SEQUEL? NO? YES!? PLEASE?!?!?!

But... but... wow. I did not expect this to end this soon and like this. Great job. But, if I may ask, if King Austin actually died how can Austin (Mel's brother) be alive?

@thetrekkie
Awww, thanks. I will do my best to keep the story going.

@Jagk Skellington
yeah, I know that you knew, but I couldn't tell you, could I ?
sly little thing you! ;))

I FVCKING KNEW AUSTIN WOULD BE KING YOU MOTHATRUCKIN TATERTWATS I TOLD YOU

I haven't been on here in about a week and a half. Family stuff. And I didn't really feel like doing anything, but I'm perking up and started to catch up with this story :) still loving it by the way

UGH CLIFFHaNGER

Oh shiznit shits gonna go down

Thank God she didn't transition to a time where she was driving. That would have been bad ._.

it's all right it's still SPECTACULAR

@Jagk Skellington
Awww thanx, I promise it is getting better, at least I hope ;))

@Twat
Aye of course I'm reading it, and I get that she's changing worlds but like WTF is one real and one not or are try both real that is we're i am confused but I shall wait patiently for explanation

@thetrekkie
Def not brah! Means the world to me. Thanx. Xo

Bruh, you got almost 300 views, I think about 10 are me x) you got people reading this story, believe me. There is a very high possibility that they are not use to commenting. This concept is great. The way you go about it is incredible! I believe in you! Your story is amazing and I know you won't let a sista down!! :D