No Pads… No Helmets… Just Memories! - Comments

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Okay so I'm SarahBethBarakat but I lost this account since google changed it's log-in and I can't get in now...
so if y'all could do me a huge solid and readTHISand comment and help me out that would be super dupepr awesome and amazing <3 and I'm SO SO SO SORRY FOR THE HUGE AND ANNOYING INCONVENIENCE THIS IS!

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Okay so I'm SarahBethBarakat but I lost this account since google changed it's log-in and I can't get in now...
so if y'all could do me a huge solid and readTHISand comment and help me out that would be super dupepr awesome and amazing <3 and I'm SO SO SO SORRY FOR THE HUGE AND ANNOYING INCONVENIENCE THIS IS!

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Okay so I'm SarahBethBarakat but I lost this account since google changed it's log-in and I can't get in now...
so if y'all could do me a huge solid and readTHISand comment and help me out that would be super dupepr awesome and amazing <3 and I'm SO SO SO SORRY FOR THE HUGE AND ANNOYING INCONVENIENCE THIS IS!

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Okay so I'm SarahBethBarakat but I lost this account since google changed it's log-in and I can't get in now...
so if y'all could do me a huge solid and readTHISand comment and help me out that would be super dupepr awesome and amazing <3 and I'm SO SO SO SORRY FOR THE HUGE AND ANNOYING INCONVENIENCE THIS IS!

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Okay so I'm SarahBethBarakat but I lost this account since google changed it's log-in and I can't get in now...
so if y'all could do me a huge solid and readTHISand comment and help me out that would be super dupepr awesome and amazing <3 and I'm SO SO SO SORRY FOR THE HUGE AND ANNOYING INCONVENIENCE THIS IS!

Holy moly this is amazing, thank you for writing this!

I'm so happy for you! Take your time!! <3

I just finished reading this whole thing and HOLY CRAP it's amazing, you're a great writer!!!!

@DreamsInOblivion
Sure thing! I'm just going to switch it up a bit because i assume you have red the entire story now??

@SarahBethBarakat
You're welcome :) I would say perhaps the word would be "elaborate" or maybe "thorough" haha. I'm glad my review went to positive use in that you enjoyed observing the change in perspective torwards your story. I would be happy to receive the in depth response, as you may have observed I am no stranger to copious amounts of the written word and it would likely make for a fascinating read.

@DreamsInOblivion
You're welcome!

@DreamsInOblivion
Thank you, and seriously I do very much appreciate the review because all though its not the typical one sentencer everyone else leaves it was way more- God what is the word I am thinking of! Anyway it was very helpful and fufilling to see smaller things someone had noticed and understand how it fully comes across to someone who isnt the source of it! And i did write a full in depth response if you would like me to send that to you as well!!

@SoWrongItsRian
Actually... I didn't take their comment as hate at all! Yes, I laughed through most of it but I can't deny how true all of it is, and i replied to them in a private message because I thought my response would be too long to comment but all responses were genuine and civil, no one was attacking the story and it is incredibly flawed, especially in its opening chapters. But thank you anyway.

Also happy belated birthday! Sorry to here about your relationship drama but it's good you broke it off before things became entangled in outside issues. It's good to hear you're getting things sorted, no rush on the chapters because I'm well aware of how hectic life can be so don't let this become an additional stresser. Only write when you want to not when you feel you have to because it not only produces better results (it is usually apparent when people write for the sake of a chapter but not for the love of it), but will also help you emotionally. So good luck with the writing and thanks for the update :)

@Tell My Voice What It Takes
Thank you for defending me, it's greatly appreciated :). As you probably gathered from my review I was just venting because I wanted Jasey and Alex to have good relationship but her choices kept impeding the ship from sailing smoothly. I was never trying to express negativity towards the author. I was just judging the characters as though they were real people and as such I was pointing out their faults (which normal people have and I was glad to see in this fanfic because Mary sues are boring as hell to read about). And I mean their faults as normal people, not implying that the author should change their character. Like fans of Breaking Bad pointing out Skyler's faults are not trying to tell the writers of the show "Hey you f- ed up write Skyler's character better!" but more along the lines of pretending she's a real person and coming to the conclusion that they would hate her in real life for the following reasons (then they list her faults).

@SoWrongItsRian
Yeah.... way to judge a book by it's cover. Firstly I was not "hating on this story" I was expressing my annoyance with some of the CHARACTER DECISIONS in the story. Me (among many others) often go on long rants about how much we hate Andrea's piss poor choices from The Walking Dead but we are all very big fans of the show and love watching it... Do you see the difference between disliking a character and disliking a writer and their story now? Additionally, had you actually to read the rest of the statement prior to passing judgement you would here that I was aware it likely "falls on deaf ears". (As I stated in the review you couldn't be bothered to read apparently) I was simply venting at the decision making of Jasey in order to vent and provide the author with feedback as to how I interpreted their characters. I wish to add as well that I am aware that your comment came with somewhat good intentions in that I don't condone needlessly berating someone's hard work either. However, what bothers me is that you first misinterpreted my review and became confused between (as I said earlier) disliking certain characters versus disliking a story then wrote about what a terrible person I was despite the fact that you did not even read the whole review. I find that action of yours to be synonymous with the types of people who view a movie trailer than say that the movie sucks before actually watching the whole thing. I actually said that the fact that I had a strong response to this story was a positive because it means I was emotionally invested in it. If I actually thought this was a bad fic I would NOT have gotten to chapter 57. I would simply stop reading and move on (without reviewing because I don't want to make the writer feel bad and become discouraged). Also I always HATE when people say "It's fake" and fiction because I believe that's a cop out because that can be said to defend all fictional movies and books and serves to discredit ANY form of criticism of fiction. Again I DO understand you were trying to be nice and defend the author but in the future please think before attacking the keyboard with a thirst for blood in the form of vengeance.

@SoWrongItsRian
You should've read the whole thing. Basically, it was constructive criticism, which is a very good thing to receive from your readers. You can't say "Don't like it, don't read it" when you didn't even read the comment in the first place. It was absurd, and your statement is out of place.

If you had taken the time to read the comment like I did instead of getting your panties in a twist over the first few sentences, you would have hopefully not commented your pathetic response. So really, there was no reason for your comment.

@DreamsInOblivion
Dude, chill out..it's called 'fiction' for a reason; it's fake, and will never happen. I think this is one of the best stories on here, and if you don't like it, cool. But what's not cool is basically hating on this whole story because you don't like it. If you don't like it, don't read it! It's not rocket science. There was literally no reason for your comment (which I only read the first few sentences), other than to be purely horrible and shove your opinion in someone's face. You're entitled to your opinion, but bashing a story that somebody's gone to the trouble of writing is just awful. Your running mouth falls on deaf ears, my friend, and if I was the author of this fic, I'd just ignore it.