I wish I could - Comments, page 3

@forgottenangels_
thanks omg c:

@Avenged mice and men
I know!

@xMareBear14x
not gonna say anything about this possibility...

@Gaskarth4life
@powerpillz
wow yeah I know omg

O M G :D

OH MY GOD!!!

What if Alex said no? Just... Take a second to imagine that...

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :3

Agh my gosh it's so good! C:

@The gavament of jalex
you'll have to wait for a bit, I'm afraid... but soon c:

Alex please say yes !!

@MelanieGaskarth
thanks m'lady c:

@powerpillz
Maybe it will take a turn for the better :)
And thanks c:

love it! made me (almost) cry at moments, such a sad story :/
oh and you made jalex so awesome :)

Loving the new chapter girrrlll <3

@MelanieGaskarth
ooh thank you so much c:

@laura

I love your layout and just the general organisation :D

@MelanieGaskarth
Thank you aw but what do you mean by structure? like the layout and all that or the organisation? Help, I'm confused :')

@MakeMeLoveATL
Thank you so much!!

You're an excellent writer. I like this fic!

That's okay beautiful
You have a wonderful structure to your writing ^-^

@MelanieGaskarth
Thank you so much for your feedback - I appreciate it.
Yeah that's what I thought too; I'm trying, but most of the time I simply forget. I will try to keep it more prominent in my head though.
Thank you c:

I love the story so far (currently commenting on chapter 32) I wanted to read as much as possible before leaving feedback. I want to see the end of this story :) Laura, you are a brilliant writer but I do have some suggestions for you to help if you are willing to take them in.
I think you could improve on descriptive writing to set the scene. Eg, The hospital; think of the 5 senses - did the hospital smell like anesthetic. For me, that would improve the story. I know that you are an excellent writer and it makes me so happy to read a fic like this :D

@forgottenangels_
thanks so much! c:

Agh this story is so good. You're a great writer C: