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Memories That Fade Like Photographs. - Comments, page 2
Ahhh I love flashbacks and this is great but I need new story details!! Ahh, but anyway this is looking really good.
I hate when people don't give feedback on my stories, I know how you're feeling! I like the story so far, and I like the idea you have going on, but I feel like everything is moving really fast! Maybe it'll help if you slow the storyline down a bit by adding in more details and things like how the characters are feeling.
And I'm really hoping Alex isn't being a complete ass and apologizes to August! Update soon 'cause I want to find out haha :)
And I'm really hoping Alex isn't being a complete ass and apologizes to August! Update soon 'cause I want to find out haha :)
Oh come on, I ship them so hard, could you really expect me to do that? But based on that, you're gonna haaaate the rest of this story!!
12/11/12