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Make it a sweet, sweet goodbye - Comments, page 2
This is really good. I want to know who heard the conversation. Because if it was Kendra they are all in trouble. It would be so easy to get to Rebecca by just telling her she was ripping Alex and his best friend apart. If it was Rebecca then they are still in trouble. She could break up with Alex over guilt of breaking up him and his best friend. Personally I hope it's Kara. That way she can help Alex figure shit out. And if it is her she should tell him she doesn't trust Kendra either. It would be cool for her to be like his confidante. Keep going I like it.
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I don't really give a shit about the grammar, just wanted to leave an honest comment ;) keep updating!
I don't really give a shit about the grammar, just wanted to leave an honest comment ;) keep updating!
@Ellama Yeah I know :/, I get carried away typing the story and my grammar and punctuation goes down hill and I am one of the laziest people in the world who is too tired to read through the fic sorry x_x but I am glad you're enjoying it :) hopefully when my exams finish I will put my 100% attention to detail and stop making mistakes :) Thank you though :)
I love this fic so much omg but sometimes if I'm being honest the writing goes a bit downhill I dunno how to explain it but the punctuation or something that my grammar nazi mind fixes on to... Anyway, great fic, love it:)
This is so adorable yet sad at the same time!
SO MANY FEELS!
Poor Jack. I love this story, its amazing!
SO MANY FEELS!
Poor Jack. I love this story, its amazing!
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