Throwing Stones at Glass Houses
Chapter 22
I was asleep for a while. I woke up feeling sick. I rolled off of the bed and crawled into the bathroom. I threw up a couple of times. I crawled back into my room and realized Vic was asleep. He looked so cute. I felt to weak to stand. I felt almost like i was dying. I held on to the bed and tried to pull myself up. When I didn't succeed, I decided to just sleep on the floor. I was cold. I coughed a bit. "Stella where did you go," Vic said sitting up. He spoke with a worried tone. "On the floor," I said trying to pull myself up. He stood up and lifted me up. "How did you end up there," he said laying me back down on my bed. "I wasn't feeling good," I said throwing a coughing fit again. "You look so pale," he said pushing
my bangs out of my eyes. Vic leaned down to kiss me. "Vic don't," I said moving my head to the side. "I don't care," he said kissing me. As it turned out I had the flu. I was out of school for about a week. Everyday Vic came over to take care of me.
my bangs out of my eyes. Vic leaned down to kiss me. "Vic don't," I said moving my head to the side. "I don't care," he said kissing me. As it turned out I had the flu. I was out of school for about a week. Everyday Vic came over to take care of me.
Notes
Thanks for all the comments! I couldn't dissapoint so here's another chapter! Love you guys! <3 More soon i promise!Also I need your opinions i'm thinking about writing another story about a girl who is dating Alex and he cheats on her and she runs away. If you have any ideas you want to give me or if you want to co-write it with me you can! Thanks guys!
So I originally found this on Mibba, but came over to this site once I saw it wasn't finished on there (and seeing you said you had a profile on here in an author's note), to see if you maybe finished it on here...
You didn't, which is a bummer. :( But you did get one more update up on here in comparison to Mibba, so that's something.
I really like what you have of this story, and bummed that you didn't continue/finish it. Especially after reading this last update; I had a feeling what all was between her and Vic was kind of rigged, but wasn't sure. Now... :O
I'm just wondering why Alex hates her so much. I mean, at first I thought it was because he liked her, so he teased her, but then he just started getting awfully harsh and then like almost took advantage of her... like WTF. I also can't believe Jack would be friends with him after seeing him hit his sister, just because he seemed "alright"... that was a bit weird.
But I think you're a really great writer, other than those missing factors. Some of those you were probably leading into explaining more and just didn't get to, which is really unfortunate.
If you ever find yourself wanting to write for this story again, I will be here to read. I also subscribed to it on Mibba too, although this seems to be the most up-to-date version. But regardless of which platform you post on, I will read. :) I think it's a really intriguing plot line and I would love to see how it all ends.
Hoping this comment will maybe inspire you to continue. If not, just wanted to let you know how much I have enjoyed this and just wanted to show you that people like me are still stumbling across your story. :)
4/16/17