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Throwing Stones at Glass Houses

Chapter 15

I hopped out of the shower and wrapped a towel around my body. My wet hair was stuck to my face. It was only four and I planned on hanging with the guys later. I put on a pair of ripped skinny jeans. I grabbed my black Green Day t-shirt an grabbed my black Vans. I stood up and looked at myself in the mirror. I fixed my shirt on my body until I was satisfied with how it looked. I heard noises from downstairs. "Jack," I asked walking out of my room. There was no answer. I walked down the steps quietly walking towards the kitchen. I peered in to see Alex sitting in my kitchen. I screamed at the top of my lungs sprinting towards the stairs. I ran up and locked myself in my room. "Open up," Jack said knocking on the door. "Not until you tell me why the hell that thing is in our house," I said pacing in my room. I heard Alex chuckle. "Open up," Jack repeated. I opened the door. "Why is he here," I said pointing at Alex. "He's my friend," Jack said walking down the steps following Alex. "No he's not Jack, he's not your friend and you know that," I said starting to raise my voice. "Since when do you have control over who my friends are," he screamed at me. I jumped back a bit. Jack had never ever yelled at me. I choked over my own words trying to recollect myself. My confusion turned into hatered. "I hate you Jack," I screamed running up into my room. I slammed the door, locking it behind me. I walked into my bathroom and turned the cold water on. I splashed my face with water. I looked on the counter and saw it there. It was mocking me. It glisened in the light. I grabbed it in my hands and pressed it against my wrist. I carefuly slid it on my wrist seven or eight times. I felt the blood dripping down my arm. I stuck my arm in the sink letting it wash down the blood. I turned off the faucet and picked up my phone. I dialed Vic. "Hello," someone said picking up. "Vic," I asked sniffeling. "No this is Mike, who is this," he said. "It's Stella, can you put Vic on," I said still sniffeling. "Sure thing Stells," he said putting him on. "Baby what's wrong," was the first thing Vic said. I started to cry. "I'm coming to get you. I'll text you when I'm at your house," he said hanging up. I sat there waiting for Vic. He texted me:
"I'm here mi amor."
I grabbed my sweat shirt and put it on. I zipped it up and pulled my hood over my head. I opened up the window and hopped out. I closed it behind me. Alex's car was in the driveway still which brought back the pain of the fight with my brother. I climbed down the side of my house into the front yard and sprinted for where Vic stood. I ran into his arms and he held me close to his body. I started crying again. "Shh," he said rubbing my back. Vic opened up the car door for me as I hopped in. He got behind the wheel and we headed off for his house.

Comments

So I originally found this on Mibba, but came over to this site once I saw it wasn't finished on there (and seeing you said you had a profile on here in an author's note), to see if you maybe finished it on here...
You didn't, which is a bummer. :( But you did get one more update up on here in comparison to Mibba, so that's something.
I really like what you have of this story, and bummed that you didn't continue/finish it. Especially after reading this last update; I had a feeling what all was between her and Vic was kind of rigged, but wasn't sure. Now... :O
I'm just wondering why Alex hates her so much. I mean, at first I thought it was because he liked her, so he teased her, but then he just started getting awfully harsh and then like almost took advantage of her... like WTF. I also can't believe Jack would be friends with him after seeing him hit his sister, just because he seemed "alright"... that was a bit weird.
But I think you're a really great writer, other than those missing factors. Some of those you were probably leading into explaining more and just didn't get to, which is really unfortunate.
If you ever find yourself wanting to write for this story again, I will be here to read. I also subscribed to it on Mibba too, although this seems to be the most up-to-date version. But regardless of which platform you post on, I will read. :) I think it's a really intriguing plot line and I would love to see how it all ends.
Hoping this comment will maybe inspire you to continue. If not, just wanted to let you know how much I have enjoyed this and just wanted to show you that people like me are still stumbling across your story. :)

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4/16/17
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11/12/13
wow i feel bad for her she was being played
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7/11/13
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Ellama Ellama
7/10/13
please update! (: